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LiberatedLiberater 奇跡の魔女 from [DATA EXPUNGED] Since: Jun, 2011
奇跡の魔女
#1: Aug 8th 2011 at 6:00:44 AM

The descriptions of each character make my eyes hurt, and there's a lot of stuff that doesn't belong on character sheet descriptions. It'll be appreciated if someone could help clean up the character descriptions, and possibly the page format.

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hcobb from http://www.hcobb.com/ Since: Jan, 2001
#2: Aug 8th 2011 at 8:08:44 AM

So anything that innately requires more than one character should be removed from the character sheets?

How about in-house shippers Kunikida and Taniguchi. Each of them is pointing Kyon at a different girl, so where does that go?


Reminds me that Itsuki is the Perky Female Minion

edited 8th Aug '11 8:20:33 AM by hcobb

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LiberatedLiberater 奇跡の魔女 from [DATA EXPUNGED] Since: Jun, 2011
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#3: Aug 13th 2011 at 2:57:20 AM

Bump. I attempted a rewrite of the character sheet here. Please comment if it's any better than the original character sheet.

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hcobb from http://www.hcobb.com/ Since: Jan, 2001
#4: Aug 13th 2011 at 5:29:25 AM

Isn't it more Rich Bitch than general bully? Richness in power, but it works out the same.

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shimaspawn from Here and Now Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: In your bunk
#5: Aug 13th 2011 at 10:49:43 AM

It doesn't work out the same. Rich Bitch is specifically for money. If they don't have money coming out their ears, it's not the trope. It doesn't matter how powerful they are. Please don't shoehorn things into tropes.

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LiberatedLiberater 奇跡の魔女 from [DATA EXPUNGED] Since: Jun, 2011
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#6: Aug 13th 2011 at 7:21:47 PM

So if there are no objections, I'll be replacing the current character sheet with the rewrite.

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shark33 Since: Nov, 2010
#7: Aug 13th 2011 at 7:24:21 PM

I actually prefer the Wall of Text, but would be OK if it's changed.

LiberatedLiberater 奇跡の魔女 from [DATA EXPUNGED] Since: Jun, 2011
奇跡の魔女
#8: Aug 15th 2011 at 12:19:48 AM

Well, since no one's objecting, I'll be replacing the character sheet with the rewritten version.

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mek4life from Boston Since: Jun, 2010
#9: Aug 15th 2011 at 12:20:12 AM

I suggest that we split mikuru (big) with mikuru (small), Most Common Superpower aside, they are completely different characters. And please remove the natter on the character sheet

edited 15th Aug '11 12:21:26 AM by mek4life

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#10: Aug 15th 2011 at 1:47:06 AM

You don't need permission to remove natter. Just make sure you leave a good edit reason.

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LiberatedLiberater 奇跡の魔女 from [DATA EXPUNGED] Since: Jun, 2011
奇跡の魔女
#11: Aug 15th 2011 at 2:08:46 AM

I've replaced the character sheet with the rewrite. Keeping this open if there are any other issues with the character sheet.

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