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* BookEnds: A minor one, and only if you're using the optional musical cues provided by the author: the final tune played in the final chapter is Wiosna, which just so happens to be the opening theme for ''Katawa Shoujo'', thus indicating that the story is finally at an end.
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* NauseaFuel: Hanako's insecurities popping up at an inopportune moment causes [[spoiler: her first attempt at oral sex]] to end in this.
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* NauseaFuel: Hanako's insecurities popping up at an inopportune moment causes [[spoiler: her first attempt at oral sex]] to end in this.this.
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* BookEnd: A minor one, and only if you're using the optional musical cues provided by the author: the final tune played in the final chapter is Wiosna, which just so happens to be the opening theme for ''Katawa Shoujo'', thus indicating that the story is finally at an end.
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* BookEnd: BookEnds: A minor one, and only if you're using the optional musical cues provided by the author: the final tune played in the final chapter is Wiosna, which just so happens to be the opening theme for ''Katawa Shoujo'', thus indicating that the story is finally at an end.
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* BookEnd: A minor one, and only if you're using the optional musical cues provided by the author: the final tune played in the final chapter is Wiosna, which just so happens to be the opening theme for ''Katawa Shoujo'', thus indicating that the story is finally at an end.
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** During the final moment of the story, when Hanako gets closely in front of Lilly in preparation to [[spoiler: let Lilly feel her face]], Lilly wonders to herself for a moment if Hanako is perhaps preparing to kiss her.
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** During the final moment of the story, story (pre-expansion), when Hanako gets closely in front of Lilly in preparation to [[spoiler: let Lilly feel her face]], Lilly wonders to herself for a moment if Hanako is perhaps preparing to kiss her.
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** During the final moment of the story, when Hanako gets closely in front of Lilly in preparation to [[spoiler: let Lilly feel her face]], Lilly wonders to herself for a moment if Hanako is perhaps preparing to kiss her.
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** During the final moment of the story, when Hanako gets closely in front of Lilly in preparation to [[spoiler: let Lilly feel her face]], Lilly wonders to herself for a moment if Hanako is perhaps preparing to kiss her.her.
* NauseaFuel: Hanako's insecurities popping up at an inopportune moment causes [[spoiler: her first attempt at oral sex]] to end in this.
* NauseaFuel: Hanako's insecurities popping up at an inopportune moment causes [[spoiler: her first attempt at oral sex]] to end in this.
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* FetishFuel: Hisao and Hanako take part in a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nuru_(massage) Nuru massage]] as foreplay for their first love making session.
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* FetishFuel: Hisao and Hanako take part in a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nuru_(massage) Nuru massage]] as foreplay for their first love making session.
* LesYay: It's a story involving Lilly and Hanako, what did you expect? After Lilly announces she may be leaving Japan, Hanako starts organizing outings for the two of them in an attempt to show Lilly how much she still has to offer her. Of note is their dinner in a restaurant and Lilly dragging Hanako onto the dance floor to teach her how to dance a slow waltz. Afterwards, Lilly mentions to herself that it's almost as if Hanako has become her girlfriend instead of Hisao's.
** During the final moment of the story, when Hanako gets closely in front of Lilly in preparation to [[spoiler: let Lilly feel her face]], Lilly wonders to herself for a moment if Hanako is perhaps preparing to kiss her.
* LesYay: It's a story involving Lilly and Hanako, what did you expect? After Lilly announces she may be leaving Japan, Hanako starts organizing outings for the two of them in an attempt to show Lilly how much she still has to offer her. Of note is their dinner in a restaurant and Lilly dragging Hanako onto the dance floor to teach her how to dance a slow waltz. Afterwards, Lilly mentions to herself that it's almost as if Hanako has become her girlfriend instead of Hisao's.
** During the final moment of the story, when Hanako gets closely in front of Lilly in preparation to [[spoiler: let Lilly feel her face]], Lilly wonders to herself for a moment if Hanako is perhaps preparing to kiss her.
