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* AbsenteeActor: Creator/MehcadBrooks, James Olsen, does not appear in this episode.
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* BigDamnHeroes: After seemingly defeated, the second White Martian rises up again and prepares to strike at J'onn, but Alex enters the scene and shoots him down with [[ChekovsGun the gun she got from Slaver's Moon]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: After seemingly defeated, the second White Martian rises up again and prepares to strike at J'onn, but Alex enters the scene and shoots him down with [[ChekovsGun [[ChekhovsGun the gun she got from Slaver's Moon]].
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* {{Irony}}: Kara feels the same kind of neglect Alex felt when she was hanging out with Superman.
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* {{Irony}}: Alex, who complained her sister was neglecting her back when Kara feels the same kind of neglect Alex felt when she was hanging out with Superman.Superman, now completely forgets about Kara's birthday because she's busy having fun with her girlfriend.
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** A seemingly beaten alien suddenly stands up behind the heroes, roaring, only to be taken out by a girl with an alien gun. [[Film/MenInBlack Yeah, we've seen that]].
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: {{Subverted}} with the White Martians. Not only thanks to M'gann herself, she also leaves Earth in the end to rally more open-minded individuals of her people against their racist society.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: {{Subverted}} with the White Martians. Not Martians, and not only thanks to M'gann herself, she also herself--she leaves Earth in the end to try to find and rally more open-minded individuals of her people against their racist society.
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-->'''J'onn:''' ''(over the comms to Kara)'' We were wrong! There are two White Martians in the building.\\
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-->'''J'onn:''' ''(over ''[over the comms to Kara)'' Kara]'' We were wrong! There are two White Martians in the building.\\
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'''Kara:''' ''(turns around nervously to face "Alex")'' ... Alex?\\
'''White Martian!Alex:''' ''(grinning sinisterly)'' You guys are so dumb. ''(growls and knocks Kara to the ground)''
* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: J'onn gives one to M'gann before the battle with Armek and M'gann returns it to him before she leaves for Mars.
* ArmorPiercingResponse: When Kara once again tries to talk Winn out of the Guardian thing, he shuts her down quickly, saying that it is not just James, but also his calling.
'''White Martian!Alex:''' ''(grinning sinisterly)'' You guys are so dumb. ''(growls and knocks Kara to the ground)''
* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: J'onn gives one to M'gann before the battle with Armek and M'gann returns it to him before she leaves for Mars.
* ArmorPiercingResponse: When Kara once again tries to talk Winn out of the Guardian thing, he shuts her down quickly, saying that it is not just James, but also his calling.
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'''Kara:''' ''(turns ''[turns around nervously to face "Alex")'' ..."Alex"]'' ... Alex?\\
'''White Martian!Alex:'''''(grinning sinisterly)'' ''[grinning sinisterly]'' You guys are so dumb. ''(growls ''[growls and knocks Kara to the ground)''
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: J'onn gives one to M'gann before the battle withArmek Armek, and M'gann returns it to him before she leaves for Mars.
* ArmorPiercingResponse: When Kara once again tries to talk Winn out of the Guardian thing, he shuts her down quickly, saying that it is not justJames, James's, but also his calling.
'''White Martian!Alex:'''
* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: J'onn gives one to M'gann before the battle with
* ArmorPiercingResponse: When Kara once again tries to talk Winn out of the Guardian thing, he shuts her down quickly, saying that it is not just
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-->'''Alex:''' ''(after shooting White Martian #2)'' Have I mentioned how much I love my new gun?
* BlatantLies: Despite her saying that it's okay, one can clearly see how upset Kara is about the fact that her sister wants to go to a concert with her girlfriend instead of coming to her Earth birthday.
* BlatantLies: Despite her saying that it's okay, one can clearly see how upset Kara is about the fact that her sister wants to go to a concert with her girlfriend instead of coming to her Earth birthday.
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-->'''Alex:''' ''(after shooting White Martian #2)'' Have I mentioned how much I love my new gun?
* BlatantLies: Despite her saying that it's okay, one can clearly see how upset Kara is about the fact that her sister wants to go to a concert with her girlfriend instead of coming to her Earthbirthday.birthday (the anniversary of the day she landed).
* BlatantLies: Despite her saying that it's okay, one can clearly see how upset Kara is about the fact that her sister wants to go to a concert with her girlfriend instead of coming to her Earth
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** When everyone is placing their hands by the Bunsen burner flame to check who the white Martian is, Alex stares at the flame warily and stays far away from it, giving us a hint that she is a white Martian in disguise.
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** When everyone is placing their hands by the Bunsen burner flame to check who the white White Martian is, Alex stares at the flame warily and stays far away from it, giving us a hint that she is a white White Martian in disguise.
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** Later, when Alex and Kara are searching the basement for Armek, Alex signals to Kara using some hand signals to look around the corner. Kara has no idea what those hand signals mean. But Alex would know her sister well enough to know that Kara doesn't know these hand signals; in fact, Alex has never used hand signals with Kara before, hinting that "Alex" here is actually a white Martian.
* FromBadToWorse: So if being trapped in the DEO with a shapeshifting killer alien isn't bad enough, how about said alien using Winn's access to mess with the building's reactor, setting it to explode, and take out a large chunk of National City along with it?
* FromBadToWorse: So if being trapped in the DEO with a shapeshifting killer alien isn't bad enough, how about said alien using Winn's access to mess with the building's reactor, setting it to explode, and take out a large chunk of National City along with it?
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** Later, when Alex and Kara are searching the basement for Armek, Alex signals to Kara using some hand signals to look around the corner. Kara has no idea what those hand signals mean. But Alex would know her sister well enough to know that Kara doesn't know these hand signals; in fact, Alex has never used hand signals with Kara before, hinting that "Alex" here is actually a white White Martian.
* FromBadToWorse: So if being trapped in the DEO with ashapeshifting shape-shifting killer alien isn't bad enough, how about said alien using Winn's access to mess with the building's reactor, setting it to explode, and take out a large chunk of National City along with it?
* FromBadToWorse: So if being trapped in the DEO with a
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* ItsAllMyFault: M'gann is quick to blame herself for the danger she has placed J'onn, Kara and everyone at the DEO.
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* ItsAllMyFault: M'gann is quick to blame herself for the danger she has placed that J'onn, Kara Kara, and everyone at the DEO.DEO find themselves in, since the White Martians are after her.
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* LiteraryAllusionTitle: For Creator/RayBradbury's ''Literature/TheMartianChronicles''.
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* LiteraryAllusionTitle: For To Creator/RayBradbury's ''Literature/TheMartianChronicles''.
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* MaritalRapeLicense: Not directly stated, but more than subtlety implied by M'gann in regards to her ArrangedMarriage with Armek.
* MoralMyopia: From the White Martians point of view, the Green Martians are monsters, and disguising yourself as one of them or helping them is akin to a war crime.
* MoralMyopia: From the White Martians point of view, the Green Martians are monsters, and disguising yourself as one of them or helping them is akin to a war crime.
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* MaritalRapeLicense: Not directly stated, but more than subtlety implied by M'gann in regards to her ArrangedMarriage with Armek.
Armek. When he approaches her in the bar, he leers that "the nest has been cold" since she left, to which she retorts that it always was.
* MoralMyopia: From the WhiteMartians Martians' point of view, the Green Martians are monsters, and disguising yourself as one of them or helping them is akin to a war crime.
* MoralMyopia: From the White
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: Armek proudly boasts how much of a paradise Mars is, now that the green "vermin" has been wiped out and is seemingly looking forward to do the same to humanity. M'gann wasn't exaggerating when she described him as the worst of the worst of her people.
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: Armek proudly boasts about how much of a paradise Mars is, now that the green "vermin" has have been wiped out out, and is seemingly looking forward to do doing the same to humanity. M'gann wasn't isn't exaggerating when she described describes him as the worst of the worst of her people.
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* OutOfFocus: Given that the last episode ended with a wedge being formed between her and the men in her life, outside of Kara and Mon-El, and a brief scene between her and Winn, this episode focus more on J'onn and M'gann, and Kara's relationship with Alex.
* PutOnABus: Well, more like Spacecraft, M'gann decides to return to Mars to help bring back civility and peaceful revolution among other White Martians who think like her.
* PutOnABus: Well, more like Spacecraft, M'gann decides to return to Mars to help bring back civility and peaceful revolution among other White Martians who think like her.
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* OutOfFocus: Given that the The last episode ended with a wedge being formed between her Kara and the men in her life, outside of life. Besides brief scenes between Kara and Mon-El, and a brief scene between her and Winn, this episode focus focuses more on J'onn and M'gann, and Kara's relationship with Alex.
* PutOnABus:Well, more like Spacecraft, M'gann decides to return to Mars to help bring back civility and organize peaceful revolution among with other White Martians who think like her.
* PutOnABus:
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** The episode's title refers to [[Literature/TheMartianChronicles Ray Bradbury's classic novel/short story collection]].
* ShapeshifterGuiltTrip: The White Martian disguised as Alex stays in that form to fight Kara. When it lands its first blow on Kara, Kara hesitates, stunned for long enough that the white Martian teases her for being too afraid to fight.
* SpotTheImposter: J'onn uses fire from a Bunsen burner to expose the infiltrating White Martian among the DEO.
* ShapeshifterGuiltTrip: The White Martian disguised as Alex stays in that form to fight Kara. When it lands its first blow on Kara, Kara hesitates, stunned for long enough that the white Martian teases her for being too afraid to fight.
* SpotTheImposter: J'onn uses fire from a Bunsen burner to expose the infiltrating White Martian among the DEO.
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** The episode's title refers to Creator/RayBradbury's [[Literature/TheMartianChronicles Ray Bradbury's classic novel/short story collection]].
** Maggie surprises Alex with Music/BarenakedLadies tickets, and "One Week" plays over the scene of them getting ready for the concert, before Alex leaves to talk to Kara and gets tangled up in the events at the DEO. Later, Winn says that it feels like they were locked down in there for "one week," prompting Alex to call Maggie and apologize.
* ShapeshifterGuiltTrip: The White Martian disguised as Alex stays in that form to fight Kara. When it lands its first blow on Kara, Kara hesitates, stunned for long enough that thewhite White Martian teases her for being too afraid to fight.
* SpotTheImposter: J'onn uses fire from a Bunsen burner to expose the infiltrating White Martian among theDEO.DEO agents.
** Maggie surprises Alex with Music/BarenakedLadies tickets, and "One Week" plays over the scene of them getting ready for the concert, before Alex leaves to talk to Kara and gets tangled up in the events at the DEO. Later, Winn says that it feels like they were locked down in there for "one week," prompting Alex to call Maggie and apologize.
* ShapeshifterGuiltTrip: The White Martian disguised as Alex stays in that form to fight Kara. When it lands its first blow on Kara, Kara hesitates, stunned for long enough that the
* SpotTheImposter: J'onn uses fire from a Bunsen burner to expose the infiltrating White Martian among the
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-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' What's wrong, Supergirl? Too afraid to put up a fight?
-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' To tell you the truth, I'm glad they found your sister. It's so exhausting pretending to care about your silly little feelings.\\
-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' To tell you the truth, I'm glad they found your sister. It's so exhausting pretending to care about your silly little feelings.\\
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-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' What's wrong, Supergirl? Too afraid to put up a fight?
-->'''Whitefight?\\\
'''White Martian!Alex:''' To tell you the truth, I'm glad they found your sister. It's so exhausting pretending to care about your silly little feelings.\\
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'''White Martian!Alex:''' To tell you the truth, I'm glad they found your sister. It's so exhausting pretending to care about your silly little feelings.\\
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* WhamShot: M'gann and J'onn find Winn cocooned to the ceiling. Then they see another on a nearby wall and realize a second White Martian is impersonating Alex.
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* WhamShot: M'gann and J'onn find Winn cocooned to the ceiling. Then they see another on a nearby wall and realize that a second White Martian is impersonating Alex.
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* YouAreACreditToYourRace: J'onn has fully gotten over his hatred against M'gann.
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* YouAreACreditToYourRace: J'onn has fully gotten over his hatred against M'gann.M'gann.
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* ChekovsGun: A literal one. Alex uses the gun she called dibs on at Slaver's Moon to shoot the second White Martian right when he's about to strike J'onn.
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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: A literal one. Alex uses the gun she called dibs on at Slaver's Moon to shoot the second White Martian right when he's about to strike J'onn.
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'''J'onn:''' It’s Alex! The other White Martian has shape-shifted into Alex!\\
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'''J'onn:''' It’s It's Alex! The other White Martian has shape-shifted into Alex!\\
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'''Kara:''' ''(turns around nervously to face "Alex")'' ...Alex?\\
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'''Kara:''' ''(turns around nervously to face "Alex")'' ... Alex?\\
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** The whole setup of a shapeshifting alien in a locked down base is straight from ''Film/TheThing''.
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** The whole setup of a shapeshifting alien in a locked down base is straight from ''Film/TheThing''.''Film/TheThing1982''.
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M'gann fears that a White Martian named Armek, has come to drag her back to Mars, and while J'onn and Kara strive to protect her, they also face the frightening possibility that anyone in the DEO could be him in disguise.
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M'gann fears that a White Martian named Armek, Armek has come to drag her back to Mars, and while J'onn and Kara strive to protect her, they also face the frightening possibility that anyone in the DEO could be him in disguise.
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* ChekovsGun: Alex uses the gun she called dibs on at Slaver's Moon to shoot the second White Martian right when he's about to strike J'onn.
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* ChekovsGun: A literal one. Alex uses the gun she called dibs on at Slaver's Moon to shoot the second White Martian right when he's about to strike J'onn.
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** When J'onn and M'gann are speaking in Martian, the camera zooms in on Alex's face.
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* ShapeshifterGuiltTrip: The White Martian disguised as Alex stays in that form to fight Kara. When it lands its first blow on Kara, Kara hesitates, stunned for long enough that the white Martian teases her for being too afraid to fight.
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Do we even know that it wasn't Alex in the scene where they first meet up at the DEO? It's never made very clear. And even if Alex had only heard of the plans earlier that day, she still could be surprised that Kara only made them that morning, as opposed to the previous day.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Alex is surprised when Kara says she only made plans for her Earth-birthday that morning, even though in the earlier scene she had clearly not heard the plans before, foreshadowing that it's really a White Martian disguised as Alex.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** When everyone is placing their hands by the Bunsen burner flame to check who the white Martian is, Alex stares at the flame warily and stays far away from it, giving us a hint that she issurprised a white Martian in disguise.
** Later, when Alex and Karasays she only made plans are searching the basement for Armek, Alex signals to Kara using some hand signals to look around the corner. Kara has no idea what those hand signals mean. But Alex would know her Earth-birthday sister well enough to know that morning, even though Kara doesn't know these hand signals; in the earlier scene she had clearly not heard the plans fact, Alex has never used hand signals with Kara before, foreshadowing hinting that it's really "Alex" here is actually a White Martian disguised as Alex.white Martian.
** When everyone is placing their hands by the Bunsen burner flame to check who the white Martian is, Alex stares at the flame warily and stays far away from it, giving us a hint that she is
** Later, when Alex and Kara
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* TrashTalk: The White Martian disguised as Alex really gets a kick out of insulting Kara while it fights her.
-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' What's wrong, Supergirl? Too afraid to put up a fight?
-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' To tell you the truth, I'm glad they found your sister. It's so exhausting pretending to care about your silly little feelings.\\
'''Kara:''' If you hurt her--\\
'''White Martian!Alex:''' You'll what? Whine at me?
-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' What's wrong, Supergirl? Too afraid to put up a fight?
-->'''White Martian!Alex:''' To tell you the truth, I'm glad they found your sister. It's so exhausting pretending to care about your silly little feelings.\\
'''Kara:''' If you hurt her--\\
'''White Martian!Alex:''' You'll what? Whine at me?