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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to the First Try Series or will each spinoff warrant their own page if need?
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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to the First Try Series or will each spinoff warrant their own page if needed?
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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/FirstTrySeries First Try Series]] or will each spinoff warrant their own page if need?
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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to the First Try Series or will each spinoff warrant their own page if need?
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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to the [[ https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/FirstTrySeries First Try Series]] or will each spinoff warrant their own page if need?
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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to the [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/FirstTrySeries First Try Series]] or will each spinoff warrant their own page if need?
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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to \'\'Fanfic/FirstTrySeries\'\' or will each spinoff warrant their own page if need?
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Since Son Kenshin mentions his desire to write spinoffs for War of the Bijuu, how much would they affect this page? Is it going to be a similar situation to the [[ https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/FirstTrySeries First Try Series]] or will each spinoff warrant their own page if need?
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The implications come mostly by proxy. It\'s effectively Blake who implies the connection between how he\'s been treated in the past with how he views the world and humanity now. When the audience sees his face, it\'s easy to make the connection. I think the entry just needs to be reworded. It tends to be written from the audience perspective -- us making the connection with his face. Off the top of my head, something like this (although I\'d suggest someone else rewrite it to be a better entry since I\'m just thinking on the hoof here):
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The implications come mostly by proxy. It\\\'s effectively Blake who implies the connection between how he\\\'s been treated in the past with how he views the world and humanity now. When the audience sees his face, it\\\'s easy to make the connection. I think the entry just needs to be reworded. It tends to be written from the audience perspective -- us making the connection with his face. However, it\\\'s supposed to be an objective trope, meaning we need to be pulling from the show, rather than our perceptions of the show.
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What I\\\'m trying to say is something like the following (but I suggest someone else rewrite it to be a better entry since I\\\'m just thinking on the hoof here):
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Blake initially describes Adam as a person who began with good intentions but who descended slowly into a monster, but she is shocked to learn during the Battle of Beacon that Adam has never been interested in equality between Faunus and Humans. She later tells Sun that she believes that Adam is spite personified, seeking to hurt humanity for hurting him. When High Leader Sienna and Adam argue about how the White Fang should be used to obtain equality for the Faunus, Sienna is horrified to learn that Adam reveals that he believes Faunus are superior to humanity and that he wants humanity broken beneath his feet and serving the Faunus. He has to murder Sienna to achieve this goal but his willingness to abandon his men to benefit himself causes even the White Fang to eventually turn on him. It\'s eventually revealed that Adam has been left disfigured with an SDC logo that has been burned across his face like a cattle brand. When Adam confronts Blake and Yang at Argus, he tries to dismiss his scarring as insignificant compared to the hurt Blake has caused by rejecting him. However, his violence drove her away and Yang observes that Blake only made promises to the man he was pretending to be instead of the man he really was. At no point does any character condone his actions or consider his beliefs to be justified, not even the characters who know of his past.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Blake initially describes Adam as a person who began with good intentions but who descended slowly into a monster, but she is shocked to learn during the Battle of Beacon that Adam has never been interested in equality between Faunus and Humans. She later tells Sun that she believes that Adam is spite personified, seeking to hurt humanity for hurting him. When High Leader Sienna and Adam argue about how the White Fang should be used to obtain equality for the Faunus, Sienna is horrified to learn that Adam reveals that he believes Faunus are superior to humanity and that he wants humanity broken beneath his feet and serving the Faunus. He has to murder Sienna to achieve this goal but his willingness to abandon his men to benefit himself causes even the White Fang to eventually turn on him. It\\\'s eventually revealed that Adam has been left disfigured with an SDC logo that has been burned across his face like a cattle brand. When Adam confronts Blake and Yang at Argus, he tries to dismiss his scarring as insignificant compared to the hurt Blake has caused by rejecting him. However, his violence drove her away and Yang observes that Blake only made promises to the man he was pretending to be instead of the man he really was. At no point does any character condone his actions or consider his beliefs to be justified, not even the characters who know of his past suffering.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Blake initially describes Adam as a person who began with good intentions but who descended slowly into a monster, but she is shocked to learn during the Battle of Beacon that Adam has never been interested in equality between Faunus and Humans. She later tells Sun that she believes that Adam is spite personified, seeking to hurt humanity for hurting him. When High Leader Sienna and Adam argue about how the White Fang should be used to obtain equality for the Faunus, Sienna is horrified to learn that Adam reveals that he believes Faunus are superior to humanity and that he wants humanity broken beneath his feet and serving the Faunus. He has to murder Sienna to achieve this goal but his willingness to abandon his men to benefit himself causes even the White Fang to eventually turn on him. It\'s eventually revealed that Adam has been left disfigured with an SDC logo that has been burned across his face like a cattle brand. When Adam confronts Blake and Yang at Argus, he tries to dismiss his scarring as insignificant compared to the hurt Blake has caused by rejecting him. However, his violence drove her away and Yang observes that Blake only made promises to the man he was pretending to be instead of the man he really was. At no point does any character condone his actions, not even the characters who know of his past.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Blake initially describes Adam as a person who began with good intentions but who descended slowly into a monster, but she is shocked to learn during the Battle of Beacon that Adam has never been interested in equality between Faunus and Humans. She later tells Sun that she believes that Adam is spite personified, seeking to hurt humanity for hurting him. When High Leader Sienna and Adam argue about how the White Fang should be used to obtain equality for the Faunus, Sienna is horrified to learn that Adam reveals that he believes Faunus are superior to humanity and that he wants humanity broken beneath his feet and serving the Faunus. He has to murder Sienna to achieve this goal but his willingness to abandon his men to benefit himself causes even the White Fang to eventually turn on him. It\\\'s eventually revealed that Adam has been left disfigured with an SDC logo that has been burned across his face like a cattle brand. When Adam confronts Blake and Yang at Argus, he tries to dismiss his scarring as insignificant compared to the hurt Blake has caused by rejecting him. However, his violence drove her away and Yang observes that Blake only made promises to the man he was pretending to be instead of the man he really was. At no point does any character condone his actions or consider his beliefs to be justified, not even the characters who know of his past.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Blake initially describes Adam as a person who began with good intentions but who descended slowly into a monster, but she is shocked to learn during the Battle of Beacon that Adam has never been interested in equality between Faunus and Humans. She later tells Sun that she believes that Adam is spite personified, seeking to hurt humanity for hurting him. When High Leader Sienna and Adam argue about how the White Fang should be used to obtain equality for the Faunus, Sienna is horrified to learn that Adam reveals that he believes Faunus are superior to humanity and that he wants humanity broken beneath his feet and serving the Faunus. He has to murder Sienna to achieve this goal but his willingness to abandon his men to benefit himself causes even the White Fang to eventually turn on him. It\'s eventually revealed that Adam has been left disfigured with an SDC logo that has been burned across his face like a cattle brand. When Adam confronts Blake and Yang at Argus, he tries to dismiss his scarring as insignificant compared to the hurt Blake has caused by rejecting him. However, his violence drove her away and Yang observes that she only made promises to the man he was pretending to be instead of the man he really was. At no point does any character condone his actions, not even the characters who know of his past.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Blake initially describes Adam as a person who began with good intentions but who descended slowly into a monster, but she is shocked to learn during the Battle of Beacon that Adam has never been interested in equality between Faunus and Humans. She later tells Sun that she believes that Adam is spite personified, seeking to hurt humanity for hurting him. When High Leader Sienna and Adam argue about how the White Fang should be used to obtain equality for the Faunus, Sienna is horrified to learn that Adam reveals that he believes Faunus are superior to humanity and that he wants humanity broken beneath his feet and serving the Faunus. He has to murder Sienna to achieve this goal but his willingness to abandon his men to benefit himself causes even the White Fang to eventually turn on him. It\\\'s eventually revealed that Adam has been left disfigured with an SDC logo that has been burned across his face like a cattle brand. When Adam confronts Blake and Yang at Argus, he tries to dismiss his scarring as insignificant compared to the hurt Blake has caused by rejecting him. However, his violence drove her away and Yang observes that Blake only made promises to the man he was pretending to be instead of the man he really was. At no point does any character condone his actions, not even the characters who know of his past.
