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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Raven verbally disassembles Cinder's team (two manipulated children, a disgraced scientist, and an egomaniac), Watts pipes in to add he used to be a doctor as well.
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Raven verbally disassembles Cinder's team (two as two manipulated children, a disgraced scientist, and an egomaniac), egomaniac, Watts pipes in up to add object to being labelled as ''just'' a scientist -- he used to be a doctor as well. well -- before confirming that everything else she said is correct.
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* MeaningfulRename: Raven finds the idea that Cinder's surname being "Fall" too coincidental given her status as the Fall Maiden, and accuses her of renaming herself in a bout of egomania. Watt's response strongly implies Raven is right.
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* MeaningfulRename: Raven finds the idea that Cinder's surname being "Fall" too coincidental given her status as the Fall Maiden, and accuses her of renaming herself in a bout of egomania. Watt's Watts' response strongly implies Raven is right.
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Raven verbally disassembles Cinder's team (two manipulated children, a disgraced scientist, and an egomaniac), Watts pipes in to add he used to be a doctor as well.
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* MeaningfulRename: Raven finds the idea that Cinder's surname being "Fall" too coincidental given her status as the Fall Maiden, and accuses her of renaming herself in a bout of egomania. Watt's response strongly implies Raven is right.
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This isn't just for someone who uses a fire power, the character needs to be fire-themed.
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* CombinationAttack: The Albain brothers' high tech daggers have a [[PlayingWithFire fire]] and a [[BlowYouAway wind]] blast of energy that they use against Ghira, but Sun is able to deflect it with his staff.
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* CombinationAttack: The Albain brothers' high tech high-tech daggers have a [[PlayingWithFire fire]] fire and a [[BlowYouAway wind]] blast of energy that they use against Ghira, but Sun is able to deflect it with his staff.
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[[WMG:[[center:[-'''RECAP:'''\\
[[Recap/{{RWBY}} Index]] | [[Recap/RWBYVolume5CharacterShort Character Short 1]] | [[Recap/RWBYVolume5CharacterShort2 Character Short 2]] | [[Recap/RWBYVolume5CharacterShort3 Character Short 3]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E1WelcomeToHaven 1]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E2DreadInTheAir 2]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E3UnforeseenComplications 3]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E4LightingTheFire 4]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E5NecessarySacrifice 5]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E6KnownByItsSong 6]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E7RestAndResolutions 7]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E8AloneTogether 8]] | '''9''' | [[Recap/RWBYV5E10TrueColors 10]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E11TheMoreTheMerrier 11]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E12VaultOfTheSpringMaiden 12]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E13Downfall 13]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E14HavensFate 14]]]]-]]]
[[Recap/{{RWBY}} Index]] | [[Recap/RWBYVolume5CharacterShort Character Short 1]] | [[Recap/RWBYVolume5CharacterShort2 Character Short 2]] | [[Recap/RWBYVolume5CharacterShort3 Character Short 3]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E1WelcomeToHaven 1]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E2DreadInTheAir 2]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E3UnforeseenComplications 3]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E4LightingTheFire 4]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E5NecessarySacrifice 5]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E6KnownByItsSong 6]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E7RestAndResolutions 7]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E8AloneTogether 8]] | '''9''' | [[Recap/RWBYV5E10TrueColors 10]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E11TheMoreTheMerrier 11]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E12VaultOfTheSpringMaiden 12]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E13Downfall 13]] | [[Recap/RWBYV5E14HavensFate 14]]]]-]]]
->Written by Miles Luna & Kerry Shawcross\\
Directed by Kerry Shawcross, Gray G. Haddock & Miles Luna
Directed by Kerry Shawcross, Gray G. Haddock & Miles Luna
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->''"This path won't be easy for us either, but we must do what's right for the tribe."''
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'''Volume 5, Episode 9:'''
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'''Volume 5, Episode 9:'''09:'''
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[[caption-width-right:350:A deal with the devil.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:A deal with the devil.]]
->''"There is a slim chance you and your Maiden could escape today, but if you know our master as well as you claim to, then you know you could never truly escape her. But we come bearing an olive branch."''
-->-- '''Cinder Fall'''
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deal with the devil.]]
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* RealityEnsues: Raven is acutely aware of the fact that her tribe will be in serious trouble the second Salem's group gets what they want, a viewpoint not helped by Raven having acted against her in the past ''and'' Cinder casually mentioning they would have destroyed the camp if the Spring Maiden wasn't there. Helping an OmnicidalManiac, especially one you've gotten on the bad side of previously, won't get you off of their list. Ever.
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* TheReveal: Vernal, Raven's trusted second-in-command, is the Spring Maiden that both Cinder's group and Ozpin's group [[LivingMacGuffin have been so insistent on locating]].
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* TheReveal: Vernal, Raven's trusted second-in-command, is the Spring Maiden that both Cinder's group and Ozpin's group [[LivingMacGuffin have been so insistent on locating]].
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We don't know what Salem's long-term goal is.
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* RealityEnsues: Salem's stated goal is destroying humanity, something Raven is acutely aware of. Raven pointedly notes to Vernal that the tribe is dead the second Salem's group gets what they want, a viewpoint not helped by Raven having acted against her in the past ''and'' Cinder casually mentioning they would have destroyed the camp if the Spring Maiden wasn't there. Helping an OmnicidalManiac, especially one you've gotten on the bad side of previously, won't get you off of their list. Ever.
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* RealityEnsues: Salem's stated goal is destroying humanity, something Raven is acutely aware of. Raven pointedly notes to Vernal of the fact that the her tribe is dead will be in serious trouble the second Salem's group gets what they want, a viewpoint not helped by Raven having acted against her in the past ''and'' Cinder casually mentioning they would have destroyed the camp if the Spring Maiden wasn't there. Helping an OmnicidalManiac, especially one you've gotten on the bad side of previously, won't get you off of their list. Ever.
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* WeatherManipulation: Vernal proves her status as the Spring Maiden by conjuring strong winds and dark storm-clouds. [[spoiler:Except that it wasn't her doing it; she kept her eyes closed to hide the lack of the signature GlowingEyesOfDoom that signals when a maiden is using her powers.]]
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* WeatherManipulation: Vernal proves her status as the Spring Maiden by conjuring strong winds and dark storm-clouds. [[spoiler:Except that it wasn't her doing it; she kept her eyes closed to hide the lack of the signature GlowingEyesOfDoom that signals when a maiden is using her powers.]]
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* WeatherManipulation: Vernal proves her status as the Spring Maiden by conjuring strong winds and dark storm-clouds.
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* WeatherManipulation: Vernal proves her status as the Spring Maiden by conjuring strong winds and dark storm-clouds. [[spoiler:Except that it wasn't her doing it; she kept her eyes closed to hide the lack of the signature GlowingEyesOfDoom that signals when a maiden is using her powers.]]
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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: Cinder belittles and shameless mocking of anyone , Watts's consending remarks to his own allies, and Raven's pride in one location opens three [[DeadpanSnarker deadpan snarkers that enjoy]] throwing out a lot of snide comments against each other, including the former two despite being on the same side, while negotiating.
-->'''Raven:''' Two children you've tricked into following you, a disgraced Atlesian scientist, and a Fall Maiden with a surname so appropriate, she probably picked it herself. Something tells me you've got more than a slight case of egomania. Is that about right?\\
'''Watts:''' [[BrutalHonesty Technically I was also a doctor, but I must say the rest was spot on]].\\
'''Cinder:''' Aren't you perceptive?\\
'''Raven:''' It's what's kept me alive.
-->'''Raven:''' Two children you've tricked into following you, a disgraced Atlesian scientist, and a Fall Maiden with a surname so appropriate, she probably picked it herself. Something tells me you've got more than a slight case of egomania. Is that about right?\\
'''Watts:''' [[BrutalHonesty Technically I was also a doctor, but I must say the rest was spot on]].\\
'''Cinder:''' Aren't you perceptive?\\
'''Raven:''' It's what's kept me alive.
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%% * SnarkToSnarkCombat: Cinder belittles Cinder, Watts, and shameless mocking of anyone , Watts's consending remarks to his own allies, and Raven's pride in one location opens three [[DeadpanSnarker deadpan snarkers that enjoy]] throwing Raven throw out a lot of snide comments against each other, including the former two despite being on the same side, while negotiating.
negotiating.
%% -->'''Raven:''' Two children you've tricked into following you, a disgraced Atlesian scientist, and a Fall Maiden with a surname so appropriate, she probably picked it herself. Something tells me you've got more than a slight case of egomania. Is that about right?\\
%% '''Watts:''' [[BrutalHonesty Technically I was also a doctor, but I must say the rest was spot on]].\\
%% '''Cinder:''' Aren't you perceptive?\\
perceptive?\\
%% '''Raven:''' It's what's kept me alive.
%% -->'''Raven:''' Two children you've tricked into following you, a disgraced Atlesian scientist, and a Fall Maiden with a surname so appropriate, she probably picked it herself. Something tells me you've got more than a slight case of egomania. Is that about right?\\
%% '''Raven:''' It's what's kept me alive.
