...without being a Sue?
I'm trying to write a short story with a main character with most Sue traits-odd eye/hair colors, So Beautiful, It's a Curse
,et cetera. Could this concievably work? To give you a taste of the story, here's the first couple lines:
'hi my naem is belladonna costello sde rubyhart ans io am six teen yeasr oeld and i jahve purlpe eyes like settimng suns and glkistening white,blonde hare as shere as fabric and evertybodu luvs me!!!'
"That is the worst story I have ever seen. EVER."
"It can't be that bad!"
"It is. Throw it away now or I'll do it for you."
"No, I WANT that!" Belladonna lunged for the piece of paper as Anna giggled wildly. "It's based on you! LOVE IT MY GOD!"
So, yeah. The idea of a bad fanfic subverted.
edited 26th Mar '13 7:45:40 AM by Palindromee