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Brotherz22 a guy/girl/it/thing that hates thinking hard. from Somewhere in America Since: Mar, 2012 Relationship Status: What is this thing you call love?
a guy/girl/it/thing that hates thinking hard.
#1: May 2nd 2012 at 1:15:34 PM

Ok, I have never posted here before, but this looked like the right spot. I just want some advise on a few things i'm designing, and to see what people think of it so far. Tried posting this in the World making forums, and got a message to post stuff like this here.

http://brotherz22.deviantart.com/art/The-Races-of-Malrena-The-Lizard-men-299685343

http://brotherz22.deviantart.com/art/The-Races-of-Malrena-Wraiths-PT1-299684499?q=gallery%3ABrotherz22%20randomize%3A1&qo=2

If anyone's wondering, i'll explain why i named the world that later.

Not finished with the second part, don't feel like finishing it right now, but i figured i'll link to what iv'e got done

http://brotherz22.deviantart.com/art/The-Races-of-Malrena-Wraiths-PT2-299684872?q=gallery%3ABrotherz22%20randomize%3A1&qo=1

edited 2nd May '12 1:46:11 PM by Brotherz22

I don't normally have to think. When I do, things have gone terribly wrong for everyone.
Brotherz22 a guy/girl/it/thing that hates thinking hard. from Somewhere in America Since: Mar, 2012 Relationship Status: What is this thing you call love?
a guy/girl/it/thing that hates thinking hard.
#2: May 2nd 2012 at 1:44:29 PM

I just realized how to post literature in the gallery (new to deviant art when it comes to posting stuff) please go there, i will update the links accordingly

I don't normally have to think. When I do, things have gone terribly wrong for everyone.
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