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Hawt. <3
"Besides, everyone's hairsexual for Waltzy's braid." -Juan Carlos
Bigonkers! is Magic
I knew you would like it. XD
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<3
>:3
"Besides, everyone's hairsexual for Waltzy's braid." -Juan Carlos
Mmm. Sexy.
U know... I have no idea what to write right now...
Bigonkers! is Magic
A new one! The lines towards the middle mark off where I ran out of ideas on how to connect the three events.
Tina Tulip and her posse walked onto the Birch Creek High School football field to watch team practice. Spotting the star quarter back of the team she smiled and waved.
"This one is for you, Tina!" Kevin Doza shouted right before he threw a long pass that would have been a touchdown if it had been an actual game. After the completion, Kevin got permission from his couch for a five minute break.
"Hi there!" Tina said as the big football player walked up to her and gave her a strong hug. The girls around her swooned.
"How's my girl?" Kevin asked, setting the dorkie girl down. Like most of the other boys in Tina's school, Kevin had always felt a strange attraction to the girl. Tina merely kept up her slightly bucktoothed grin and answered with, "I'm doing fine. Was that a Power-I play you guys pulled off?"
"It certainly was," said Kevin, impressed. He then added in a playfully suspicious manner, "You haven't been taking peeks at my playbook, have you?"
"Kinda," blushed Tina, "are you going to rattle me for that?"
Kevin gave a good hardy laugh. "Wouldn't dream of it! Unless you're into that sort of thing."
"Oh you!" Tina giggled.
"Well, gotta go," said Kevin upon hearing his coach blow the whistle, "Wanna hang out with us after practice?"
"Sure," answered Tina. As the big football player left, Tina noticed that one of the girls had passed out from hyperventilating. Shaking her head in amusement she went to go tend to the downed girl.
"Ugh, what happened?" asked the girl when she finally came to.
"You were attacked by a pack of rabid unicorns," said Tina, readjusting her glasses and straightening her dress.
"Curse those unicorns!"
As Tina waited in the parking lot for Kevin to pick her up in his truck, she heard someone walking up behind. She could tell it wasn't Kevin because of the nasally breathing.
"What do you want now, Dweebie?" she asked.
"How did you know it was me?" asked the person behind her, startled.
Tina spun around on her heels to face Dweebie Murdock. "You make it too obvious." Unlike most boys in Tina's school who knew to keep their desires in check, Dweebie seemed to have control issues.
"Well it's not my fault my shoes don't have a +5 in stealth," said Dweebie.
"You know I don't play that game that much anymore."
"Hey, just because you're the most popular girl on campus doesn't mean you can't get in a game with us once and a while."
"But I do," said Tina, looking slightly hurt by the comment, "I just don't like it when you are the DM."
"I've got good luck with the die."
Tina frowned and asked, "So, is there something you wanted to talk to me about?"
"Oh yeah," said Dweebie, looking around nervously, "Erm, could we head on over to the coffee shop? I'd rather talk there."
"Can't we talk about this here right now?"
"No, too many people and that makes me nervous," said Dweebie, taking hold of Tina's hand. "Don't worry, I'll make it worth your time."
"Uh, I have to be going soon," said Tina, her internal clock telling her Kevin would be getting out of practice soon. "Kevin and I have plans...Big plans...involving milkshakes..."
"Mere excuses to me," said Dweebie.
Suddenly, a pick-up truck pulled up near Tina and Dweebie. In the back were a number of cheerleaders and some of the other football players.
"Hey Tina~!" shouted the lead cheerleader. Tina waved back. She tried walking towards the truck but found that Dweebie was still holding her hand.
"Uh, Dweebie, can you let go?" Tina asked.
"Dweebie!" shouted Kevin, rolling down his driver side window, "Are you causing my girl trouble?"
"I just wanted to talk to her," Dweebie answered before saying to Tina, "Come with me, you don't need to spend your every hour with him."
"But we had kinda sorta planned this," said Tina, "So, uh, my hand?"
Dweebie finally conceded and Tina made her escape to the passenger seat of the pick-up. "Hi there," she said to Kevin with a smile.
"Hi," Kevin answered, giving Tina a kiss. "Dweebie didn't give you too much trouble, did he?"
"Not too much trouble this time," said Tina, readjusting her glasses and re-straightening her dress. Kevin smiled and nodded before stepping on the gas.
"I'll get you Tina!" Dweebie shouted as the truck pulled away. "One day you'll be able to see things my way!"
Enjoy!
edited 10th Jan '11 10:07:40 PM by SandJosieph
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Away on the wind~
I, uh, I wanna tear it apart, but I can't find any obvious flaws T_T
Sorry
There are too many toasters in my chimney!
Bigonkers! is Magic
Well, I'm not sure how well I managed to get the characters speak like their real world counterparts. Like I'm not sure if the things Kevin says sound like things a football player would really say. Also, I don't think Dweebie came off as much of a Jerkass as I liked.
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Away on the wind~
Well, I'm not so good with dialogue :/
Sorry, Sand :<
There are too many toasters in my chimney!
I wrote this up in a very short amount of time but I liked it enough to want to share it. I don't know if this will be used in a story of mine but the possibility is there. Have fun!
"Electra, the experiment was a success!" exclaimed Junior, her boyish smile bold as she and her mistress looked upon the abomination before them.
"And it survived for more than five minutes at that," said Electra, giving her assistant a playful twirl. "Shall we celebrate this monumentous occasion?" A glint of deviousness could be seen in the electrified eyes of the mad scientist.
"I'm all up for it, my mistress," cooed Junior, leaning into the chest of the taller girl's strong body. Electra merely grinned with her razor sharp teeth and gave Junior a small electrified lick with her forked tongue.
"Good," smiled Electra as Junior giggled from the small jolt. "So, would you like to celebrate here or in the master bedroom?"
"Oh, here would be just fine," sighed Junior, "We could even get some of the experiments going as we celebrate."
"Sounds like a plan my little minion," said Electra. She tossed off an electrical charge at the guitar used to power their devices. The instrument gave off a wonderful twang! as the machines lit up around the sleek device.
"Oh my," breathed Junior, going slightly weak at the knees. Electra, without missing a beat, swung around the limp girl's body and slung her upon the operating table.
"No rest for the victorious!" laughed the mad scientist, picking up the guitar, "We've got work to do!" Another playful jolt from the girl's hands rocked Junior's world as the lights in the room thrummed from the notes played upon the guitar.
Junior gasped as the electrified air coursed through her body, making her shake with excitement. "Don't stop," she prayed, "keep going..." Electra merely smiled and set down the instrument. The lights began to dim as mad scientist approached her minion on the table.
"As you wish," Electra smiled as she lay down beside her exhausted assistant. She placed her hands on the side of the girl's head and played with Junior's dreams on a sub-atomic level. "Sweet dreams my love, for we have much to do when you awaken..."
Feel free to comment and even point out some of the tropes I used (I probably wouldn't be able to pick them out if they were laid out in front of me).
edited 3rd Jan '11 11:35:07 PM by SandJosieph
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