Changing my vote.
Opening line: There was only seven days left.
Closing line: But for what?
"And you must be Jonathan Joestar!" - SueAre we allowed to vote for our own lines?
Because if so I vote 16 for both opener and closer.
Otherwise I vote 1 for opener and 16 for closer.
edited 8th Apr '13 4:14:14 AM by porschelemans
I'm so sorry that my avatar doesn't appear fully in the shot, but the cat was threatening the photographer....Didn't we want to do this via randomiser?
Complicated - because simple is simply too simple.Some of these lines seem a little too... speculative fiction-specific. While I love those genres, and the majority of my own output is sci-fi/fantasy/horror , do we want to limit these stories so much?
Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent.I don't think any of them are particularly Speculative Fiction specific. Even if a line mentions something a bit speculative fiction sounding it is only one line; and if it's only one line then it could quite easily be a metaphor, in a story generally unrelated to Speculative Fiction.
I'm so sorry that my avatar doesn't appear fully in the shot, but the cat was threatening the photographer.For a first line, I'm inclined to vote for 1, 2 (I'm a little biased here, I'll admit ^^; ), 4, 5 and 9.
For a last line, I'm inclined to vote for 5 and 10.
(Once again, perhaps a crowner to encourage votes from those inclined to press a button or two but not to write out a post?)
My Games & WritingAh, thank you! My votes are cast, I believe. ^_^
My Games & WritingI cast my votes.
Officially voted
Level 3 Social Justice Necromancer. Chaotic Good.I'm leaning toward the "And now I stand proudly in the one place I never meant to be." line. It can work both literally and metaphorically, and maybe even both. It can also work as an Ironic Echo.
@imadinosaur: Too speculative-fiction specific? Forgive me, but I don't really see it, save perhaps for Ending Line no. 14. I'm curious about what led you to this impression.
"And every life is a special story of its own." —The Stargazer, Mass Effect 3Actually, I wasn't thinking in literal terms with that Raging Beast line. I was more thinking of... A crazed dictator with WM Ds, or a small child in a restaurant...
I'm so sorry that my avatar doesn't appear fully in the shot, but the cat was threatening the photographer.Both crowners have one in the lead.
Considering that when I just now checked, the closings crowner had a tie at the top again, I don't think the crowners are settled yet.
Vote cast. Sorry.
edited 10th Apr '13 10:10:39 AM by montmorencey
Complicated - because simple is simply too simple.And now I have an idea for a story involving the top-voted Opening and Ending lines and The Ring
edited 10th Apr '13 10:27:03 AM by Psyga315
Make it a comedy and have Samara/Sadako say the closing line. :P
My Games & WritingIronically, I was considering making it a Home Alone-style Slapstick Comedy, but the closing line would belong to the supposed victim of Sadako.
edited 10th Apr '13 4:01:05 PM by Psyga315
So...erm...have we reached a decision on the opening and closing lines? Anyone?
"And every life is a special story of its own." —The Stargazer, Mass Effect 3This is just about going nowhere...
Perhaps not my authority, but I (informally) declare the crowners be closed, and the most voted line from both crowners are decided to be used for the writing contest.
'I've always said I wouldn't regret my decisions - not even this one.' and 'And now I stand proudly in the one place I never meant to be.' are the two lines. You can have these lines spoken as dialogue, as narration, as a line from a book a character reads in-story, or however creative you want to get with them. Switching pronouns is NOT an option(We can change this if needed be, but really, I don't think that's necessary). So whoever it is that creates the actual contest thread, ya might as well do so now, I guess? Don't wanna have eager writers waitin' any longer.
"And you must be Jonathan Joestar!" - SueOh, I do like those winning lines. They allow for a good deal of flexibility in terms of concept, methinks. Thanks for galvanizing the contest; I'd be lying if I said I wasn't getting impatient! I dunno who it is who's going to create the actual thread, either, but I look forward to it.
edited 16th Apr '13 11:37:36 AM by BrotherMycroft
"And every life is a special story of its own." —The Stargazer, Mass Effect 3Is there a word limit?
In the past, the rule has been that the entries must be between 2,000 and 5,000 words.
When I first met her, she bit me. And no one ate dinner that night.
Level 3 Social Justice Necromancer. Chaotic Good.