creation myths dealing with mother nature

recently, i made a roleplay thread explaining the lore behind the world i Constructed. when i skimmed through the paragraphs i was thinking of maybe rework the part where the elementals and push it back when gaea was forming the earth to give them more purpose.last but not least, i also need suggest on developing the myth a bit more and expanded the lore for it to make more sense to me and also anyone reading it. you can take a peek by clicking on my signature( that thread is meant for signs ups so post what you think here)

First, I hope you don't mind my asking: Are you more fluent in any languages other than English? And/Or do you have a disability that comes out in written communication?

oh boy. i was born in america pretty much. it's just that maybe i just have trouble with a learning few areas of grammar. no wonder no one wants to listen to me.

At least you have ideas about characters, motivations, and events. Without keeping to standards of grammar, though, it is going to be difficult as you've noticed.