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* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it not only breaks the base, but actually breaks continuity.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: Even among people who were willing to give Traviss a clean slate after ''Legacy of the Force'' and the Mandalorian worship, many have said that the novel's just boring.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Although debatable on whether the plot involving ONI starting the Sangheili Civil War, as well as creating the [[spoiler: inedible crops]] in an attempt to [[spoiler: wipe the Sangheili out altogether]], or Jul 'Mdama escaping ONI confinement with knowledge of both plans were actually ''good'', all three were essentially dropped in ''Mortal Dictata'' in order to focus on two things, Naomi confronting her Insurrectionist father and more Halsey bashing.
** With regards to plot threads ''within'' the novel, the subplot involving Chol Von's attempt to create a unified Kig-Yar navy (one of the few parts of the book to not break the base) gets unceremoniously dropped towards the end, with the fate of Chol and her shipmates left unresolved.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Although debatable on whether the plot involving ONI starting the Sangheili Civil War, as well as creating the [[spoiler: inedible crops]] in an attempt to [[spoiler: wipe the Sangheili out altogether]], or Jul 'Mdama escaping ONI confinement with knowledge of both plans were actually ''good'', all three were essentially dropped in ''Mortal Dictata'' in order to focus on two things, Naomi confronting her Insurrectionist father and more Halsey bashing.
** With regards to plot threads ''within'' the novel, the subplot involving Chol Von's attempt to create a unified Kig-Yar navy (one of the few parts of the book to not break the base) gets unceremoniously dropped towards the end, with the fate of Chol and her shipmates left unresolved.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: Even among people who were willing to give Traviss a clean slate after ''Legacy of the Force'' and the Mandalorian worship, many have said that the novel's just boring.
boring, likely as side effect of the games picking up the more interesting plot-points.
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** With regards to plot threads ''within'' the novel, the subplot involving Chol Von's attempt to create a unified Kig-Yar navy (one of the few parts of the book to not break the base) gets unceremoniously dropped towards the end, with the fate of Chol and her shipmates left unresolved.
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** It's debatable on whether the plot involving ONI starting the Sangheili Civil War, as well as creating the
** With regards to plot threads ''within'' the novel, the subplot involving Chol Von's attempt to create a unified Kig-Yar navy (one of the few parts of the book to not break the base) gets unceremoniously dropped towards the end, with the fate of Chol and her shipmates left unresolved.
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She didn\'t work on that series.
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* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it not only breaks the base, but actually breaks continuity (Something the Halo franchise has usually kept tight).
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* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it not only breaks the base, but actually breaks continuity (Something the Halo franchise has usually kept tight).continuity.
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Natter.
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** FanonDiscontinuity: Even among people who were willing to give Traviss a clean slate after ''New Jedi Order'' and the Maldalorian worship, many have said that the novel's just ''boring''.
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* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it not only breaks the base, but actually breaks continuity (Something the Halo franchise has usually kept tight). By this point, outrage towards Traviss is nearly nuclear levels.
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* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it not only breaks the base, but actually breaks continuity.continuity (Something the Halo franchise has usually kept tight). By this point, outrage towards Traviss is nearly nuclear levels.
** FanonDiscontinuity: Even among people who were willing to give Traviss a clean slate after ''New Jedi Order'' and the Maldalorian worship, many have said that the novel's just ''boring''.
** FanonDiscontinuity: Even among people who were willing to give Traviss a clean slate after ''New Jedi Order'' and the Maldalorian worship, many have said that the novel's just ''boring''.
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* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it not only breaks the base, but actually breaks continuity.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Was BB genuinely trying to help Naomi regain her memories, or was he simply manipulating the evidence under Parangosky's orders in order to turn her against Halsey (given that the revelations contradict what was shown in previous media)?
* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it actually breaks continuity.
* BaseBreaker: Possibly even more so than ''Glasslands'', given that the Halsey hate is ramped UpToEleven here, to the point where it actually breaks continuity.
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** With regards to plot threads ''within'' the novel, the subplot involving Chol Von's attempt to create a unified Kig-Yar navy (one of the few parts of the book to not break the base) gets unceremoniously dropped towards the end, with the fate of Chol and her shipmates left unresolved.
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Come on, I know Mortal Dictata is a terrible book, but I can\'t possibly be the only one that has to work on it
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Although debatable on whether the plot involving ONI starting the Sangheili Civil War, as well as creating the [[spoiler: inedible crops]] in an attempt to [[spoiler: wipe the Sangheili out altogether]], or Jul 'Mdama escaping ONI confinement with knowledge of both plans were actually ''good'', all three were essentially dropped in ''Mortal Dictata'' in order to focus on two things, Naomi confronting her Insurrectionist father and more Halsey bashing.
