#2: Jul 25th 2011 at 5:06:03 PM
Post the beginnings here as a post, I will look.
Amateur Worldbuilder
#3: Jul 25th 2011 at 5:40:44 PM
I think it might be a good idea to post a preview here; people won't want to commit to reading the whole thing if you don't give them a taste.
I hope you enjoy whatever is written above. If not - well, I'm afraid that's life.
syvaris
Since: Dec, 2009
#4: Jul 26th 2011 at 12:56:38 PM
Okay I guess I can post chapter 1....its around 7 pages though.
Ehh never mind its not really working.
Posting a summary instead
It opens with a group attempting to pull a data heist. They are hitting on of the resident Megacorps in order to steal some data. Things go amiss and the plan falls apart. Now the survivors most reunite and replan the job, before the person who hired them comes calling. Sadly things are never as they seem and nothing is ever as easy as it appears.
edited 26th Jul '11 12:59:35 PM by syvaris
You will never love a women as much as George Lucas hates his fans.
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So I have been working on a cyberpunk novel for the last few months. I am about a third of the way done and would like some peer reviews. Its a touch rough around the edges but for the most part it is good. I would appreciate any feedback. If you want to read it shoot me an email at cyvaris@yahoo.com
You will never love a women as much as George Lucas hates his fans.