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** A positive Deconstruction: Bob starts [[BecomingTheMask to enjoy these acts of kindness towards Alice, bringing him to become a genuine]] NiceGuy.
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** A positive Deconstruction: Bob starts [[BecomingTheMask [[GoodFeelsGood to enjoy these acts of kindness towards Alice, Alice,]] [[BecomingTheMask bringing him to become a genuine]] NiceGuy.
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** "No, Alice, [[LiteralMinded Charlie isn't literally]] a [[FunnyAnimal talking dog]]." Or, conversely, "Oh, I get it now, Bob. Charlie and Jane are a couple of [[TalkingAnimal dog]]-[[DogFaces people]], and he's trying real hard to please her. He's a '''doggie nice guy'''."
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** AllGirlsWantBadBoys
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys
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** Bob is a firm believer in AllGirlsWantBadBoys and is an absolute jackass to her at every turn, hoping that she'll want him.
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys
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** After Bob tells Alice his feelings and gets rejected, he simply decides to cut all ties with her. Alice however feels that they're friends and tries to get him to talk with her, though at this point, he no longer cares.
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** Inverted Deconstruction: Bob's continuous jackassery towards Alice doesn't make her want him. In fact, she grows to absolutely hate Bob and tells him to fuck off or she'll kill him the next time they meet.
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** Another positive Deconstruction: Bob realizes that his clamoring for Alice's approval is a sign of a deep seated lack of self-respect. His friends suggest he go to therapy to rectify this.
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** Another positive Deconstruction: Bob realizes that his clamoring for Alice's approval is a sign of a deep seated deep-seated lack of self-respect. His friends suggest he go to therapy to rectify this.this, which is the first step in a journey of self-acceptance
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**Another positive Deconstruction: Bob realizes that his clamoring for Alice's approval is a sign of a deep seated lack of self-respect. His friends suggest he go to therapy to rectify this.
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* '''Justified''': Bob hopes to win Alice's affection by sheer perseverance.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Bob hopes to win Alice's affection by sheerperseverance.perseverance.
** Bob is indoctrinated by his friends, authority figures, and the media to pursue the idea of love above all else and to win a partner's heart via persistent friendliness.
** Bob hopes to win Alice's affection by sheer
** Bob is indoctrinated by his friends, authority figures, and the media to pursue the idea of love above all else and to win a partner's heart via persistent friendliness.
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* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': Alice is a ManipulativeBitch who knows how to lead men on to get what she wants and looks especially for {{Nice Guy}}s so as to seduce them and have them do whatever she asks them to.
* '''Exploited''': Alice is a ManipulativeBitch who knows how to lead men on to get what she wants and looks especially for {{Nice Guy}}s so as to seduce them and have them do whatever she asks them to.
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* '''Invoked''': ???
Bob approaches Dick, a self-proclaimed "romance expert", for advice on how to win Alice's affections. Dick advises Bob to be persistently friendly towards her because "that's what people do these days".
* '''Exploited''': Alice is a ManipulativeBitch who knows how to lead men on to get what shewants and looks especially for wants. Thus, she targets {{Nice Guy}}s so as to seduce them and have them do whatever she asks them to.
* '''Exploited''': Alice is a ManipulativeBitch who knows how to lead men on to get what she
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"Friend? Bob isn't gay, Alice.".
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"Friend? Bob isn't gay, Alice."."
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** Bob's constant friendliness is portrayed as insincere, intrusive and merely a means to an end rather than genuine niceness.
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** A positive Deconstruction: Bob starts [[BecomingTheMask to enjoy these acts of kindness towards Alice, bringing him to become a genuine]] NiceGuy.
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Love You And Everyone is no longer a trope
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* '''Averted''': Either Bob's just [[LoveYouAndEverybody nice to everyone]], or he decides to be more [[LoveConfession direct]] (and [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy gracefully accepts her refusal if she give it]]).
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* '''Averted''': Either Bob's just [[LoveYouAndEverybody nice to everyone]], everyone, or he decides to be more [[LoveConfession direct]] (and [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy gracefully accepts her refusal if she give it]]).
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** Alice falls in love with Charlie because Bob's tactic of taking the slow way proved to be too ineffectual for her to notice Bob's feelings.
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* '''Inverted''': Bob is in love with Alice but [[CelibateHero doesn't want to be]] and so [[SugarAndIcePersonality treats her coldly to keep her at a distance]].
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* '''Inverted''': Bob [[{{Tsundere}} Bob]] is in love with Alice but [[CelibateHero doesn't want to be]] and so Alice, yet [[SugarAndIcePersonality treats her coldly to keep her at a distance]]. distance]].
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* '''Conversed''': "Why is it that so many guys believe being nice to a girl can actually win her over when it's already established that it just never works?"
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-->"Why is it that so many guys in these shows believe being nice to a girl canactually win her over when it's already established that it just never works?"works?"\\
"That's quite interesting, what do you think they should do to make it work?"\\
"Well, I think these guys should just tell the girl they like about how they feel, instead of spending three seasons 'being nice'."\\
"Fair point, except these shows really like to drag on, to create tension or something like that."
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"That's quite interesting, what do you think they should do to make it work?"\\
"Well, I think these guys should just tell the girl they like about how they feel, instead of spending three seasons 'being nice'."\\
"Fair point, except these shows really like to drag on, to create tension or something like that."
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* '''Inverted''': Bob is in love with Alice, but [[CelibateHero doesn't want to be]] and so [[SugarAndIcePersonality treats her coldly to keep her at a distance]].
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* '''Inverted''': Bob is in love with Alice, Alice but [[CelibateHero doesn't want to be]] and so [[SugarAndIcePersonality treats her coldly to keep her at a distance]].
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** Bob and Alice [[RelationshipUpgrade finally get together]]- only for her to [[YourCheatingHeart cheat on him]], because she was never that attracted to him in the first place.
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** Bob and Alice [[RelationshipUpgrade finally get together]]- only for her to [[YourCheatingHeart cheat on him]], him, because she was never that attracted to him in the first place.
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'''Basic Trope''': A guy (though sometimes it can be a girl) displays constant friendliness and helpfulness towards a girl, in hopes of sparking romantic feelings in her.
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'''Basic Trope''': A guy (though sometimes it can be a girl) character displays constant friendliness and helpfulness towards a girl, another character, in hopes of sparking romantic feelings in her.them.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Bob and Alice sit down and talk about it. Bob confesses his feelings, Alice says he's not what she's looking for and that maybe he's idealizing her a little too much. She says that he should find himself a girl who can actually desire and love him instead of wasting time on her. Bob eventually accepts the situation and both agree to part ways since such a relationship is needlessly hurtful and just can't end well.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Bob and Alice sit down and talk about it. Bob confesses his feelings, Alice says he's not what she's looking for and that maybe he's idealizing her a little too much. She says that he should find himself a girl who can actually desire and love him instead of wasting time on her. Bob eventually accepts the situation and both agree to part ways since such a relationship is needlessly hurtful and just can't endwell. well.
** Bob decides that he wants Alice to be happy above all else, and so he parts ways with Alice.
** Bob and Alice sit down and talk about it. Bob confesses his feelings, Alice says he's not what she's looking for and that maybe he's idealizing her a little too much. She says that he should find himself a girl who can actually desire and love him instead of wasting time on her. Bob eventually accepts the situation and both agree to part ways since such a relationship is needlessly hurtful and just can't end
** Bob decides that he wants Alice to be happy above all else, and so he parts ways with Alice.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Despite being constantly rejected, Bob will just not let Alice go. Eventually, Bob becomes a StalkerWithACrush towards Alice who ends up telling him to stay away from her or she'll call the cops. Bob later realizes that no romantic future had even been possible for them, and that since he could also never have ''really'' accepted being JustFriends either, they should've ended the relationship years ago.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Despite being constantly rejected, Bob will just not let Alice go. Eventually, Bob becomes a StalkerWithACrush towards Alice who ends up telling him to stay away from her or she'll call the cops. Bob later realizes that no romantic future had even been possible for them, and that since he could also never have ''really'' accepted being JustFriends either, they should've ended the relationship yearsago.ago.
** Bob and Alice [[RelationshipUpgrade finally get together]]- only for her to [[YourCheatingHeart cheat on him]], because she was never that attracted to him in the first place.
** Despite being constantly rejected, Bob will just not let Alice go. Eventually, Bob becomes a StalkerWithACrush towards Alice who ends up telling him to stay away from her or she'll call the cops. Bob later realizes that no romantic future had even been possible for them, and that since he could also never have ''really'' accepted being JustFriends either, they should've ended the relationship years
** Bob and Alice [[RelationshipUpgrade finally get together]]- only for her to [[YourCheatingHeart cheat on him]], because she was never that attracted to him in the first place.
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* '''Implied''': Bob acts very nice to Alice, and it is occasionally hinted he might have romantic feelings for her. However, it's equally likely he's just being nice.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Despite being constantly rejected, Bob will just not let Alice go. Eventually, Bob becomes a StalkerWithACrush towards Alice who ends up telling him to stay away from her or she'll call the cops. Bob later realizes that no romantic future had even been possible for them, and that since he could also never have never ''really'' accepted being JustFriends either, they should've ended the relationship years ago.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Despite being constantly rejected, Bob will just not let Alice go. Eventually, Bob becomes a StalkerWithACrush towards Alice who ends up telling him to stay away from her or she'll call the cops. Bob later realizes that no romantic future had even been possible for them, and that since he could also never have never ''really'' accepted being JustFriends either, they should've ended the relationship years ago.
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* '''Defied''': "No, I'm not gonna be the guy that spends two seasons pining over some chick that apparently can't notice me."
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** "No, I'm not gonna be the guy that spends two seasons pining over some chick that apparently can't notice me."
** "No, I'm not gonna be the guy that spends two seasons pining over some chick that apparently can't notice me."
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** "No way. I'm '''not''' sacrificing my dignity just to get some booty."
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* '''Subverted''': Bob is gay. Therefore, he doesn't care whether or not Alice forms romantic feelings for him, that's not what he wants from her.
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** Bob is gay. Therefore, he doesn't care whether or not Alice forms romantic feelings for him, that's not what he wants from her.
** Bob is gay. Therefore, he doesn't care whether or not Alice forms romantic feelings for him, that's not what he wants from her.
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** Everyone assumes Bob is only nice to Alice because he has a crush on her. He's just a friendly NiceGuy.