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Sue is Flame Bait. MEH can only be crossed once.
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* MarySue: Some readers of the fic have debated whether or not Riley is this trope (she basically wanders into the plot, all of the characters talk about her constantly, she's the catalyst for several events, she's considered one of the team's more powerful members, etc). Just as many argue [[DefiedTrope against it]], stating that the characters talk about her because (a) she's new in town (same as Tip) as well as the newest member of their friend group, (b) she has flipping super powers, (c) she went into a catatonic state for at least a week, and (d) she's Hiro's first girlfriend. Her status as the main character (despite it still being Hiro's story) is also a reason for this.
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: The Gorg crosses this a few times: kidnapping Abigail and holding her hostage, threatening to kill her if Callaghan doesn't comply with its wishes, starting an alien invasion on the Earth. All because its egg came to Earth.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: The Gorg crosses this a few times: kidnapping Abigail and holding her hostage, threatening to kill her if Callaghan doesn't comply with its wishes, starting an alien invasion on the Earth. All because its egg came to Earth.]]
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* MarySue: Some readers of the fic have debated whether or not Riley is this trope (she basically wanders into the plot, all of the characters talk about her constantly, she's the catalyst for several events, she's considered one of the team's more powerful members, etc). Just as many argue [[DefiedTrope against it]], stating that the characters talk about her because (a) she's new in town (same as Tip) as well as the newest member of their friend group, (b) she has flipping super powers, (c) she went into a catatonic state for at least a week, and (d) she's Hiro's first girlfriend. Her status as the main character (despite it still being Hiro's story) is also a reason for this.
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Not a YMMV trope.
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* {{Expy}}: Considering how he's an older man who is a master of martial arts and spends his free time giving advice to young adults and teenagers, one could argue that Takahito is an expy of Iroh from ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''
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* Expy: Considering how he's an older man who is a master of martial arts and spends his free time giving advice to young adults and teenagers, one could argue that Takahito is an expy of Iroh from ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Considering how he's an older man who is a master of martial arts and spends his free time giving advice to young adults and teenagers, one could argue that Takahito is an expy of Iroh from ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''
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* Expy: Considering how he's an older man who is a master of martial arts and spends his free time giving advice to young adults and teenagers, one could argue that Takahito is an expy of Iroh from ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender''
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** Oh. He's ''terrified'' of [[spoiler: Smek and the Gorg.]]
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** Oh. He's ''terrified'' of [[spoiler: Smek and the Gorg.]]]]
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* CrossoverShip: Hiro and Riley's relationship, the main cornerstone of the fic.
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* CrossoverShip: Hiro and Riley's relationship, the main cornerstone of the fic. Also classifies as a ToyShip considering they are both still minors.
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* CrossoverShip: Hiro and Riley's relationship, the main cornerstone of the fic.
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* CrossoverShip: Hiro and Riley's relationship, the main cornerstone of the fic.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: CrossoverShip: Hiro and Riley's relationship, the main cornerstone of the fic.
* HilariousInHindsight:
** Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
* HilariousInHindsight:
** Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
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* TheWoobie: Hiro, per canon. He [[spoiler: loses his brother to a fire]] and pushes away Riley in his grief.
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* TheWoobie: TheWoobie:
** Hiro, per canon. He [[spoiler: loses his brother to a fire]] and pushes away Riley in his grief.
** Hiro, per canon. He [[spoiler: loses his brother to a fire]] and pushes away Riley in his grief.
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** Wasabi's van becoming this story's version of Slushious becomes this after the episode in [[WesternAnimation/BigHeroSixTheSeries the cartoon]] where said van is fished out of the harbor and similarly upgraded.
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** Wasabi's van becoming this story's version of Slushious becomes this after the episode in [[WesternAnimation/BigHeroSixTheSeries [[WesternAnimation/BigHero6TheSeries the cartoon]] where said van is fished out of the harbor and similarly upgraded.
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** Wasabi's van becoming this story's version of Slushious becomes this after the episode in [[WesternAnimation/BigHeroSixTheSeries the cartoon]] where said van is fished out of the harbor and similarly upgraded.
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* CatharsisFactor: Baymax calls [[spoiler: the Gorg a coward and Oh pulling a BreakThemByTalking on Smek, turning the Boov against the Gorg.]]
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** Oh.
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** Oh. He's ''terrified'' of [[spoiler: Smek and the Gorg.]]
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* CharacterRerailment: One could make this argument for [[spoiler: the Gorg, seeing as their personality is more in line with how it was in [[Literature/TheTrueMeaningOfSmekday the book]] than the movie (loosely) based on it.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].emotions]].
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: The Gorg crosses this a few times: kidnapping Abigail and holding her hostage, threatening to kill her if Callaghan doesn't comply with its wishes, starting an alien invasion on the Earth. All because its egg came to Earth.]]
* NightmareFuel: Riley being electrocuted by the neurotransmitter after Oh adjusts it. [[spoiler: And then her powers kicking in and she struggles with controlling them at first.]]
* TheWoobie: Hiro, per canon. He [[spoiler: loses his brother to a fire]] and pushes away Riley in his grief.
** Honey Lemon, she lost her first boyfriend to [[spoiler: their mentor, indirectly albeit.]] She has a hard time sleeping afterwards. Someone give her a hug.
** Oh.
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: The Gorg crosses this a few times: kidnapping Abigail and holding her hostage, threatening to kill her if Callaghan doesn't comply with its wishes, starting an alien invasion on the Earth. All because its egg came to Earth.]]
* NightmareFuel: Riley being electrocuted by the neurotransmitter after Oh adjusts it. [[spoiler: And then her powers kicking in and she struggles with controlling them at first.]]
* TheWoobie: Hiro, per canon. He [[spoiler: loses his brother to a fire]] and pushes away Riley in his grief.
** Honey Lemon, she lost her first boyfriend to [[spoiler: their mentor, indirectly albeit.]] She has a hard time sleeping afterwards. Someone give her a hug.
** Oh.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
* HarsherInHindsight: Tadashi telling Hiro that there was a fire to get him out of bed becomes less funny after [[spoiler: the fire that killed Tadashi occurs.]]
* HarsherInHindsight: Tadashi telling Hiro that there was a fire to get him out of bed becomes less funny after [[spoiler: the fire that killed Tadashi occurs.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].emotions]].
* HarsherInHindsight: Tadashi telling Hiro that there was a fire to get him out of bed becomes less funny after [[spoiler: the fire that killed Tadashi occurs.]]
* HarsherInHindsight: Tadashi telling Hiro that there was a fire to get him out of bed becomes less funny after [[spoiler: the fire that killed Tadashi occurs.]]
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fixed a wick for a split trope, and I'm moving it out of YMMV, since Annoying Video Game Helper is YMMV but Unwanted Assistance is not.
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* StopHelpingMe: In an attempt to help Hiro perfect his nuero-transmitter, Oh tampers with it. Because boov brains work differently than human brains, the result [[spoiler: knocks Riley unconscious, altering her brain-chemistry and ultimately imbuing her with psychic powers.]]
* StopHelpingMe: In an attempt to help Hiro perfect his nuero-transmitter, Oh tampers with it. Because boov brains work differently than human brains, the result [[spoiler: knocks Riley unconscious, altering her brain-chemistry and ultimately imbuing her with psychic powers.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].
* StopHelpingMe: In an attempt to help Hiro perfect his nuero-transmitter, Oh tampers with it. Because boov brains work differently than human brains, the result [[spoiler: knocks Riley unconscious, altering her brain-chemistry and ultimately imbuing her with psychic powers.]]emotions]].
* StopHelpingMe: In an attempt to help Hiro perfect his nuero-transmitter, Oh tampers with it. Because boov brains work differently than human brains, the result [[spoiler: knocks Riley unconscious, altering her brain-chemistry and ultimately imbuing her with psychic powers.]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: Riley's line at the beginning of the fic about being careful about talking to herself takes on another silly dimension when she becomes [[spoiler: TheEmpath]] and begins hearing [[spoiler: her emotions]].emotions]].
* StopHelpingMe: In an attempt to help Hiro perfect his nuero-transmitter, Oh tampers with it. Because boov brains work differently than human brains, the result [[spoiler: knocks Riley unconscious, altering her brain-chemistry and ultimately imbuing her with psychic powers.]]
* StopHelpingMe: In an attempt to help Hiro perfect his nuero-transmitter, Oh tampers with it. Because boov brains work differently than human brains, the result [[spoiler: knocks Riley unconscious, altering her brain-chemistry and ultimately imbuing her with psychic powers.]]
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