I guess if you want to keep the "Might" line, make it into a line of dialogue.
"Might as well use my bad hand," Cawley muttered, more to himself than to Rosier. "No sense in having two injured ones."
I'm not 100% sure of what's going on (lack of context, etc.), but you are. You know why he takes out the chalk and paper, why he cuts himself, why he tucks the paper in his pocket.
On a scratch piece of paper or something, make out a little sequence (First, Next, Then) and just write the basic "he did this, then this, then this." Find the connectivity between each action—be it a thought process, or another movement, and, taking what you have so far, include it. If the sequence becomes too long, trim it.
...Was that confusing? /Sucksatexplainingthings
edited 30th Oct '11 4:31:00 PM by BetsyandtheFiveAvengers