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Jordan Azor Ahai from Westeros Since: Jan, 2001
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#1: Nov 3rd 2011 at 7:05:43 PM

I tried to cut-list this recently, but the request was declined, so I'm assuming the mods thought there was something decent that could be done with this, and I guess I agree.

It's pretty confusingly written, but I guess it comes down to being about a Blood Knight who gets bored with being one?

The title is really odd/nonindicative. The article doesn't reference the title. If it was taken from Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, then it's a misinterpretation. The Green Knight challenges people, but he's really a spy for Morgan Le Fay or something, not a Blood Knight.

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Falco Since: Mar, 2011
#2: Nov 3rd 2011 at 8:04:35 PM

Wut? Needs examples stat! Back to YKTTW.

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JapaneseTeeth Existence Weighed Against Nonbeing from Meinong's jungle Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Mu
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#4: Nov 3rd 2011 at 9:48:57 PM

Yeah, there might be a good trope in there, but it needs some serious rewriting at the very least, if not just cutting and rebuilding it from scratch.

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INUH Since: Jul, 2009
#5: Nov 3rd 2011 at 9:57:52 PM

Cut. Really specific, vaguely described, poorly named (and this is coming from a huge fan of Sir Gawain And The Green Knight).

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Raso Cure Candy Since: Jul, 2009
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#6: Nov 3rd 2011 at 10:07:49 PM

And here I would of thought The Green Knight would of been someone who fights for the earth in Green Message type show.

Cut

edited 3rd Nov '11 10:08:18 PM by Raso

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INUH Since: Jul, 2009
#7: Nov 3rd 2011 at 10:10:13 PM

^Nah, it's a reference to a very famous piece of Arthurian legend.

But given that the work isn't an example of the trope, and the character who comes closest ("closest" being a very relative term here) to being an example isn't the Green Knight, I have to wonder why the launcher picked that name.

edited 3rd Nov '11 10:17:28 PM by INUH

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Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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INUH Since: Jul, 2009
#9: Nov 3rd 2011 at 10:32:22 PM

I wouldn't be in favor of sending it to YKTTW. I think it should just be gone.

It's far too specific.

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Jordan Azor Ahai from Westeros Since: Jan, 2001
Azor Ahai
#10: Nov 4th 2011 at 10:43:01 AM

Thanks for the input. I will try to cutlist it again and see what happens.

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cypheredwolf Since: Jun, 2010
#11: Nov 6th 2011 at 2:33:38 PM

Sorry guys I was the original guy who wrote the trope. I wasn't thinking about the name. It came from a quote in the wire where Avon tells stringer I bleed red you bleed green. It was my first trope. I got lazy and stopped at the example parts anyway the idea was a blood knight who just gets so ambitious that being a blood knight in and of itself doesn't satisfy him or her anymore. Stringer was the first to come to mind but the more I think about Xena seems to fit too.

edited 6th Nov '11 3:55:50 PM by cypheredwolf

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