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I guess I'll just start a general
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I guess I\'ll just start a general \"add/remove an example\" thread here.
To wit, I think the entry for BothSidesHaveAPoint should be discussed. The entry was removed because \"it basically said \'feminism is bad, but she mentioned she used to be one,\'\" except it didn\'t say that at all. It doesn\'t mention anything negative about feminism at all. If anything is being criticized in the example, it\'s Cassie Jaye when the example points out that she started making the film to \"attack\" the MRA movement.
I think we could add the example back since it\'s a valid example and it was removed for a reason that doesn\'t apply.
Here\'s the original:
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While the film focuses on the Men\'s Rights Movement given their comparative underepresenation in media (though she initially made the film to attack the Men\'s Rights Movement), she still concedes at the beginning of filmaking that the Men\'s Right Movement had a point and while ceasing to be a feminist Cassie admitted they have at least a few legitimate grievances.
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Here\'s my suggestion:
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The film focuses on the Men\'s Rights Movement because of their comparative under-representation in media and because Cassie -- who was a feminist at the start of filming -- wanted to criticize the movement. Even at the beginning of filmmaking, she admits that the Men\'s Rights Movement has a point and that MRA\'s have a few legitimate grievances.
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To wit, I think the entry for BothSidesHaveAPoint should be discussed. The entry was removed because \"it basically said \'feminism is bad, but she mentioned she used to be one,\'\" except it didn\'t say that at all. It doesn\'t mention anything negative about feminism at all. If anything is being criticized in the example, it\'s Cassie Jaye when the example points out that she started making the film to \"attack\" the MRA movement.
I think we could add the example back since it\'s a valid example and it was removed for a reason that doesn\'t apply.
Here\'s the original:
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While the film focuses on the Men\'s Rights Movement given their comparative underepresenation in media (though she initially made the film to attack the Men\'s Rights Movement), she still concedes at the beginning of filmaking that the Men\'s Right Movement had a point and while ceasing to be a feminist Cassie admitted they have at least a few legitimate grievances.
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Here\'s my suggestion:
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The film focuses on the Men\'s Rights Movement because of their comparative under-representation in media and because Cassie -- who was a feminist at the start of filming -- wanted to criticize the movement. Even at the beginning of filmmaking, she admits that the Men\'s Rights Movement has a point and that MRA\'s have a few legitimate grievances.
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