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nekomoon14 from Oakland, CA Since: Oct, 2010
#151: Apr 7th 2013 at 11:07:36 PM

When I first met her, she bit me. And no one ate dinner that night.

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danna45 Owner of Dead End from Wagnaria Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
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#152: Apr 8th 2013 at 1:42:53 AM

Changing my vote.

Opening line: There was only seven days left.

Closing line: But for what?

"And you must be Jonathan Joestar!" - Sue
porschelemans Avatar Sakaki Ignore cat from A Giant Hamster Ball Since: Sep, 2012 Relationship Status: You're a beautiful woman, probably
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#153: Apr 8th 2013 at 4:08:16 AM

Are we allowed to vote for our own lines?

Because if so I vote 16 for both opener and closer.

Otherwise I vote 1 for opener and 16 for closer.

edited 8th Apr '13 4:14:14 AM by porschelemans

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montmorencey So...yeah. from the quaint town of Grimm, Bismarck and Gauss Since: Aug, 2011
So...yeah.
#154: Apr 8th 2013 at 4:56:02 AM

...Didn't we want to do this via randomiser?

Complicated - because simple is simply too simple.
imadinosaur Since: Oct, 2011
#155: Apr 8th 2013 at 5:19:32 AM

Some of these lines seem a little too... speculative fiction-specific. While I love those genres, and the majority of my own output is sci-fi/fantasy/horror , do we want to limit these stories so much?

Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent.
porschelemans Avatar Sakaki Ignore cat from A Giant Hamster Ball Since: Sep, 2012 Relationship Status: You're a beautiful woman, probably
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#156: Apr 8th 2013 at 5:33:04 AM

I don't think any of them are particularly Speculative Fiction specific. Even if a line mentions something a bit speculative fiction sounding it is only one line; and if it's only one line then it could quite easily be a metaphor, in a story generally unrelated to Speculative Fiction.

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ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#157: Apr 8th 2013 at 8:37:47 AM

For a first line, I'm inclined to vote for 1, 2 (I'm a little biased here, I'll admit ^^; ), 4, 5 and 9.

For a last line, I'm inclined to vote for 5 and 10.

(Once again, perhaps a crowner to encourage votes from those inclined to press a button or two but not to write out a post?)

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ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#159: Apr 8th 2013 at 10:34:45 AM

Ah, thank you! My votes are cast, I believe. ^_^

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Hermiethefrog Since: Jan, 2001
nekomoon14 from Oakland, CA Since: Oct, 2010
#161: Apr 8th 2013 at 12:39:13 PM

Officially votedwaii

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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#162: Apr 8th 2013 at 1:05:27 PM

I'm leaning toward the "And now I stand proudly in the one place I never meant to be." line. It can work both literally and metaphorically, and maybe even both. It can also work as an Ironic Echo.

BrotherMycroft Dapper Gentleman Since: Jul, 2012
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#163: Apr 8th 2013 at 1:24:09 PM

@imadinosaur: Too speculative-fiction specific? Forgive me, but I don't really see it, save perhaps for Ending Line no. 14. I'm curious about what led you to this impression.

"And every life is a special story of its own." —The Stargazer, Mass Effect 3
porschelemans Avatar Sakaki Ignore cat from A Giant Hamster Ball Since: Sep, 2012 Relationship Status: You're a beautiful woman, probably
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#164: Apr 8th 2013 at 4:01:12 PM

Actually, I wasn't thinking in literal terms with that Raging Beast line. I was more thinking of... A crazed dictator with WM Ds, or a small child in a restaurant...

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Parable Since: Aug, 2009
#165: Apr 10th 2013 at 9:08:30 AM

Both crowners have one in the lead.

Nocturna Since: May, 2011
#166: Apr 10th 2013 at 10:09:02 AM

[up] Considering that when I just now checked, the closings crowner had a tie at the top again, I don't think the crowners are settled yet.

montmorencey So...yeah. from the quaint town of Grimm, Bismarck and Gauss Since: Aug, 2011
So...yeah.
#167: Apr 10th 2013 at 10:10:19 AM

Vote cast. Sorry.

edited 10th Apr '13 10:10:39 AM by montmorencey

Complicated - because simple is simply too simple.
Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#168: Apr 10th 2013 at 10:26:55 AM

And now I have an idea for a story involving the top-voted Opening and Ending lines and The Ring [lol]

edited 10th Apr '13 10:27:03 AM by Psyga315

ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#169: Apr 10th 2013 at 3:52:20 PM

[up] Make it a comedy and have Samara/Sadako say the closing line. :P

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Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#170: Apr 10th 2013 at 4:00:42 PM

[up] Ironically, I was considering making it a Home Alone-style Slapstick Comedy, but the closing line would belong to the supposed victim of Sadako.

edited 10th Apr '13 4:01:05 PM by Psyga315

BrotherMycroft Dapper Gentleman Since: Jul, 2012
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#171: Apr 13th 2013 at 6:08:49 PM

So...erm...have we reached a decision on the opening and closing lines? Anyone?

"And every life is a special story of its own." —The Stargazer, Mass Effect 3
danna45 Owner of Dead End from Wagnaria Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
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#172: Apr 16th 2013 at 12:22:00 AM

This is just about going nowhere...

Perhaps not my authority, but I (informally) declare the crowners be closed, and the most voted line from both crowners are decided to be used for the writing contest.

'I've always said I wouldn't regret my decisions - not even this one.' and 'And now I stand proudly in the one place I never meant to be.' are the two lines. You can have these lines spoken as dialogue, as narration, as a line from a book a character reads in-story, or however creative you want to get with them. Switching pronouns is NOT an option(We can change this if needed be, but really, I don't think that's necessary). So whoever it is that creates the actual contest thread, ya might as well do so now, I guess? Don't wanna have eager writers waitin' any longer.

"And you must be Jonathan Joestar!" - Sue
BrotherMycroft Dapper Gentleman Since: Jul, 2012
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#173: Apr 16th 2013 at 11:36:18 AM

[up]Oh, I do like those winning lines. They allow for a good deal of flexibility in terms of concept, methinks. Thanks for galvanizing the contest; I'd be lying if I said I wasn't getting impatient! tongue I dunno who it is who's going to create the actual thread, either, but I look forward to it.

edited 16th Apr '13 11:37:36 AM by BrotherMycroft

"And every life is a special story of its own." —The Stargazer, Mass Effect 3
ohsointocats from The Sand Wastes Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
Nocturna Since: May, 2011
#175: Apr 17th 2013 at 9:43:48 AM

In the past, the rule has been that the entries must be between 2,000 and 5,000 words.


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