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NotSuperman Since: Apr, 2010
#1: Jan 9th 2012 at 5:49:58 PM

  • One of the characters is suppose to have distant parents, what's the best way to portray this without feeling forced?

  • I have three separate storylines; a teacher-student affair, cheerleaders hazing a new recruit, and a closeted suicidal teenager. Other than the fact that they all occur at the same high school, I'm having a hard time tying the storylines together. I originally considered making the student in the affair and the hazed cheerleader sisters, and have the suicidal teenager be a friend of theirs, but it sounded too contrived. What's the best way to make the three story lines flow in a single narrative?

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RalphCrown Short Hair from Next Door to Nowhere Since: Oct, 2010
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#2: Jan 9th 2012 at 8:14:46 PM

One framing device is an adult the three teens go to for help / advice—counselor, principal, teacher, coach, janitor, etc. Showing the distant parents could happen when this staffer tries to involve them in the case.

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Crusader1025 sane enough Since: Nov, 2011
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#3: Jan 20th 2012 at 10:50:47 PM

[up] it would also help during the character getting advice to add in a series of brief yet concise flash-backs to earlier in the character's life that shows, in some way, how the parents are distant.

The rest is still unwritten...
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