#2: Dec 25th 2010 at 6:40:50 PM
Nice. Very evocative.
...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
#3: Dec 26th 2010 at 2:54:02 AM
Good enough for me. Thanks.
Always touching and looking. Piss off.
drunkscriblerian
Street Writing Man
from Castle Geekhaven
Since: Oct, 2010
Relationship Status: In season
#4: Dec 26th 2010 at 3:02:54 AM
I liked it. A little clunky here and there but it kept my interest.
And last call is indeed inviolate.
If I were to write some of the strange things that come under my eyes they would not be believed. ~Cora M. Strayer~
#5: Dec 26th 2010 at 3:48:27 AM
I liked it. A little clunky here and there but it kept my interest.
Which bits?
Also it seems that tinypaste is an imperfect medium for showing people my writing. What's with the mile-long sentences, damn it?
Always touching and looking. Piss off.
Total posts: 5
Just something I wrote in a dull moment. Inspired by watching a tealight sit on a bar counter.
Always touching and looking. Piss off.