Can't look at the suggestion right now, but I don't think the current is bad enough to pull without replacement.
Here's eerock's suggestion uploaded to TVTropes.◊ I'd say it's an improvement over what's on the page.
That works better than the current.
Check out my fanfiction!for suggestion.
Twitter/Instagram: anzasquiddles. Deviantart: anzahanifathallah.Yep, that's an improvement.
Bumping after a week... should we go ahead and switch it for now?
Yeah, this has gathered enough dust, let's roll with it.
Page images switched... how's "you see, the plan was that I would eat you..." for a caption?
^ I like it.
Twitter/Instagram: anzasquiddles. Deviantart: anzahanifathallah.For the record, the punchline wasn't one I came up with myself, just one from the webcomic which I figured would make a good caption.
edited 21st Sep '16 1:23:41 PM by neoYTPism
Alternatively, such a caption could be potholed to the context of the page image.
edited 22nd Sep '16 12:46:25 PM by neoYTPism
Not enough consensus on the caption; locking up.
Current doesn't do much to illustrate the trope. How about third panel of [1]?