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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Bon Bon to the Doctor after he reveals proof he's from another dimension. Partly because she can't take the craziness of the sci-fi world and the dangerous creatures they face (which is ironic as her world really isn't any different). And mostly for the doctor laughing it off when they had a filly (Dinky) with them.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: [[spoiler:Foresight who reveals his true colors once the Doctor and he are alone. Most of chapter 9 is the Doctor trying to fight against him so he can reach Lyra.]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: [[spoiler:Foresight [[spoiler:Foresight, who reveals his true colors once the Doctor and he are alone. Most of chapter 9 is the Doctor trying to fight against him so he can reach Lyra.]]]]
* BitchSlap: Bon Bon to the Doctor after he reveals proof he's from another dimension. Partly because she can't take the craziness of the sci-fi world and the dangerous creatures they face (which is ironic as her world really isn't any different). And mostly for the doctor laughing it off when they had a filly (Dinky) with them.
* BitchSlap: Bon Bon to the Doctor after he reveals proof he's from another dimension. Partly because she can't take the craziness of the sci-fi world and the dangerous creatures they face (which is ironic as her world really isn't any different). And mostly for the doctor laughing it off when they had a filly (Dinky) with them.
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* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler: Foresight who finds his "talent" to be this. Since he can always predict everything and thus finds no surprises in life. However it's runs deeper as he predicted his girlfriend dying and [[DespairEventHorizon wasn't able to save her]].]] Ironically [[spoiler: the one surprise he does get in his entire life and it's the doctor actually managing to beat him despite his predictions.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler: Foresight who finds his "talent" to be this. Since this, since he can always predict everything and thus finds no surprises in life. However it's it runs deeper as he predicted his girlfriend dying and [[DespairEventHorizon wasn't able to save her]].]] Ironically [[spoiler: the one surprise he does get in his entire life and it's the doctor actually managing to beat him despite his predictions.]]
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* AbsenteeActor: The Main Six are not seen nor mentioned at all. Celestia's name is invoked throughout the story though.
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* AdaptionExpansion: Iron Will's past is explored in detail. It explores why he is a motivational speaker, to begin with.
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* AdaptionExpansion: AdaptationExpansion: Iron Will's past is explored in detail. It explores why he is a motivational speaker, to begin with.
