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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: In ''Ways of Life'', Garfield and other children were abused in a Dickensian orphanage with no authorities finding out from those that were adopted out until he ran away. Afterwards, no homeless shelter or other orphanage would take him due to him being dishevelled and, despite being nine years old, he was given a job at a restaurant. Garfield also never goes to a food bank or a soup kitchen or get food stamps.
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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: In ''Ways of Life'', Garfield and other children were abused in a Dickensian orphanage with no authorities finding out from those that were adopted out until he ran away. Afterwards, no homeless shelter or other orphanage would take him due to him being dishevelled and, despite being nine years old, he was given a job at a restaurant. Garfield also never goes to a food bank or a soup kitchen or get gets food stamps.
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* {{Bowdlerize}}: Surprisingly yes. The Website/DeviantArt version of ''Darkness of Dimensions'' contains a full-on sex scene in the 4th chapter that was cut from the Website/{{Fimfiction|DotNet}} version to avoid violating their guidelines.
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* {{Bowdlerize}}: Surprisingly yes. The Website/DeviantArt Platform/DeviantArt version of ''Darkness of Dimensions'' contains a full-on sex scene in the 4th chapter that was cut from the Website/{{Fimfiction|DotNet}} Platform/{{Fimfiction|DotNet}} version to avoid violating their guidelines.
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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/548123/friendship-is-failure-27-love-is-a-danger-zone Friendship is Failure #27- Love is a Danger Zone]]" - Strings, a very talented singer, is struggling with an incurable case of deep depression from heartbreak. When Twilight and Princess Cadance try to help him resolve his issues, they accidently turn him into an evil creature that intends to wipe out all Love in Equestria.
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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/548123/friendship-is-failure-27-love-is-a-danger-zone Friendship is Failure #27- #27: Love is a Danger Zone]]" - Strings, a very talented singer, is struggling with an incurable case of deep depression from heartbreak. When Twilight and Princess Cadance try to help him resolve his issues, they accidently turn him into an evil creature that intends to wipe out all Love in Equestria.
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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546976/friendship-is-failure-26-a-hearths-warming-battle Friendship is Failure 26: A Hearths Warming Battle]]" - A pony who feels he has nothing left to live for confides with Twilight to do him a favor she absolutely refuses, which results in the desperate pony taking things to the extreme!
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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546976/friendship-is-failure-26-a-hearths-warming-battle Friendship is Failure 26: #26: A Hearths Warming Battle]]" - A pony who feels he has nothing left to live for confides with Twilight to do him a favor she absolutely refuses, which results in the desperate pony taking things to the extreme!extreme!
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/548123/friendship-is-failure-27-love-is-a-danger-zone Friendship is Failure #27- Love is a Danger Zone]]" - Strings, a very talented singer, is struggling with an incurable case of deep depression from heartbreak. When Twilight and Princess Cadance try to help him resolve his issues, they accidently turn him into an evil creature that intends to wipe out all Love in Equestria.
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/548123/friendship-is-failure-27-love-is-a-danger-zone Friendship is Failure #27- Love is a Danger Zone]]" - Strings, a very talented singer, is struggling with an incurable case of deep depression from heartbreak. When Twilight and Princess Cadance try to help him resolve his issues, they accidently turn him into an evil creature that intends to wipe out all Love in Equestria.
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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546976/friendship-is-failure-26-a-hearths-warming-battle Friendship is Failure 26: A Hearths Warming battle]]" - A pony who feels he has nothing left to live for confides with Twilight to do him a favor she absolutely refuses, which results in the desperate pony taking things to the extreme!
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* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546976/friendship-is-failure-26-a-hearths-warming-battle Friendship is Failure 26: A Hearths Warming battle]]" Battle]]" - A pony who feels he has nothing left to live for confides with Twilight to do him a favor she absolutely refuses, which results in the desperate pony taking things to the extreme!
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/544903/friendship-is-failure-25-death-to-twilight Friendship is Failure #25: Death to Twilight]]'' Twilight messed up big time, and as a result she is paying the price when vengeful ponies trap her and Spike in a situation where they are doomed to perish if help does not arrive on time.
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/544903/friendship-is-failure-25-death-to-twilight Friendship is Failure #25: Death to Twilight]]'' - Twilight messed up big time, and as a result she is paying the price when vengeful ponies trap her and Spike in a situation where they are doomed to perish if help does not arrive on time.time.
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546976/friendship-is-failure-26-a-hearths-warming-battle Friendship is Failure 26: A Hearths Warming battle]]" - A pony who feels he has nothing left to live for confides with Twilight to do him a favor she absolutely refuses, which results in the desperate pony taking things to the extreme!
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546976/friendship-is-failure-26-a-hearths-warming-battle Friendship is Failure 26: A Hearths Warming battle]]" - A pony who feels he has nothing left to live for confides with Twilight to do him a favor she absolutely refuses, which results in the desperate pony taking things to the extreme!
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* TheHeroSucksSong: Stone Heart sings one of these to Twilight in ''Twilight in Therapy'' called "You're a Disgrace", based of the song "Failure Face" from ''WesternAnimation/ABoyNamedCharlieBrown''.
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* SuicideByCop: Logger Jack is a suicidal pony but has been unable to kill himself due to his previous attempts either [[BungledSuicide failing]] or [[ICannotSelfTerminate his fears getting the best of him]]. Because of this, he asks Twilight Sparkle to kill him. When she refuses this request, Jack uses a magic orb to trap both himself and Twilight in a forcefield and attacks her so that she'll have no choice but to kill him.
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** The ending of ''Death to Twilight Sparkle'' is based off [[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries The Batman Animated Series]] episode [[Recap/BatmanTheAnimatedSeriesE40IfYoureSoSmartWhyArentYouRich ''If You're So Smart Why Aren't You Rich'']]. Twilight is shown doing everything she can to keep the castle secure from intruders and both her and Spike are too paranoid to sleep in fear that the Star Sisters will return for them, just like Mockridge was in regards to The Riddler.
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** The ending of ''Death to Twilight Sparkle'' is based off [[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries ''[[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries The Batman Animated Series]] episode [[Recap/BatmanTheAnimatedSeriesE40IfYoureSoSmartWhyArentYouRich ''If If You're So Smart Why Aren't You Rich'']].Rich]]''. Twilight is shown doing everything she can to keep the castle secure from intruders and both her and Spike are too paranoid to sleep in fear that the Star Sisters will return for them, just like Mockridge was in regards to The Riddler.
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%%TO ALL MYKAN A-LOGS
%%MYKAN IS NOT HITLER
%%YOU ARE JUST WASTING YOUR TIME WITH YOUR PETTY VENDETTA AGAINST A MAN WITH A MENTAL DISABILITY
%%MYKAN IS NOT HITLER
%%YOU ARE JUST WASTING YOUR TIME WITH YOUR PETTY VENDETTA AGAINST A MAN WITH A MENTAL DISABILITY
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/544903/friendship-is-failure-25-death-to-twilight Friendship is Failure #25: Death to Twilight]]'' Twilight messed up big time, and as a result she is paying the price when vengeful ponies trap her and Spike in a situation where they are doomed to perish if help does not arrive on time.
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* [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/544903/friendship-is-failure-25-death-to-twilight Friendship is Failure #25: Death to Twilight]]'' Twilight messed up big time, and as a result she is paying the price when vengeful ponies trap her and Spike in a situation where they are doomed to perish if help does not arrive on time.
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** The ending of Death to Twilight Sparkle is based off [[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries The Batman Animated Series]] episode [[Recap/BatmanTheAnimatedSeriesE40IfYoureSoSmartWhyArentYouRich ''If You're So Smart Why Aren't You Rich'']]. Twilight is shown doing everything she can to keep the castle secure from intruders and both her and Spike are too paranoid to sleep in fear that the Star Sisters will return for them, just like Mockridge was in regards to The Riddler.
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** The ending of Death ''Death to Twilight Sparkle Sparkle'' is based off [[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries The Batman Animated Series]] episode [[Recap/BatmanTheAnimatedSeriesE40IfYoureSoSmartWhyArentYouRich ''If You're So Smart Why Aren't You Rich'']]. Twilight is shown doing everything she can to keep the castle secure from intruders and both her and Spike are too paranoid to sleep in fear that the Star Sisters will return for them, just like Mockridge was in regards to The Riddler.
