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* Episode 10, Arf takes a stand and attacks Precia in retaliation for her cruel treatment towards Fate. Not only does Precia attempt to murder Arf, she later lies to Fate and claims her familiar abandoned her out of cowardice.
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* Episode 10, Arf takes a stand and attacks Precia in retaliation for her cruel treatment towards Fate. Not only does Precia attempt to murder Arf, but she also later lies to Fate and claims her familiar abandoned her out of cowardice.
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--> '''Precia''': I spent so long grieving over the loss of my poor child. All that time I treated a worthless copy of her as my daughter. Are you listening Fate, I'm talking about you. I went through the trouble of giving you Alicia's memories, but you only ''look'' like her. A useless copy, a ''fake''. A ''cheap'' toy.
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--> '''Precia''': I spent so long grieving over the loss of my poor child. All that time I treated a worthless copy of her as my daughter. Are listening Fate, I'm talking about you. I went through the trouble of giving you Alicia's memories, but you only ''look'' like her. A useless copy, a ''fake''. A ''cheap'' toy.
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--> '''Precia''': I spent so long grieving over the loss of my poor child. All that time I treated a worthless copy of her as my daughter. Are you listening Fate, I'm talking about you. I went through the trouble of giving you Alicia's memories, but you only ''look'' like her. A useless copy, a ''fake''. A ''cheap'' toy.
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--> '''Fate''': Your You're right... I'm sorry, mother.
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** In particular, the reveal that Fate is just a clone and her mother has always hated her. The poor girl can't handle it and just [[HeroicBSOD shuts down]].
** The whipping scene. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sickening sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]].
** The whipping scene. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sickening sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]].
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** In particular, the reveal in episode 11 that Fate is just a clone and her mother has always hated her. The poor girl can't handle it and just [[HeroicBSOD shuts down]].
--> '''Precia''': I spent so long grieving over the loss of my poor child. All that time I treated a worthless copy of her as my daughter. Are listening Fate, I'm talking about you. I went through the trouble of giving you Alicia's memories, but you only ''look'' like her. A useless copy, a ''fake''. A ''cheap'' toy.
** The whippingscene.scene in episode 7. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sickening sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]].
--> '''Precia''': I spent so long grieving over the loss of my poor child. All that time I treated a worthless copy of her as my daughter. Are listening Fate, I'm talking about you. I went through the trouble of giving you Alicia's memories, but you only ''look'' like her. A useless copy, a ''fake''. A ''cheap'' toy.
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--> '''Precia''': (''coldly'') Horrible, I expected more from you.
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* Near the beginning of episode 6, Alisa and Suzuka's confusion over Nanoha's bout of depression. Alisa in particular is rather [[AngerBornOfWorry rude]] to Nanoha over it.
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* Episode 4, Fate harming the giant-sized kitten in order to take the Jewel Seed it had found.
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** In particular, the reveal that Fate is [[spoiler: just a clone and her mother has always hated her.]] The poor girl can't handle it and just [[HeroicBSOD shuts down]].
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** In particular, the reveal that Fate is [[spoiler: just a clone and her mother has always hated her.]] her. The poor girl can't handle it and just [[HeroicBSOD shuts down]].
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** Considering the fact that none of the characters in canon knew what Precia's last thoughts were, having her feel remorse for her actions was almost certainly WishFulfillment on Fate's part.
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* Fate sealing a Jewel Seed with her bare hands in episode 7 despite Arf begging her to stop due to the danger. Her hands start bleeding due to the sheer amount of magic pouring out of it and she can't even so much as stand up afterwards.
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** Before going to back to report her progress, Fate had bought Precia some pastries. We see after the whipping scene that Precia hasn't so much as even acknowledged that her daughter took the time to bring her a gift.
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** The whipping scene. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sicking sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]].
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** The whipping scene. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sicking sickening sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]].
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** The whipping scene. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sicking sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]]. In just one scene, Fate was elevated to eternal {{Woobie}} status.
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** The whipping scene. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sicking sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]]. eyes]].
* In episode 8, Arf begs Fate to give up on her quest for the Jewel Seeds and for the two of them to justone scene, run away since it's tearing her apart seeing Fate was elevated suffering so much. [[DramaticallyMissingThePoint Fate just says she'll have to eternal {{Woobie}} status.do a better job suppressing her feelings to avoid worrying her]].
* In episode 8, Arf begs Fate to give up on her quest for the Jewel Seeds and for the two of them to just
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-->'''Fate:''' There's something that I figured out. When a friend is crying, you're sad in the same way.
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** The whipping scene. Probably the most painful part is that they don't even show it. Instead, we repeatedly get the sicking sound of a whip hitting flesh followed by [[ScreamDiscretionShot Fate's screams]], while Arf is desperately trying to block out the horror that she's powerless to stop. When the screams finally stop, we get a shot of Fate's face that focuses on her eyes. [[ThousandYardStare Her empty, broken eyes]]. In just one scene, Fate was elevated to eternal {{Woobie}} status.
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. It's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' of them are heart-wrenching.
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. It's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' ''All'' of them are heart-wrenching.
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. If it isn't a [[CompleteMonster completely monstrous]] moment for Precia it's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' of them are heart-wrenching.
* The bridge scene in the last episode. Nuff said.
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. If it isn't a [[CompleteMonster completely monstrous]] moment for Precia it's It's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' of them are heart-wrenching.
* The bridge scene in the lastepisode. Nuff said.
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* Precia herself has such a moment. A single line transforms her from a near CompleteMonster into a TragicVillain.
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-->'''Precia:''' [[FatalFlaw I never notice things before it's too late]].
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-->'''Precia:''' [[FatalFlaw I never notice things things]] [[RememberedTooLate before it's too late]].
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. If it isn't a [[CompleteMonster completely monstrous]] moment for Precia it's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' of them are heart-wrenching.
* The bridge scene in the last episode. Nuff said.
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* Precia herself has such a moment. A single line transforms her from a near CompleteMonster into a TragicVillain.
-->'''Precia:''' [[FatalFlaw I never notice things before it's too late]].
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* The last scene in the fifth chapter.
-->'''Nanoha:''' I couldn't help anyone at all, could I?
* Linith's fate, being unable to stay with Fate for her very limited lifespan, both by her contract as a familiar and her master Precia's radiation poisoning. She hoped Fate would be able to have a good relationship with Precia, [[TragicDream but that proved impossible]] because of Fate's nature as a ReplacementGoldfish, so all Linith could do for Fate was train her well and express her hopes that she can find a friend.
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. If it isn't a [[CompleteMonster completely monstrous]] moment for Precia it's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' of them are heart-wrenching.
* The bridge scene in the last episode. Nuff said.
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* Precia herself has such a moment. A single line transforms her from a near CompleteMonster into a TragicVillain.
-->'''Precia:''' [[FatalFlaw I never notice things before it's too late]].
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* The last scene in the fifth chapter.
-->'''Nanoha:''' I couldn't help anyone at all, could I?
* Linith's fate, being unable to stay with Fate for her very limited lifespan, both by her contract as a familiar and her master Precia's radiation poisoning. She hoped Fate would be able to have a good relationship with Precia, [[TragicDream but that proved impossible]] because of Fate's nature as a ReplacementGoldfish, so all Linith could do for Fate was train her well and express her hopes that she can find a friend.
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. If it isn't a [[CompleteMonster completely monstrous]] moment for Precia it's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' of them are heart-wrenching.
* The bridge scene in the last episode. Nuff said.
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* Precia herself has such a moment. A single line transforms her from a near CompleteMonster into a TragicVillain.
-->'''Precia:''' [[FatalFlaw I never notice things before it's too late]].
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* The last scene in the fifth chapter.
-->'''Nanoha:''' I couldn't help anyone at all, could I?
* Linith's fate, being unable to stay with Fate for her very limited lifespan, both by her contract as a familiar and her master Precia's radiation poisoning. She hoped Fate would be able to have a good relationship with Precia, [[TragicDream but that proved impossible]] because of Fate's nature as a ReplacementGoldfish, so all Linith could do for Fate was train her well and express her hopes that she can find a friend.
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* ''Any'' scene involving both Fate and [[EvilMatriarch Precia]]. If it isn't a [[CompleteMonster completely monstrous]] moment for Precia it's a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Fate, and ''all'' of them are heart-wrenching.
* The bridge scene in the last episode. Nuff said.
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* Precia herself has such a moment. A single line transforms her from a near CompleteMonster into a TragicVillain.
-->'''Precia:''' [[FatalFlaw I never notice things before it's too late]].
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* The last scene in the fifth chapter.
-->'''Nanoha:''' I couldn't help anyone at all, could I?
* Linith's fate, being unable to stay with Fate for her very limited lifespan, both by her contract as a familiar and her master Precia's radiation poisoning. She hoped Fate would be able to have a good relationship with Precia, [[TragicDream but that proved impossible]] because of Fate's nature as a ReplacementGoldfish, so all Linith could do for Fate was train her well and express her hopes that she can find a friend.
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