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** Maria is an absolute, [[BrownNoteBeing mind-scarring]] {{Gonk}} who is also an awesome fighter. Bob is quite easy on the eyes. [[UglyGuyHotWife He is utterly smitten with her because of her fighting prowess]].
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Felt the subverted part implies a female can only be physically beautiful or physically strong to be attractive, so I added to it.
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** Bob just likes her for qualities outside of martial prowess and conventional beauty.
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* '''Subverted''': Bob just likes her for... [[BoobsOfSteel other things.]]
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* '''Subverted''': Bob just likes her for... [[BoobsOfSteel [[BuxomBeautyStandard other things.]]
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': One day, the boys want Maria for her fighting skills. The next, they want her for her BoobsOfSteel. Then, she becomes a LadyOfWar, and they want her for her fighting skills. The next day, they want her for her MurderousThighs.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': One day, the boys want Maria for her fighting skills. The next, they want her for her BoobsOfSteel.boobs. Then, she becomes a LadyOfWar, and they want her for her fighting skills. The next day, they want her for her MurderousThighs.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Tony, Joey, and Jorge, Troperville High's default {{School Idol}}s, go crazy over Maria, the school's best tennis player, so they start a hilariously violent "civil war" to decide who keeps her, much to Maria's chagrin because [[LesbianJock she's not interested in men, at all!]]
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** Tony, Joey, and Jorge, Troperville High's default {{School Idol}}s, go crazy over Maria, the school's best tennis player, so they start a hilariously violent "civil war" to decide who keeps her, much to Maria's chagrin because [[LesbianJock she's not interested in men, atall!]]all!]]
** Tony and Maria are stereotypical lovey-dovey high-school-sweetheart types even in the middle of a massive brawl. Their FallingInLoveMontage is also as stereotypical as it can be contextually speaking, other than "[[SoundtrackDissonance Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head]]" playing over them doing googly eyes at each other across a battlefield.
** Tony, Joey, and Jorge, Troperville High's default {{School Idol}}s, go crazy over Maria, the school's best tennis player, so they start a hilariously violent "civil war" to decide who keeps her, much to Maria's chagrin because [[LesbianJock she's not interested in men, at
** Tony and Maria are stereotypical lovey-dovey high-school-sweetheart types even in the middle of a massive brawl. Their FallingInLoveMontage is also as stereotypical as it can be contextually speaking, other than "[[SoundtrackDissonance Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head]]" playing over them doing googly eyes at each other across a battlefield.
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** While checking out of the hospital for the nth time she meets someone [[RuleThirtyFour who is turned on precisely by 'action girls with faces that have been smashed a thousand times']]
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** While checking out of the hospital for the nth time she meets someone [[RuleThirtyFour who is turned on precisely by 'action girls with faces that have been smashed a thousand times']]times']].
** A face smashed in a thousand times is nothing a little MagicPlasticSurgery can't fix -- and with the cash she gets by fighting, it does absolutely no dent on her funds.
** A face smashed in a thousand times is nothing a little MagicPlasticSurgery can't fix -- and with the cash she gets by fighting, it does absolutely no dent on her funds.
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* Bob finds confidence and strength attractive.
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* Bob finds confidence and strength attractive.
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'''Basic Trope''': Guy who finds an ActionGirl attractive ''because of'' said ActionGirl credential
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'''Basic Trope''': Guy who finds an ActionGirl attractive ''because of'' said ActionGirl credentialcredential.
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* '''Straight''': Bob is attracted to Maria, the world's greatest martial artist.
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* '''Straight''': Bob is attracted to Maria, [[AmazonianBeauty Maria]], the world's greatest martial artist.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob sees Maria [[PunchedAcrossTheRoom punch someone across a football field]] and falls in LoveAtFirstSight
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** Bob sees Maria [[PunchedAcrossTheRoom punch someone across a football field]] and falls inLoveAtFirstSightLoveAtFirstSight
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** Bob sees Maria [[PunchedAcrossTheRoom punch someone across a football field]] and falls in
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** Bob is a great warrior, and wants a wife [[BattleCouple who can fight by his side in battle]]. As a result, he will only marry a woman who can beat him in combat.
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** Bob is a great warrior, and wants a wife [[BattleCouple who can fight by his side in battle]]. As a result, he will only marry a woman who can beat him in combat.is a WorthyOpponent.
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** Bob fells in love with an ActionGirl, but it doesn't end well for whatever reason. This causes Bob to find {{Action Girl}}s attractive because it reminds him of her.
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** Bob fells falls in love with an ActionGirl, but it doesn't end well for whatever reason. This causes Bob to find {{Action Girl}}s attractive because it reminds him of her.
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I revised the Discussed to be more consistent.
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* '''Discussed''': "NoManWantsAnAmazon? Are they ''crazy?'' No way. There is nothing hotter than a chick who can kill me with her pinky. Heck, with the life I lead, a DamselInDistress would be the last person I'd date."
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* '''Discussed''': "NoManWantsAnAmazon? Are they ''crazy?'' No way. There is nothing hotter than a chick who can kill me someone with her their pinky. Heck, with the life I lead, a DamselInDistress would be the last person I'd date."
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** Maria eventually gets killed in a fight, leaving Bob heartbroken and depressed.
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** Bob has fond memories of Maria's bravery and strengh, and decides those good times outweigh his sorrow. When he dies he's reuinted with Maria in WarriorHeaven.
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** Bob is a great warrior, and wants a wife [[BattleCouple who can fight by his side in battle]]. As a result, he will only marry a woman who can beat him in combat.
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* '''Conversed''': "Of course some guys would be into an ActionGirl. that's half the reason that trope exists."
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* '''Conversed''': "Of course some guys would be into an ActionGirl. that's That's half the reason that the trope exists.""
* '''Implied''': "Bob, why does your little black book read like the membership list at the local women's dojo?"
* '''Implied''': "Bob, why does your little black book read like the membership list at the local women's dojo?"
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"NoManWantsAnAmazon? Are they ''crazy?'' No way. There is nothing hotter than a chick who can kill me with her pinky. Heck, with the life I lead, a DamselInDistress would be the last person I'd date."
* '''Conversed''':???"Of course some guys would be into an ActionGirl. that's half the reason that trope exists."
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** The author wants to avoid the UnfortunateImplications associated with NoGuyWantsAnAmazon.
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** The author wants to avoid the UnfortunateImplications sexism associated with NoGuyWantsAnAmazon.
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Not A Deconstruction. Neither \"puting through a wall\" nor the attack itself is realistic. It sounds more like some cliche fear
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** Maria doesn't return Bob's affections, and Bob can't take a hint. Eventually, it's the last straw, and she puts him through a wall, leaving him in a hospital and her in jail.
