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* {{Narm}}: Special mention has to go to how Peter expresses his despair when giving up his marriage, when he knows he must lose something that has so much value to him -- "NYRAAARGH!"
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** Special mention has to go to how Peter expresses his despair when giving up his marriage, when he knows he must lose something that has so much value to him -- "NYRAAARGH!"
** Special mention has to go to how Peter expresses his despair when giving up his marriage, when he knows he must lose something that has so much value to him -- "NYRAAARGH!"
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* BrokenAesop: Breaks the [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility aesop]] that ComicBook/SpiderMan is supposed to embody, as instead of taking responsibility for his actions, he dodges it by making a DealWithTheDevil against the wishes of its main beneficiary and guilt-tripping his own wife into going along with it. However, in ''ComicBook/OneMomentInTime'', this is retconned so that ''Mary Jane'' is the one to have made the deal. For readers, rewriting history just to save the life of a single person who, in addition to wanting to die anyways and was telling you to let go, and is, let's face it, likely to die of old age in a few years anyway is simply asinine. The message then becomes "the ends justify the means", and that instead of learning how to cope with loss and move on with your life, you should hold on to what you have and never let go, even if the cost of doing so might be too high; for you and others.
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* BadassDecay: Apparently, no superhero or supervillain in the Marvel universe can heal a bullet wound. Even though there are multiple stories published beforehand where they have done exactly that.
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** One of the more infamous parts of the story is how Doctor Strange (and everybody else in the Marvel Universe) is unable to fix a simple bullet wound. In ''Film/DoctorStrange2016'', fixing a bullet wound is one of the very first things we see him do... ''before'' he becomes a sorcerer.
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** One of the more infamous parts of the story is how Doctor Strange (and everybody else in the Marvel Universe) universe) is unable to fix a simple bullet wound. In ''Film/DoctorStrange2016'', fixing a bullet wound is one of the very first things we see him do... ''before'' he becomes a sorcerer.
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** There was a very similar plot during Creator/PeterDavid's run on ''Comicbook/TheIncredibleHulk''. Marlo, Rick Jones' girlfriend, is stabbed, and he starts to ask everyone for help: Dr. Strange (who pointed that [[NotThatKindOfMage his magic is useless with non-magical injuries]] in that story as well), Reed Richards, Dr. Pym, anyone. ReedRichardsIsUseless, as well as all the others. And, when he's in his deepest depair, he accepts the help of the only one who can save Marlo: the Leader (a Hulk villain who had commited genocide a short time before that), who has a {{Magitek}} idea in mind to help her.
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** There was a very similar plot during Creator/PeterDavid's run on ''Comicbook/TheIncredibleHulk''. Marlo, Rick Jones' girlfriend, is stabbed, and he starts to ask everyone for help: Dr. Strange (who pointed that [[NotThatKindOfMage his magic is useless with non-magical injuries]] in that story as well), Reed Richards, Dr. Pym, anyone. ReedRichardsIsUseless, as well as all the others. And, when he's in his deepest depair, despair, he accepts the help of the only one who can save Marlo: the Leader (a Hulk villain who had commited committed genocide a short time before that), who has a {{Magitek}} idea in mind to help her. her.
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* {{Padding}}: In Issue 3, just when the plot starts (sort of) going somewhere, it stops completely so Peter can talk to a video game designer version of himself, who goes off on a ''page long rant'' about how escapist entertainment is needed in today's times. It serves no purpose other than to stop the plot completely and act as [[AuthorFilibuster Quesada's own personal mouthpiece]]. It doesn't help, of course, that it's [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment never mentioned again]].
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* {{Padding}}: In Issue 3, just when the plot starts (sort of) going somewhere, it stops completely so Peter can talk to a video game designer version of himself, who goes off on a ''page long rant'' about how escapist entertainment is needed in today's times. It serves no purpose other than to stop the plot completely and act as [[AuthorFilibuster Quesada's own personal mouthpiece]].a mouthpiece for JMS]]. It doesn't help, of course, that it's [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment never mentioned again]].
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** The story briefly setups Mary Jane getting shot, only to have Aunt May be the final victim . This situation would have put Peter in a MortonsFork, where he would have to decide to save her life at the cost of their marriage, or let her die but still keep his memories of her -- but instead, Marvel decided to go with the elder that had already lived a long and satisfactory life, robbing the setup of potential drama and preventing the ending from making a lot more sense.
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** The story comic briefly setups Mary Jane getting shot, only to have Aunt May be the final victim .victim. This situation would have put Peter in a MortonsFork, where he would have to decide to save her life at the cost of their marriage, or let her die but still keep his memories of her -- but instead, Marvel decided to go with the elder that had already lived a long and satisfactory life, robbing the setup of potential drama and preventing the ending from making a lot more sense.
