Lord high Xecutioner
#2: Jun 27th 2011 at 8:12:26 AM
Obviously, the sword is cursed. If I touch it the king will possess my body. I will focus on stealing the gold.
edited 27th Jun '11 8:12:51 AM by Trotzky
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#3: Jun 27th 2011 at 8:20:49 AM
It's really hard to say whether that's "fine" or not, with no idea of what it's supposed to mean.
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Stairs lead down below a evil sorceror-king's castle, and at the bottom is a steel door, now locked behind the protagonist. Beyond the door and down a narrow stone corridor is a small chamber, lit by a strange greenish glow. In its center is a plinth, upon which is a fine steel sword with no crossguard. Engraved into the side of the plinth . . . Well, currently, I've got these words:
Four paths lie before you
Or perhaps they are only three
Die a hero
Die a coward
Live a monster, flesh or steel
The sword shall guide you
Asking for advice on what the plinth should say would require me to reveal more of the plot than I would like to at this time. However, I am having difficulty gauging whether the inscription is fine as it is. If all or part of it seems awkward, I'll know where to start revising. So, what do you all think of it?
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