Good for you.
Ugh... two weeks in, and I only finished the rough draft.
edited 14th Aug '14 3:44:22 PM by ChefFailure
"When I was alive, I was a tender soul. Now, I am tenderloin." -Nanako (Senryuu Shoujo)"— and that's how Anna learned you never should decide you're going to marry a man and devote your whole life to him after knowing him for less than one day," Elsa finished her story, politely setting her emptied goblet down. She smiled gently. "And how I learned you never should let your own insecurities cloud your... hmmmm," she stopped herself. "Have I said anything I shouldn't have?"
Aurora, Snow, Cinderella, Ariel and Jasmine all quietly stared at her across the banquet table.
Anna rasped and stood up. "If you'll excuse me... I think I need to go refresh myself..."
I assume after all that, the other princesses ran into the bathroom to cry.
Of course, don't you know anything about ALCHEMY?!- Twin clones of Ivan the GreatWell, Belle did have a longer period to get to know her man, so she should be off the hook.
And it's not like Jasmine had a choice.
Technically, Aurora didn't either, when you look at it.
/Joker voice/ If I try to write a clever plot, well-developed characters, witty dialogue, nobody cares... But if I drop one little hint that Elsa might be gay, then everyone loses their minds!
edited 16th Aug '14 3:01:04 PM by spashthebandragon
I've got fanfics for Frozen, Spectacular Spider-Man, Crash Bandicoot, and Spyro the Dragon.Anna sighed. "Okay. Before we continue discussing this topic, and before either I convince you to go back with me or you forcibly toss me out, and believe me, it's going to be the former, can I use your bathroom? I've been holding on for hours all the way up this mountain..."
"Oh... sure thing," Elsa nodded. "Go down those stairs, then two doors to the left after you reach the bottom."
"Thank you!" Anna said before rushing down those stairs.
After a few moments of waiting, Elsa was startled by a sudden shrill scream.
A short while later, Elsa peeked out her front door and told Kristoff and Olaf, "Would you please wait a little longer? It seems Anna is... stuck... for the moment."
Kristoff blinked. "Stuck, how?"
Anna's next scream shook the frozen hills. "EVEN THE TOILET, ELSA?! EVEN THE DARN TOILET?! YOU REALLY NEED HEL— OH GOD, THE PAPER AS WELL!!!!"
OT, but eh, Disney Princesses related, still.
"Ah, Mushu," Mulan said as soon as she saw him walking back in. "How did it go?"
He made a gesture of pure frustration. "Don't ask me about it! Poor Cousin, always big in size, but so small of mind...! Just like the whole European branch of the family! It's bad enough she's marrying a donkey, but I had no idea a donkey could be that obnoxious, unfunny, annoying, bothersome—"
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"— useless, stupid, dumb, idiotic, nosy and God, what an ugly, unbearable voice, too!" Donkey summed up, slamming both fore hooves against the table. That sent some of the green, slimy contents of Shrek's plate splattering against his face. "Oops, sorry. You eating that?"
Shrek grunted, scooped the thick stain on his face up, and nosiily licked it off his fingers. "Yes. Yes, I am."
"Oh. Anyway, that's why I plan visiting China as little as possible! That, and the language barrier is really too much..."
"Wait a minute," Fionna said. "You weren't even understanding—"
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"— what the other one was saying?" Shang asked him.
Mushu shrugged. "I really didn't need to. Geez, if I had understood him, I'd have tolerated him even less! So, um, are you eating that?"
Aha, I remember this. I mentioned that I drew one as a frame of reference long ago.
S'a little goofy-looking, but meh.
edited 18th Aug '14 2:14:44 PM by ChefFailure
"When I was alive, I was a tender soul. Now, I am tenderloin." -Nanako (Senryuu Shoujo)I might get around to scanning my own fanfic sketches and showing them off one of these days, but for now I'm too lazy.
edited 19th Aug '14 1:23:14 PM by spashthebandragon
I've got fanfics for Frozen, Spectacular Spider-Man, Crash Bandicoot, and Spyro the Dragon.I LIVE </mulan>
One day I might do a sketch of Frozen Heart.
That is, if I can figure out what its head should look like without it looking narmy. As well if I can get the hang of drawing the Power Fist in such a way that it doesn't look too bulky and hits that balance between looking like a lump of pain while not making the mech look lopsided.
The Atlas 'mech sounds like a good place to start.
Of course, don't you know anything about ALCHEMY?!- Twin clones of Ivan the GreatI do love me some Mechwarrior (hence why Russia's got a Marshal Kerensky), but I don't think the skullface design really works for it. Too bulky like a football player. Currently envisioning something like a beakie helm, but thinner maybe, so it's like Olaf's head with the carrot nose. Or something shaped like the centerpiece to Elsa's crown (teardrop design with the viewing glass being where the centerpiece is).
In that case, the best influence is obvious, for the head anyways:
You can try this idea for the Power Fist.
"When I was alive, I was a tender soul. Now, I am tenderloin." -Nanako (Senryuu Shoujo)By the way, I'm not going to quadruple post, so if nobody posts in this thread again, I'm going to start editing updates into this post. I know someone a few pages back said they'd rather me double post then edit posts for updates, but tough beans. I'm not quadruple posting.
I've got fanfics for Frozen, Spectacular Spider-Man, Crash Bandicoot, and Spyro the Dragon.Bleep-blop, helpful post.
They do have medals for almost, and they're called silver!Thanks!
Beat.
Wait, dang it, now I'll still be double-posting...
I've got fanfics for Frozen, Spectacular Spider-Man, Crash Bandicoot, and Spyro the Dragon.Now that I've read the Chapter...
Hrmm.
On the one hand, instinctive distrust of this Daniel guy. Seems too perfect, like Anna said.
On the other hand, I'm sure you're better than just recreating Hans.
On the same hand, I'm pretty sure he's the same guy from the flashbacks. So, he must/probably is an actual good guy.
Back to the first hand, I was damn sure Daniel was Agdar's brother.
Well, I think it was still sufficiently surprising, so it's fine.
Also, looking back over my writing, I realize I'm a really big fan of having jerks say horribly offensive things to Elsa to provoke her into being awesome.
EDIT: SWEET MOTHER OF OAKEN'S FACIAL HAIR, I just realized that if I filter all the Frozen fanfics by number of reviews, mine is on the FIRST PAGE! This is cause for celebration!
edited 14th Aug '14 10:27:58 AM by spashthebandragon
I've got fanfics for Frozen, Spectacular Spider-Man, Crash Bandicoot, and Spyro the Dragon.