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Lightblade The Shrouded Knight from Philadelphia Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Owner of a lonely heart
The Shrouded Knight
#133926: Jun 26th 2016 at 9:48:49 AM

In my mind, when you're hundreds of years old, like Mamizou, and have spent all those years actively always screwing with people, then that character better be amazingly good at it, and not written so badly/averagely that every average reader is smarter than that character.

I feel that it's not actually possible to write a character with superhuman intelligence without it being just an Informed Ability, simply by virtue of the fact that Most Writers Are Human. If the author is human and they came up with the character's plan, then it obviously doesn't require superhuman intelligence, does it?

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TropayXion The i. one. from HEART Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
The i. one.
#133927: Jun 26th 2016 at 10:22:30 AM

Well, the writer would have the advantage of time and possibly outside-input to come up with said plan, as well as place obstacles in-story that would make the execution of said plan seem super-human in-story.

Actually doing that well would be another matter entirely, though.

FellDeedsAwake Since: Mar, 2010
#133928: Jun 26th 2016 at 10:53:01 AM

[up][up], [up] Oh yes, you make very good points smile But I agree more with Roxas: given a lot of time and creativity, a good writer who is serious about portraying a superhumanly smart char should at least be able to construct a scheme/plan for that char that makes everyone in the audience go "Holy crap!! How could anyone think this up? I never saw this coming!" That should be doable (not for me, obviously, but, as I said, for a good writer). Spontaneous examples that come to my mind: Leto II's ultimate plan in God-Emperor of Dune (pretty much everyone in the Duniverse, actually); everything Frau Totenkinder does in Fables; the plan of the antagonist in Watchmen.

AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
No, the other one.
#133929: Jun 26th 2016 at 11:02:11 AM

The thing you can do as a writer is to set up the premise so that the plan works, which can easily make the plan look far more complex than it really is. If you spot one part of the plan that could potentially have a secondary effect, you can change the situation so that that effect is necessary, so it looks just according to keikakuTranslator's note .

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MajorTom Since: Dec, 2009
#133930: Jun 26th 2016 at 3:35:26 PM

Wait a minute, is Keine a superhero?

She is now.

TheMageofFire Since: May, 2012
#133931: Jun 26th 2016 at 5:00:21 PM

THE END OF THE MASQUERADE TRILOGY.

Inside of this there's a lot of my thoughts on the end of this, but I'll get a few more out here.

While there's been little in the way of comments on my story since Otherarrow kind of just disappeared from the face of the Earth, sadly, I do feel as though I (hopefully) haven't offended anyone by continuing to post my fic here. I mostly did it because this feels like the best place to get attention for Touhou fiction outside of the Maiden of the Kaleidoscope forum.

I'm not looking for attention when I ask..."Was it annoying for anyone that I kept posting this fic here?" Just want to satiate some curiosity on the matter.

I'm not going to stop posting here now that the story is done, but I don't know if the next time I do a Touhou story, which is ultimately tying into my grand narrative of my main fic series Clash of the Elements, I'll actually post it here.

Truth be told, it comes down to the fact that where the story is heading is not going to be a pleasant one and while I want to assure people who may or may not be reading it that I'll be doing what I'm doing for the sake of telling a story more than any deep-down vile towards the Touhou series, I'm also ultimately speaking from the biased view point of an author. I got a while to think about this truthfully, but in the mean time this is basically the end of the Masquerade Trilogy...A good if not long three years of thinking, outlining, and writing.

Durazno Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
#133932: Jun 26th 2016 at 5:55:34 PM

I haven't been annoyed, but I do the same thing.

MajorTom Since: Dec, 2009
#133933: Jun 26th 2016 at 7:56:26 PM

New Jetto Komusou Comic. In this one, mathematics and relatives.

The answer to Sakuya's math question is 12 minutes from when the first brother left and 6 minutes from when the second left and they will meet at a distance traveled of 360 meters.

Bocaj Funny but not helpful from Here or thereabouts (4 Score & 7 Years Ago) Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
MetaflarePrime Yubi yubi! from Bed Since: Aug, 2013 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
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#133935: Jun 26th 2016 at 10:13:04 PM

took me a bit to remember who yumeko was

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Antimatter625 Baring hearts for years from my secret place Since: Jan, 2012
Baring hearts for years
#133936: Jun 27th 2016 at 3:12:40 PM

in this one, it was just "I wanna meet the person who seems oddly interested in this story so I can tell her how awesome tanuki are.

And near the end, I was wondering if Akyuu had set up the whole novel thing to try and get whatever youkai -clearly- must have been behind the inspiring story to confess/accuse her, so she'd be able to put the mystery to rest. And that's exactly what happened, though I no longer think that was Akyuu's original plan.

Truly, the most convoluted plans are the ones we make up when we expect someone has one. The best way to have a mastermind's plan go 'perfectly' in a tabletop campaign is to have an inciting incident, then just listen to the player's insane logic about what happened and why. Add a bit here and there, tie all their crazy theories together, and you can come up with a convoluted yet entirely reasonable plan.

Which is basically how I tend to write my superhuman-intellect characters: basically crowd-source their intellect. Put another way, even someone with superhuman intelligence may have trouble out-thinking a dozen intelligent people.

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Bocaj Funny but not helpful from Here or thereabouts (4 Score & 7 Years Ago) Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Funny but not helpful
#133939: Jun 28th 2016 at 2:29:49 PM

Comfy hell creatures.

Edit: Reading together.

edited 28th Jun '16 5:46:23 PM by Bocaj

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GiantCaveMushroom Since: May, 2014
#133941: Jun 30th 2016 at 12:10:13 AM

I don't particularly care about shipping, but for some reason I just thought that if Reimu and Reisen ever gets shipped it should be called 'ReiGun'.

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MajorTom Since: Dec, 2009
#133942: Jun 30th 2016 at 4:42:01 AM

^ You and I are now mortal enemies over that pun. Okay, maybe not mortal enemies but that pun was absolutely terrible!

edited 30th Jun '16 4:42:39 AM by MajorTom

rmctagg09 The Wanderer from Brooklyn, NY (USA) (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: I won't say I'm in love
The Wanderer
#133943: Jun 30th 2016 at 1:19:30 PM

Summary of this year's chapter of Curiosities of Lotus Asia

So if the translation's at least mostly correct:

  • Rinnosuke and Sumireko have made pretty good friends over the past year.
  • Kasen shows up and it turns out Sumireko's been supplying her with Outside World items. That, and Reimu and Marisa have been keeping an eye on her to make sure she she doesn't try any Urban Legend in Limbo-type shenanigans again.
  • Sumireko's Sealing Club activities have begun in earnest, starting with Gensokyo's occult spots, which Kasen has been showing her.
  • Sumireko is still trying to figure out a way to get inside Gensokyo outside of her dreams.

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FellDeedsAwake Since: Mar, 2010
#133944: Jun 30th 2016 at 3:41:51 PM

[up] OMG thanks for linkin', I love all of this! surprised[tup]

Also: YES FINALLY after sooo much time, I finally have an 10-minute-version of Kasen's amazing ULIL Theme! gringrin For years(?), we only ever had 3-minute ones and a like 20-minute one. I'm happy.

edited 30th Jun '16 4:00:38 PM by FellDeedsAwake

Clarste One Winged Egret Since: Jun, 2009 Relationship Status: Non-Canon
One Winged Egret
#133945: Jun 30th 2016 at 4:23:54 PM

Oh hey, Strange Creators has an ebook version. People should go buy it.

Clarste One Winged Egret Since: Jun, 2009 Relationship Status: Non-Canon
One Winged Egret
#133946: Jun 30th 2016 at 4:38:27 PM

Ha, it includes the protagonists rating all the bosses from EOSD to IN. Reimu doesn't even remember fighting Rumia or Cirno. She gives Mystia a 9/10 for the gimmick though.

Clarste One Winged Egret Since: Jun, 2009 Relationship Status: Non-Canon
One Winged Egret
#133947: Jun 30th 2016 at 5:08:27 PM

As you might expect, there are new character introduction pages, this time focusing on the bosses of ESOD through IN. I'll be summarizing the ZUN commentary here, for my own sinister purposes. There's actually even more ZUN commentary on the bosses in another place but oh well. For the record, he says that Keine was the first boss he made using his modern sensibilities.

Remilia + Flandre:

Even though this is "Touhou" ("Eastern"), I still wanted to throw in Western bosses so they ended up being vampires. ESOD used the theme of being "unexpected" a lot, so that's what tied everything together. Although it's not that uncommon these days, I made the vampires look young because I thought the gap between being long-lived and youthful was interesting. As for Flandre, at the time the idea was that the extra stage had no meaning other than being a bonus stage, so I just made her the sister of a main game boss because why not. That's also why she's completely different from her sister, both in personality and appearance. As for her wings... it's not like vampires need to have wings in the first place, and the basic image is bat wings, so I just gave her something different. It was about being unexpected; ie: anything goes. Her danmaku has a lot of references to mystery novels because the gothic atmosphere goes well with vampires, I guess?

edited 30th Jun '16 6:23:15 PM by Clarste

Clarste One Winged Egret Since: Jun, 2009 Relationship Status: Non-Canon
One Winged Egret
#133948: Jun 30th 2016 at 5:14:30 PM

Meiling:

EOSD used a lot of Western things, and other than vampires the most famous Western monster would be dragons (written in English). But since dragons also exist in the East, I took that thought and put it into Meiling...'s hat. I was continuously trying to come up with ways to be unexpected, so I thought a Chinese girl guarding a Western mansion might work. And that's where Meiling comes from.

GM_3826 (Not) A Game Master from Ylisse Since: May, 2014 Relationship Status: In Spades with myself
(Not) A Game Master
#133949: Jun 30th 2016 at 5:17:59 PM

*laughs until the end of time*

Clarste One Winged Egret Since: Jun, 2009 Relationship Status: Non-Canon
One Winged Egret
#133950: Jun 30th 2016 at 5:21:47 PM

Patchouli:

An easy to understand opponent who uses magic to attack. Anyway, I wanted to make a character who had a system behind their attacks, especially one that would seem to have a full department store of techniques. Magic is easy to understand, right? It draws on the depth of games. My personal image of a magician is someone who's strong without needing to move, and so weak physically that they don't go out much, so that's what she is.


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