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NeoChaos from San Jo you know Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: Owner of a lonely heart
#1: Jan 13th 2012 at 9:22:23 PM

So I was reminded of this RPG Maker game through another TVT article, and I punched it into Google to find out it has a tropes page. Turns out the content is nothing more than an extended rant on the series that more appropriately belongs in the Reviews page. It's been years since I've been in the RPG Maker community and never played the Phylomortis games (although I did hear about the series considering the controversy around the creator), so I'm not exactly the best person to rewrite this article. Could someone who's much more experienced with the RPG Maker community and this game in particular give it a good rewrite?

edited 13th Jan '12 9:23:09 PM by NeoChaos

NoirGrimoir Rabid Fujoshi from San Diego, CA Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
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#2: Jan 13th 2012 at 9:26:04 PM

Wow, zap that description. I say just do what you can or hit someone up in the appropriate media section of the forum to write one. We don't need a super detailed description of every work, anyway, just a basic "Here's what this thing is" description.

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NeoChaos from San Jo you know Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: Owner of a lonely heart
#3: Jan 13th 2012 at 9:32:08 PM

Nuked the opinion, which leaves the article down to one sentence. Since I'm only vaguely familiar with the series, I'll hit up the Video Games forum and see if anyone there is better suited to writing something about it.

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Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#5: Feb 11th 2012 at 7:40:22 AM

Honestly, I think we should cut for stub.

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ccoa Ravenous Sophovore from the Sleeping Giant Since: Jan, 2001
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#6: Feb 11th 2012 at 9:04:27 AM

Okay, I swallowed my grudge and dislike of the creator/game and tried for a neutral write-up. Better?

edited 11th Feb '12 9:04:41 AM by ccoa

Waiting on a TRS slot? Finishing off one of these cleaning efforts will usually open one up.
NeoChaos from San Jo you know Since: Jan, 2015 Relationship Status: Owner of a lonely heart
#7: Feb 17th 2012 at 1:00:31 AM

Sorry for not responding sooner. It's certainly a better base to work off of now.

[up][up] I was actually considering doing that had ccoa not stepped up to improve the article.

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