Remade An Old Story:

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1 JewelyJ14th Oct 2011 06:45:37 PM from A state in the USA
For anyone who was interested in the old fic I was posting on these boards, The Great Reversal (that story about modern teens being tossed into a world where women are in charge), I've canceled it.

I wrote a new version called Motherland. One major plot difference is that I scrapped the "modern kids thrown into other world" plot for a story that remains within the world. A person who talked to about it told me that the idea of "teens being thrown into another world" was a horrible cliche overused by badfics and suggested to me ideas for another idea with that same world.

I wasn't completely sure about what she said, because I had been told otherwise by other people, but the possibilities were too tempting to pass up.

I was hoping I could get some feedback on the new version(and see what readers of the old one thought) so here's the link.
2 chihuahua014th Oct 2011 07:05:23 PM from Standoff, USA , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
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Air pirates?

I'm in!

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