The name makes it sound like it's about anything that causes paralysis, when the description makes it clear it's actually about people using pressure points to paralyze others. I suggest changing the name to something that makes the trope's definition clearer, like "Pressure Point Paralysis" or "Pressure Point Paralyzer". It even has Added Alliterative Appeal.
EDIT: Why is this thread already locked? I just posted it.
The name makes it sound like it's about anything that causes paralysis, when the description makes it clear it's actually about people using pressure points to paralyze others. I suggest changing the name to something that makes the trope's definition clearer, like "Pressure Point Paralysis" or "Pressure Point Paralyzer". It even has Added Alliterative Appeal.
EDIT: Why is this thread already locked? I just posted it.
edited 18th Aug '16 5:55:03 PM by MJTrooper