TargetmasterJoe
Since: May, 2013
#2: May 23rd 2017 at 8:46:10 PM
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NegaKingKix
The Absolute Madman
from That one place we don't talk about anymore
Since: Jan, 2015
Relationship Status: Buried in snow, waiting for spring
The Absolute Madman
#3: May 24th 2017 at 3:05:24 AM
Seems really roughly done and the jokes are pretty flat plus Master Pickles voice is like nails on a chalkboard, but I really saw it as a parody of Chinese cartoons. 6/10
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JoshuAnimations
Since: May, 2017
#4: May 24th 2017 at 2:23:02 PM
Thanks Target Master Joe ahahha I have no idea what I'm doing ahha! I'm the biggest noob on this site haha! And thanks for the feedback Nega King Kix!
NegaKingKix
The Absolute Madman
from That one place we don't talk about anymore
Since: Jan, 2015
Relationship Status: Buried in snow, waiting for spring
The Absolute Madman
#5: May 24th 2017 at 5:21:55 PM
No problem, mate. Hope to see you improve.
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Hey everyone! I have never been on here before but I have heard about this site hah! For the longest time I was working on my animated pilot and have finally finished it two days ago! Since I'm a noob and have no idea how to use the TV Tropes forums yet haha, Targetmaster Joe was able to get the video up for me below, thanks again! So there it is in case you want to check it out, thanks!!
edited 24th May '17 2:36:37 PM by JoshuAnimations