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* FromBadToWorse: After Chrysalis forces Rainbow Dash under her control, she forces her to pull off a Crimson Rainboom, revealing everyone's "Stand" to Chrysalis.
* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
* MoreThanMindControl: Chrysalis basically strongarmed Rainbow into submitting by whispering something to her.
* ParentalNeglect: While nothing can be said about her mother, she is very desperate to gain her father's praise.
* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
* MoreThanMindControl: Chrysalis basically strongarmed Rainbow into submitting by whispering something to her.
* ParentalNeglect: While nothing can be said about her mother, she is very desperate to gain her father's praise.
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* FromBadToWorse: After Chrysalis forces Rainbow Dash under her control, she forces her to pull off a Crimson Rainboom, revealing everyone's "Stand" Vanguardian to Chrysalis.
* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is''NOT'' '''''NOT''''' for the faint of heart...
* MoreThanMindControl: Chrysalis basically strongarmed Rainbow into submitting by whispering something toher.
her. [[TheUnreveal PONYMAN refuses to reveal what was said.]]
*ParentalNeglect: ParentalNeglect & WellDoneDaughterGirl: While nothing can be said about her mother, she Rainbow Dash is very desperate to gain her father's praise.
* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is
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* ActionGirl: Pretty much all of the main cast.
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* ActionGirl: Pretty much all of the main cast.
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** MoreThanMindControl: Chrysalis basically strongarmed Rainbow into submitting by whispering something to her.
* [[LawyerFriendlyCameo Lawyer-Friendly]] CaptainErsatz: A Vanguardian is [[SarcasmMode TOTALLY]] not a [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Stand]] or a Franchise/{{Persona}}, that's just silly of you. Please don't sue PONYMAN.
* [[LawyerFriendlyCameo Lawyer-Friendly]] CaptainErsatz: A Vanguardian is [[SarcasmMode TOTALLY]] not a [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Stand]] or a Franchise/{{Persona}}, that's just silly of you. Please don't sue PONYMAN.
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** TheUnreveal: We don't hear what Chrysalis said that would make it happen, though.
* [[WellDoneSonGuy Well Done Daughter! Girl]]: Rainbow Dash.
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* [[WellDoneSonGuy Well Done Daughter! Girl]]:
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* [[LawyerFriendlyCameo Lawyer-Friendly]] CaptainErsatz: A Vanguardian is [[SarcasmMode TOTALLY]] not a [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Stand]] or a [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], that's just silly of you. Please don't sue PONYMAN.
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* [[LawyerFriendlyCameo Lawyer-Friendly]] CaptainErsatz: A Vanguardian is [[SarcasmMode TOTALLY]] not a [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Stand]] or a [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/{{Persona}}, that's just silly of you. Please don't sue PONYMAN.
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* [[LawyerFriendlyCameo Lawyer-Friendly]] CaptainErsatz: A Vanguardian is [[SarcasmMode TOTALLY]] not a [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure Stand]] or a [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], that's just silly of you. Please don't sue PONYMAN.
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Lyra-Lyra's Bizarre Adventures is a Webcomic created by [[http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/ PONYMAAN]].
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!!''Lyra-Lyra's Bizarre Adventures'' contains the following tropes:
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!!''Lyra-Lyra's Bizarre Adventures'' contains the following tropes:
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* [[WellDoneSonGuy Well Done Daughter! Girl]]: Rainbow Dash.
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* [[WellDoneSonGuy Well Done Daughter! Girl]]: Rainbow Dash.Dash.
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* PreemptiveDeclaration: When Rainbow Dash has Chrysalis pinned to a wall by her neck with one hand, Rainbow is haughty enough to ask for last words. Chrysalis declares that if she's allowed to speak now, Rainbow will release her, and kneel before her. When Rainbow called her bluff, that's exactly what happened.
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* PreemptiveDeclaration: When Rainbow Dash has Chrysalis pinned to a wall by her neck with one hand, Rainbow is haughty enough to ask for last words. Chrysalis declares that if she's allowed to speak now, Rainbow will release her, and then kneel before her. When Rainbow called calls her bluff, that's exactly what happened.happens.
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* {{Pre-emptiveDeclaration}}: When Rainbow Dash has Chrysalis pinned to a wall by her neck with one hand, Rainbow is haughty enough to ask for last words. Chrysalis declares that if she's allowed to speak now, Rainbow will release her, and kneel before her. When Rainbow called her bluff, that's exactly what happened.
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* {{Pre-emptiveDeclaration}}: PreemptiveDeclaration: When Rainbow Dash has Chrysalis pinned to a wall by her neck with one hand, Rainbow is haughty enough to ask for last words. Chrysalis declares that if she's allowed to speak now, Rainbow will release her, and kneel before her. When Rainbow called her bluff, that's exactly what happened.
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* Pre-emptiveDeclaration: When Rainbow Dash has Chrysalis pinned to a wall by her neck with one hand, Rainbow is haughty enough to ask for last words. Chrysalis declares that if she's allowed to speak now, Rainbow will release her, and kneel before her. When Rainbow called her bluff, that's exactly what happened.
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* Pre-emptiveDeclaration: {{Pre-emptiveDeclaration}}: When Rainbow Dash has Chrysalis pinned to a wall by her neck with one hand, Rainbow is haughty enough to ask for last words. Chrysalis declares that if she's allowed to speak now, Rainbow will release her, and kneel before her. When Rainbow called her bluff, that's exactly what happened.
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** MoreThanMindControl: Chrysalis basically strongarmed Rainbow into submitting by whispering something in her ear.
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** MoreThanMindControl: Chrysalis basically strongarmed Rainbow into submitting by whispering something in her ear.to her.
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** MoreThanMindControl: Chrysalis basically strongarmed Rainbow into submitting by whispering something in her ear.
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* NeglectfulParents: While nothing can be said about her mother, she is very desperate to gain her father's praise.
* TheMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
* TheMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
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* NeglectfulParents: AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
* ParentalNeglect: While nothing can be said about her mother, she is very desperate to gain her father's praise.
*TheMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind Pre-emptiveDeclaration: When Rainbow Dash has Chrysalis pinned to a wall by her neck with one hand, Rainbow is ''NOT'' haughty enough to ask for the faint of heart...last words. Chrysalis declares that if she's allowed to speak now, Rainbow will release her, and kneel before her. When Rainbow called her bluff, that's exactly what happened.
* ParentalNeglect: While nothing can be said about her mother, she is very desperate to gain her father's praise.
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* TheMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
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* NeglectfulParents: While nothing can be said about her mother, she is very desperate to gain her father's praise.
* TheMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint ofheart...heart...
* [[WellDoneSonGuy Well Done Daughter! Girl]]: Rainbow Dash.
* TheMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of
* [[WellDoneSonGuy Well Done Daughter! Girl]]: Rainbow Dash.
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* TheMindIsaTerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
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* TheMindIsaTerribleThingToRead: TheMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
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You can start reading from the beginning ]]http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/By-Skywalker-s-Hand-Prelude-Part-1-of-4-379370925?q=gallery%3AINVISIBLEGUY-PONYMAN%2F37672108&qo=77 here.]]
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You can start reading from the beginning ]]http://ponymaan.[[http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/By-Skywalker-s-Hand-Prelude-Part-1-of-4-379370925?q=gallery%3AINVISIBLEGUY-PONYMAN%2F37672108&qo=77 here.]]
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Has two extra side-stories:
[[http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/Siren-Tales-001-647956383 Siren Tales]]
[[http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/The-Pony-The-Girl-and-the-Wardrobe-001-647981923 The Pony, The Girl and the Wardrobe]]
Has two extra side-stories:
[[http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/Siren-Tales-001-647956383 Siren Tales]]
[[http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/The-Pony-The-Girl-and-the-Wardrobe-001-647981923 The Pony, The Girl and the Wardrobe]]
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* BigBad: Queen Chrysalis.
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* BigBad: Queen Chrysalis.Chrysalis, as well as the Dazzlings.
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* ActionGirl: Pretty much all of the main cast.
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* FromBadToWorse: After Chrysalis forces Rainbow Dash under her control, she forces her to pull off a Crimson Rainboom, revealing everyone's "Stand" to Chrysalis.
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* FromBadToWorse: After Chrysalis forces Rainbow Dash under her control, she forces her to pull off a Crimson Rainboom, revealing everyone's "Stand" to Chrysalis.Chrysalis.
* TheMindIsaTerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
* TheMindIsaTerribleThingToRead: Pinkie Pie's mind is ''NOT'' for the faint of heart...
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Lyra-Lyra's Bizarre Adventures is a Webcomic created by [[http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/ PONYMAAN]].
The story centers around Lyra adventure in both Equestria and the human world, which eventually brings the mane six into the mix as well. But soon many of the groups past enemies start showing up...
You can start reading from the beginning ]]http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/By-Skywalker-s-Hand-Prelude-Part-1-of-4-379370925?q=gallery%3AINVISIBLEGUY-PONYMAN%2F37672108&qo=77 here.]]
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!!''Lyra-Lyra's Bizarre Adventures'' contains the following tropes:
* BigBad: Queen Chrysalis.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Rainbow Dash, at the hands of Chrysalis.
* FromBadToWorse: After Chrysalis forces Rainbow Dash under her control, she forces her to pull off a Crimson Rainboom, revealing everyone's "Stand" to Chrysalis.
The story centers around Lyra adventure in both Equestria and the human world, which eventually brings the mane six into the mix as well. But soon many of the groups past enemies start showing up...
You can start reading from the beginning ]]http://ponymaan.deviantart.com/art/By-Skywalker-s-Hand-Prelude-Part-1-of-4-379370925?q=gallery%3AINVISIBLEGUY-PONYMAN%2F37672108&qo=77 here.]]
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!!''Lyra-Lyra's Bizarre Adventures'' contains the following tropes:
* BigBad: Queen Chrysalis.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Rainbow Dash, at the hands of Chrysalis.
* FromBadToWorse: After Chrysalis forces Rainbow Dash under her control, she forces her to pull off a Crimson Rainboom, revealing everyone's "Stand" to Chrysalis.
