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#2: Dec 19th 2011 at 10:36:11 AM
Yeah, I don't like it. This isn't VAD.
edited 19th Dec '11 10:36:21 AM by Firebert
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#3: Dec 19th 2011 at 12:54:33 PM
I say delete the part about her being doomed. Seems to fit the given description.
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whizzerd
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#4: Dec 19th 2011 at 1:00:49 PM
So, would Guess which of these girls is the tough, competent one? do?
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#6: Dec 19th 2011 at 9:39:47 PM
That would.
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#7: Dec 19th 2011 at 9:44:53 PM
Yup. The "doomed" part is completely unnecessary.
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#8: Dec 20th 2011 at 3:37:05 PM
Yeah, drop the doomed.
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#9: Dec 20th 2011 at 3:58:10 PM
Is it all right if I changed "girls" to "women"? I figured that was more accurate and didn't have the potential to be offensive.
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whizzerd
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#10: Dec 20th 2011 at 4:02:52 PM
Sure. I thought I had put women in the suggested alt. title. Stupid lack of sleep.
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Guess which one is tough, competent, and doomed.
This would be perfect for Vasquez Always Dies, but it's pretty much the opposite of what RWDWD is supposed to be about (the tough girl being superior). It might work without the 'and doomed' part, but it's still borderline JAFAAC.
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