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*Hermione Granger in ''Film/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire''. '''One of the many reasons why the script was so awful is that it appears when writing Hermione's lines, they wrote them out normally before getting out a thesaurus and changing all the words to make her sound smart.''' Examples include
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*Hermione Granger in \'\'Film/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire\'\'. \'\'\'One of the many reasons why the script was so awful is that it appears when writing Hermione\'s lines, they wrote them out normally before getting out a thesaurus and changing all the words to make her sound smart.\'\'\' Examples include \"Viktor\'s more of a physical being. I mean, he\'s not particularly loquacious\"; \"Again obvious though potentially problematic\". This isn\'t present in the other films though.
Removed the bold part due to it seeming a tad too subjective for a main page (even bringing up a judgement of quality, which seems to be generally frowned in in main pages).
Removed the bold part due to it seeming a tad too subjective for a main page (even bringing up a judgement of quality, which seems to be generally frowned in in main pages).
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*Hermione Granger in ''Film/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire''. One of the many reasons why the script was so awful is that it appears when writing Hermione's lines, they wrote them out normally before getting out a thesaurus and changing all the words to make her sound smart. Examples include
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*Hermione Granger in \'\'Film/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire\'\'. \'\'\'One of the many reasons why the script was so awful is that it appears when writing Hermione\'s lines, they wrote them out normally before getting out a thesaurus and changing all the words to make her sound smart.\'\'\' Examples include \"Viktor\'s more of a physical being. I mean, he\'s not particularly loquacious\"; \"Again obvious though potentially problematic\". This isn\'t present in the other films though.
The second sentence is blatantly presenting an opinion as objective fact, which (correct me if I\'m wrong) doesn\'t belong outside YMMV (especially a judgment of quality, that classic natter/flame bait lure.) I
The second sentence is blatantly presenting an opinion as objective fact, which (correct me if I\'m wrong) doesn\'t belong outside YMMV (especially a judgment of quality, that classic natter/flame bait lure.) I
