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*** Even worse; he died knowing that his life's work had failed ''because of him''. His [[FatalFlaw impatience]] lead to the deaths of the other researchers on the Genesis Project, Khan and his followers; and the crew of the USS ''Grissom'', and it was [[AllForNothing all for]] ''[[AllForNothing nothing]]''.
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*** Even worse; he died knowing that his life's work had failed ''because of him''. His [[FatalFlaw impatience]] lead led to the deaths of the other researchers on the Genesis Project, Khan and his followers; and the crew of the USS ''Grissom'', and it was [[AllForNothing all for]] ''[[AllForNothing nothing]]''.
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** And then there's Kirk's reaction. He tries to sit in his chair to absorb what has happened, only to [[PeopleFallOffChairs fall on the floor]]. The distraught look on his face suggests he's not even aware that he fell.
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** And then there's Kirk's reaction. [[DramaticSitdown He tries to sit in his chair to absorb what has happened, happened]], only to [[PeopleFallOffChairs fall on the floor]]. The distraught look on his face suggests he's not even aware that he fell.
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*** Even worse; he died knowing that his life's work had failed ''because of him''. His {{pride}} lead to the deaths of the other researchers on the Genesis Project, Khan and his followers, and the crew of the USS ''Grissom'', and it was all for ''nothing''.
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*** Even worse; he died knowing that his life's work had failed ''because of him''. His {{pride}} [[FatalFlaw impatience]] lead to the deaths of the other researchers on the Genesis Project, Khan and his followers, followers; and the crew of the USS ''Grissom'', and it was [[AllForNothing all for ''nothing''.for]] ''[[AllForNothing nothing]]''.
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*** There's some more fridge sadness when you take into account things said in the previous and following movies. In the last film, David was afraid that Starfleet wanted Genesis for warmongering purposes and didn't want his life's work to be used as a military weapon. Come Star Trek IV, the device he devoted his life to in hopes of helping those in need is being accused of being a weapon of aggression by the Klingons.
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*** There's some more fridge sadness when you take into account things said in the previous and following movies. In the last film, David was afraid that Starfleet wanted Genesis for warmongering purposes and didn't want his life's work to be used as a military weapon. Come Star ''Star Trek IV, IV'', the device he devoted his life to in hopes of helping those in need is being accused of being a weapon of aggression by the Klingons.
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** As if all the above isn't enough, pay attention to the rest of the ''Enterprise'' crew as they react to Kirk's heartbreak; notable are closeups of [=McCoy=] (Kirk's best friend next to Spock himself, and also a father) and Scotty (who lost his nephew in the previous movie). They barely knew David but they knew how devastated Kirk was.
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** As if all the above isn't enough, pay attention to the rest of the ''Enterprise'' crew as they react to Kirk's heartbreak; notable are closeups of [=McCoy=] (Kirk's best friend next to Spock himself, and also a father) and Scotty (who lost his nephew in the previous movie). They barely knew David David, but they knew how devastated Kirk was.
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--->'''Kirk:''' (''to the crew'') I swear to you, we're not finished yet.
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** To say nothing of the likelihood of Kirk having to contact Carol and inform her that not only is their son dead, but their project, the one they've likely spent years working on, is a dismal failure. That has got to hurt characters and viewers something ''fierce''.
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** Moreso when you remember that Sarek and Spock spent about twenty years not speaking when he left for Starfleet. For him to go from there to here...
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* Also heartwarming, but for a lot of the movie, Kirk has no idea if bringing Spock back will work or not. He still ''tries'', even when threatened he'll never sit on the Enterprise again, a fact that we were told over and over again was one of the most important things in the world to him.
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* Also heartwarming, but for a lot of the movie, Kirk has no idea if didn't even know that bringing Spock back will work or not. to life was an ''option''; as far as he knew, he was just retrieving Spock's body to complete Vulcan burial traditions. He still ''tries'', even when threatened he'll never sit on the Enterprise ''Enterprise'' again, a fact that we were told over and over again was one of the most important things in the world to him. him; as he states himself, if there is even a ''chance'' that Spock has an immortal soul, Kirk sees it as his duty to help his friend find peace.
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** And as the cherry on top of it all, there's no chance of gathering up David's body and taking it with them, which means that there's no chance for the closure of bringing him home for a proper burial, or, all the more heartbreaking, allowing his mother a chance to say goodbye.
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** If you thought the sequence of the Enterprise being destroyed in the film was bad, then it’s worse in the book, Kirk trying desperately to distance himself from the old girl, and tell himself it was just a machine, not actually grieving for her own destruction.
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** If you thought the sequence of the Enterprise being destroyed in the film was bad, then it’s worse in the book, Kirk trying desperately to distance himself from the old girl, and tell himself it was just a machine, not actually grieving for her own destruction. The look of shock on Scotty and Chekov's faces as they realise what he intends to do followed by grim determination as they confirm his commands to the self destruct system.
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** Scotty's reaction, however, indicates he's not upset at all. He looks up with a more interested, philosophical look. However, this is later subverted when Scotty turns up on ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'' in the episode "Relics", where he reveals that he truly misses her like his first love, and that "you don't ever love a woman like quite like that again."
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** Scotty's reaction, however, indicates he's not upset at all. He looks up with a more interested, philosophical look. However, this is later subverted when Scotty turns up on ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'' in the episode "Relics", where he reveals that he truly misses her like his first love, and that "you don't ever love a woman like quite like that again."
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** Scotty's reaction, however, indicates he's not upset at all. He looks up with a more interested, philosophical look.
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** Scotty's reaction, however, indicates he's not upset at all. He looks up with a more interested, philosophical look. However, this is later subverted when Scotty turns up on ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'' in the episode "Relics", where he reveals that he truly misses her like his first love, and that "you don't ever love a woman like quite like that again."
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** As if all the above isn't enough, pay attention to the rest of the ''Enterprise'' crew as they react to Kirk's heartbreak; notable are closeups of [=McCoy=] (Kirk's best friend next to Spock himself) and Scotty (who lost his nephew in the previous movie). They barely knew David but they knew how devastated Kirk was.
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** As if all the above isn't enough, pay attention to the rest of the ''Enterprise'' crew as they react to Kirk's heartbreak; notable are closeups of [=McCoy=] (Kirk's best friend next to Spock himself) himself, and also a father) and Scotty (who lost his nephew in the previous movie). They barely knew David but they knew how devastated Kirk was.
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'''Bones:''' [[IDidWhatIHadToDo What you had to do. What you always do. Turn death into a fighting chance to live]].
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'''Bones:''' [[IDidWhatIHadToDo [[YouDidTheRightThing What you had to do. What you always do. Turn death into a fighting chance to live]].
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*** There's some more fridge sadness when you take into account things said in the previous and following movies. In the last film, David was thought that Starfleet wanted Genesis for warmongering purposes and didn't want his life's work to be used as a military weapon. Come Star Trek IV, the device he devoted his life to in hopes of helping those in need is being accused of being a weapon of aggression by the Klingons.
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*** There's some more fridge sadness when you take into account things said in the previous and following movies. In the last film, David was thought afraid that Starfleet wanted Genesis for warmongering purposes and didn't want his life's work to be used as a military weapon. Come Star Trek IV, the device he devoted his life to in hopes of helping those in need is being accused of being a weapon of aggression by the Klingons.
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'''Bones:''' What you had to do. What you always do. Turn death into a fighting chance to live.
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'''Bones:''' [[IDidWhatIHadToDo What you had to do. What you always do. Turn death into a fighting chance to live.live]].
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** Kirk's reaction hammers it in further. ''[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone "My God, Bones. What have I done?"]]''
** Bones responds with “what you had to do, what you always do, turn death into a fighting chance to live”, a sum up of all the {{sadistic choice}}s the poor Admiral has had to go through. [[note]]Tarsus in which he survived but others didn’t, Edith with her death versus millions more who would perish if she lived, etc.[[/note]]
** Bones responds with “what you had to do, what you always do, turn death into a fighting chance to live”, a sum up of all the {{sadistic choice}}s the poor Admiral has had to go through. [[note]]Tarsus in which he survived but others didn’t, Edith with her death versus millions more who would perish if she lived, etc.[[/note]]
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** Kirk's reaction hammers it in further. ''[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone "My God, Bones. What have I done?"]]''
** Bones responds with “what you had to do, what you always do, turn death intoBones' response is a fighting chance to live”, a sum up good summation of all the {{sadistic choice}}s the poor Admiral has had to go through. through over the course of the series and the films to that point.[[note]]Tarsus in which he survived but others didn’t, Edith with her death versus millions more who would perish if she lived, etc.[[/note]][[/note]]
--->'''Kirk: [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My God, Bones. What have I done]]?\\
'''Bones:''' What you had to do. What you always do. Turn death into a fighting chance to live.
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'''Bones:''' What you had to do. What you always do. Turn death into a fighting chance to live.
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** HarsherInHindsight: After Creator/LeonardNimoy's death in 2015, the actors in this scene are the only main cast of the Original Series still alive.
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** HarsherInHindsight: After Creator/LeonardNimoy's death in 2015, 2015 until Creator/NichelleNichols' death in 2022, the actors in this scene are were the only main cast of the Original Series still alive.
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** As if all the above isn't enough, pay attention to the rest of the ''Enterprise'' crew as they react to Kirk's heartbreak; notable are closeups of [=McCoy=] (Kirk's best friend next to Spock himself) and Scotty (who lost his nephew in the previous movie).
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** As if all the above isn't enough, pay attention to the rest of the ''Enterprise'' crew as they react to Kirk's heartbreak; notable are closeups of [=McCoy=] (Kirk's best friend next to Spock himself) and Scotty (who lost his nephew in the previous movie). They barely knew David but they knew how devastated Kirk was.
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*** You can see Saavik struggling to maintain her Vulcan stoicism as she is given the responsibility of reporting to Kirk what transpired.