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weather's demise due to the crash car was due to weather inadvertantly causing versing to crash, it wasn't more her fault than it was fate/luck
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* Weather Report's death at Pucci's hands, something that would've ended the conflict had Jolyne not arrived at the wrong time to give the BigBad a chance to kill the former. Everyone's thoughts on the matter do ''not'' help.
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* Weather Report's death at Pucci's hands, something that would've ended the conflict had Jolyne Versus not arrived at crashed the wrong time car due to Weather's own stand, giving to give the BigBad a chance to kill the former.latter. Everyone's thoughts on the matter do ''not'' help.
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'''Jolyne:''' ''It can't be... was it because [[NiceJobBreakingItHero we]] crashed the car? [[ItsAllMyFault Because I came here?]]'' [...] Weather... Just one more time... I want to talk to you one more time... in the breeze... I want to be able to speak to you.\\
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'''Jolyne:''' ''It can't be... was it because [[NiceJobBreakingItHero [[ItsAllMyFault we]] crashed the car? [[ItsAllMyFault Because I came here?]]'' [...] Weather... Just one more time... I want to talk to you one more time... in the breeze... I want to be able to speak to you.\\
