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* MemeticBadass: InUniverse, Mike and the Bots seize on an off-hand reference to Fred Burroughs (Sister Ann's black friend from the halfway-house-for-huge-guys) as the basis for a RunningGag hyping him as a badass. This culminates in a dramatic scene of the Runaway working out in his jail cell, the camera [[MrFanservice slowly panning up his torso]], with Crow announcing, "Ladies and gentlemen... '''Fred Burroughs'''!"
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* MemeticBadass: InUniverse, Mike and the Bots seize on an off-hand reference to Fred Burroughs (Sister Ann's black friend from the halfway-house-for-huge-guys) as the basis for a RunningGag hyping him as a badass. This culminates in a dramatic scene of the Runaway working out in his jail cell, the camera [[MrFanservice slowly panning up his torso]], with Crow Servo announcing, "Ladies and gentlemen... '''Fred Burroughs'''!"
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"...er... "''War''"."\\
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"...er... "''War''".''[='=]War[='=]''."\\
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[[caption-width-right:350:"''Future Wax!''"]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"...er... "''War''"."]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"Oh, yeah. Heh, sorry."]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"...er... "''War''"."]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"Oh, yeah. Heh, sorry."]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:"''Future Wax!''"]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"...Wax!''"\\
"...er... "''War''"."]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"Oh,"\\
"Oh, yeah. Heh, sorry."]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"...
"...er... "''War''".
[[caption-width-right:350:"Oh,
"Oh, yeah. Heh, sorry."]]
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* ImplausibleDeniability: When The Runaway obviously removes his own shirt during the final battle:
--> '''Servo''': "My shirt was knocked off. It ''was'' knocked off, I swear!"
--> '''Servo''': "My shirt was knocked off. It ''was'' knocked off, I swear!"
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When The Runaway obviously removes his own shirt during the final battle:
--> '''Servo''': "My shirt was knocked off. It ''was'' knocked off, I swear!"
--> '''Servo''': "My shirt was knocked off. It ''was'' knocked off, I swear!"
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[[caption-width-right:350:"''Future Wax!'']]
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[[caption-width-right:350:"''Future Wax!'']]Wax!''"]]
