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* ''Fanfic/AlwaysVisible'': The entire work carries this idea.
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Wait, I forgot that tears are the player character's defeault weapon. The eyes could be shooting Tears Of Blood but frankly I see little difference.


* ''VideoGame/FiendFolio'': The Cacophobia boss fight consists of shooting at a giant stationary doll-like entity (named Venus, "Cacophobia" appears to refer to the entire boss process) while the screen repeatedly cuts to black and reveals different patterns of eyes that fire tears at Isaac. When Venus' health is depleted, Isaac is suddenly teleported to a field of red grass and flowers, and then back to the now-emptied Boss Room. Venus/Cacophobia disappears without a trace aside from leaving behind the boss drop, and none of this is ever explained. The whole thing plays out like more of something out of a straight horror game than the general BlackComedy tone of the base ''[[VideoGame/TheBindingOfIsaac Binding of Isaac]]'' or the mod itself.

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* ''VideoGame/FiendFolio'': The Cacophobia boss fight consists of shooting at a giant stationary doll-like entity (named Venus, "Cacophobia" appears to refer to the entire boss process) while the screen repeatedly cuts to black and reveals different patterns of eyes that fire tears blood shots at Isaac. When Venus' health is depleted, Isaac is suddenly teleported to a field of red grass and flowers, and then back to the now-emptied Boss Room. Venus/Cacophobia disappears without a trace aside from leaving behind the boss drop, and none of this is ever explained. The whole thing plays out like more of something out of a straight horror game than the general BlackComedy tone of the base ''[[VideoGame/TheBindingOfIsaac Binding of Isaac]]'' or the mod itself.
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* ''VideoGame/FiendFolio'': The Cacophobia boss fight consists of shooting at a giant stationary doll-like entity (named Venus, "Cacophobia" appears to refer to the entire boss process) while the screen repeatedly cuts to black and reveals different patterns of eyes that fire tears at Isaac. When Venus' health is depleted, Isaac is suddenly teleported to a field of red grass and flowers, and then back to the now-emptied Boss Room. Venus/Cacophobia disappears without a trace aside from leaving behind the boss drop, and none of this is ever explained. The whole thing plays out like more of something out of a straight horror game than the general BlackComedy tone of the base ''[[VideoGame/TheBindingOfIsaac Binding of Isaac]]'' or the mod itself.
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* ''Fanfic/PlatinumPirate'': Given their knowledge of heliocentrism, Lucas and his Pokémon are dumbstruck by the idea that the sun can just never set in places like Enies Lobby even when things operate normally in most other places.
-->'''Lucas:''' ''[[[TwitchyEye eye twitching]] from disbelief]'' But—how—but the sun—it—why—?\\
'''Smoker:''' Like I said, the most common example of Grand Line geography. You wanna keep any sanity on these seas?\\
'''Ace:''' Don’t ask questions. Just have fun.
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* Two words - ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. The fic originally starts off as an AuthorAvatar RelationshipSue dating [[Franchise/HarryPotter Draco Malfoy]] in a gothic Hogwarts. Right aroung the bathtub scene does the story contort into a ghastly creature: Voldemort wears high heels and used to be a goth who dated Harry's owl (who is now a goth boy.) Ebony herself sleeps and tortures her way through the plot until she is given a time-travelling iPod. She is tasked with making Voldemort fall in love with her [[LoveRedeems so he could stop being evil.]] After seducing Voldemort and leading him to have sex with Hedwig in the middle of the great hall, they both travel to the future, [[spoiler: where Ebony, Draco, past!Voldemort, and Vampire have a four-way in front of Lupin and Filch for no reason. past!Voldemort then reveals that he knew about the time travelling all along, and reveals himself to be present!Voldemort. Then Snape crashes a flying car into the hall.]]

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* Two words - ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. The fic ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' originally starts off as an AuthorAvatar RelationshipSue dating [[Franchise/HarryPotter Draco Malfoy]] in a gothic Hogwarts. Right aroung around the bathtub scene does scene, the story contort contorts into a ghastly creature: Voldemort wears high heels and used to be a goth who dated Harry's owl (who is now a goth boy.) male goth). Ebony herself sleeps and tortures her way through the plot until she is given a time-travelling iPod. She is tasked with making Voldemort fall in love with her [[LoveRedeems so he could stop being evil.]] After seducing Voldemort and leading him to have sex with Hedwig in the middle of the great hall, they both travel to the future, [[spoiler: where Ebony, Draco, past!Voldemort, and Vampire have a four-way in front of Lupin and Filch for no reason. past!Voldemort then reveals that he knew about the time travelling all along, and reveals himself to be present!Voldemort. Then Snape crashes a flying car into the hall.]]
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%% * [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3582765/1/Pokemon# This]] Anime/{{Pokemon}} fic, it is random, and [[SoBadItsGood HILA]][[SurrealHumor RIOUS!]]

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%% * [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3582765/1/Pokemon# This]] Anime/{{Pokemon}} ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'' fic, it is random, and [[SoBadItsGood HILA]][[SurrealHumor RIOUS!]]
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* ''Fanfic/SeinenKakumeiUtena'', the ''Anime/RevolutionaryGirlUtena'' and ''Anime/MawaruPenguindrum'' continuation crossover, explores the original series' metaphysical elements in great depth.

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* ''Fanfic/SeinenKakumeiUtena'', the ''Anime/RevolutionaryGirlUtena'' and ''Anime/MawaruPenguindrum'' ''Anime/{{Penguindrum}}'' continuation crossover, explores the original series' metaphysical elements in great depth.
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* ''[[FanFicRecs/StarTrek Deep Water]]'' is an example of an intentional and well-done MindScrew in FanFic, by virtue of an [[SufficientlyAdvancedAlien extraordinarily]] [[LastOfHisKind complex]] [[JerkassWoobie villain]] with telepathic powers.

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* ''[[FanFicRecs/StarTrek ''[[FanficRecs/StarTrek Deep Water]]'' is an example of an intentional and well-done MindScrew in FanFic, by virtue of an [[SufficientlyAdvancedAlien extraordinarily]] [[LastOfHisKind complex]] [[JerkassWoobie villain]] with telepathic powers.



* The ''{{Series/Firefly}}'' fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Forward}}'' has this happen a few times in the "Riverthink" segments, usually when she's having her worst schizophrenic episodes. There were two entire chapters of the story that were nothing but River's POV, and more than one reviewer came out the other side asking "....I have no idea what half of that was about."

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* The ''{{Series/Firefly}}'' ''Series/{{Firefly}}'' fanfic ''Fanfic/{{Forward}}'' has this happen a few times in the "Riverthink" segments, usually when she's having her worst schizophrenic episodes. There were two entire chapters of the story that were nothing but River's POV, and more than one reviewer came out the other side asking "....I have no idea what half of that was about."



* ''FanFic/ParadigmOfUncertainty'' is a classic example, starting out relatively straightforward (as much as a fic featuring a post-graduation Literature/HarryPotter as a Film/JamesBond style superspy can be, anyway) but by the time we get to the second and especially third instalments of the [[DoorStopper door-stopping]] trilogy it's well and truly in MindScrew territory.
* [[Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil "No! I must kill the demons" he shouted. The radio said "No, John. You are the demons."]] [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And then John was a zombie.]]

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* ''FanFic/ParadigmOfUncertainty'' ''Fanfic/ParadigmOfUncertainty'' is a classic example, starting out relatively straightforward (as much as a fic featuring a post-graduation Literature/HarryPotter as a Film/JamesBond style superspy can be, anyway) but by the time we get to the second and especially third instalments of the [[DoorStopper door-stopping]] trilogy it's well and truly in MindScrew territory.
* [[Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil ''Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil'': "No! I must kill the demons" he shouted. The radio said "No, John. You are the demons."]] " [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And then John was a zombie.]]



%% * The [[spoiler:fake]] ending of Fanfic/LatiasJourney, lots and lots of symbolism and surrealistic imagery.

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%% * The [[spoiler:fake]] ending of Fanfic/LatiasJourney, ''Fanfic/LatiasJourney'', lots and lots of symbolism and surrealistic imagery.



%% * [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5r80FOVcHMY This]] WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy....um....parody-thing.
%% * The mess That Other Girl created in the FanFic/HookerVerse. A mix of multiple personality disorder, YourMindMakesItReal and EvilTwin. (And lots and lots of emotional torture.)
* VideoGame/HetaOni, an Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia horror game based on ''Ao Oni''. It includes TimeTravel, memories that don't belong to them, Italy showing signs of being TheChessmaster, a Tony-look-alike EldritchAbomination and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking an Ameriblob that keeps appearing!]]
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/UninvitedGuests Uninvited Guests]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3505858/37/Uninvited_Guests chapters 37 and 38.]] This [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Bleachfic]] been [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments bad enough from chapter one given the premise]], [[spoiler: supposedly hit its peak when [[ItMakesSenseInContext Aizen got run over by an airborne BawaBawa]]]], but as soon as [[spoiler: Aizen figured out how to become TheHero, it found deeper depths of weirdness.]] Especially his fight with Yamamoto in Chapter 38.

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%% * [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5r80FOVcHMY This]] WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy....''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy''....um....parody-thing.
%% * The mess That Other Girl created in the FanFic/HookerVerse.''Fanfic/HookerVerse''. A mix of multiple personality disorder, YourMindMakesItReal and EvilTwin. (And lots and lots of emotional torture.)
* VideoGame/HetaOni, an Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia ''VideoGame/HetaOni'', a ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'' horror game based on ''Ao Oni''. It includes TimeTravel, memories that don't belong to them, Italy showing signs of being TheChessmaster, a Tony-look-alike EldritchAbomination and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking an Ameriblob that keeps appearing!]]
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/UninvitedGuests Uninvited Guests]] ''Fanfic/UninvitedGuests'' [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3505858/37/Uninvited_Guests chapters 37 and 38.]] This [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Bleachfic]] been [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments bad enough from chapter one given the premise]], [[spoiler: supposedly hit its peak when [[ItMakesSenseInContext Aizen got run over by an airborne BawaBawa]]]], but as soon as [[spoiler: Aizen figured out how to become TheHero, it found deeper depths of weirdness.]] Especially his fight with Yamamoto in Chapter 38.



* FanFic/TheAnagramOfSuzumiyaKurumi pulls this off in a ''good'' way. Without spoiling anything, just say it involves TimeTravel, conspiracy theories, AnachronicOrder, and more crazy supernatural [[BackStory backstories]] for much of the cast than what was in canon.
* [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences He didnt want nothing to happen to Henry Freeman because Henry Freeman was John Freeman saw Combines start to run like monsters to humens and Henry Freeman and saw Henry Freeman and humens run like brave to Combines.]]

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* FanFic/TheAnagramOfSuzumiyaKurumi ''Fanfic/TheAnagramOfSuzumiyaKurumi'' pulls this off in a ''good'' way. Without spoiling anything, just say it involves TimeTravel, conspiracy theories, AnachronicOrder, and more crazy supernatural [[BackStory backstories]] for much of the cast than what was in canon.
* [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences'': He didnt want nothing to happen to Henry Freeman because Henry Freeman was John Freeman saw Combines start to run like monsters to humens and Henry Freeman and saw Henry Freeman and humens run like brave to Combines.]]



* The Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia fanfic, Fanfic/SevenLittleKillers. So, SO much.

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* The Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'' fanfic, Fanfic/SevenLittleKillers.''Fanfic/SevenLittleKillers''. So, SO much.



%% * ''FanFic/BonBonBonBonBonBon'', a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic DarkFic which starts with Lyra and Bon Bon making music on a hill by a tree. And then Bon Bon wakes up and things get weird.

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%% * ''FanFic/BonBonBonBonBonBon'', ''Fanfic/BonBonBonBonBonBon'', a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' DarkFic which starts with Lyra and Bon Bon making music on a hill by a tree. And then Bon Bon wakes up and things get weird.



%% * ''FanFic/EdAbuse'': The story turned out to be AllJustADream... not by Ed, not by Sarah, but [[spoiler:by Eddy.]]
* ''FanFic/AShadowOfTheTitans'' has the "Destiny" interlude, which breaks away from the main story to show [[spoiler: an apparent BadFuture, where an adult Jade teams up with the Demon Sorcerers and Eight Immortals to stop an ''evil'' adult Jade from releasing something called "[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Omega]]"]], followed by an in-universe message of some kind that none of the readers understand.
* WebComic/{{Homestuck}} + Bad Translator = ''[[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?44639-Buffet-breakfast-The-Buffet-Breakfast Buffet Breakfast]]''. Prepare to get your brain scrambled.
* Those caught up in ''FanFic/TheInfiniteLoops'' will occasionally do this to nonloopers for a lark.

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%% * ''FanFic/EdAbuse'': ''Fanfic/EdAbuse'': The story turned out to be AllJustADream... not by Ed, not by Sarah, but [[spoiler:by Eddy.]]
* ''FanFic/AShadowOfTheTitans'' ''Fanfic/AShadowOfTheTitans'' has the "Destiny" interlude, which breaks away from the main story to show [[spoiler: an apparent BadFuture, where an adult Jade teams up with the Demon Sorcerers and Eight Immortals to stop an ''evil'' adult Jade from releasing something called "[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Omega]]"]], followed by an in-universe message of some kind that none of the readers understand.
* WebComic/{{Homestuck}} ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' + Bad Translator = ''[[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?44639-Buffet-breakfast-The-Buffet-Breakfast Buffet Breakfast]]''. Prepare to get your brain scrambled.
* Those caught up in ''FanFic/TheInfiniteLoops'' ''Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops'' will occasionally do this to nonloopers for a lark.



* [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2609439/1/Through-the-Monitor ''Through The Monitor'']] is a doorstopper ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' fanfic (Over 475,000 words) that definitely falls under this trope. It ''starts'' with all the characters in the series disappearing for no reason, which results in random people being transformed into Sonic characters and sent to the world. ''And it somehow manages to get '''''weirder''''' from there'', complete with ''VideoGame/StarFox'' characters appearing, for some reason.

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* [[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2609439/1/Through-the-Monitor ''Through Through The Monitor'']] Monitor]]'' is a doorstopper ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' fanfic (Over 475,000 words) that definitely falls under this trope. It ''starts'' with all the characters in the series disappearing for no reason, which results in random people being transformed into Sonic characters and sent to the world. ''And it somehow manages to get '''''weirder''''' from there'', complete with ''VideoGame/StarFox'' characters appearing, for some reason.



* The crossover slash-fic ''FanFic/PeopleLikeUs'' between ''Film/Joker2019'' and ''Film/TaxiDriver'' has several scenes dedicated to exploring the damaged psyches of Arthur Fleck and Travis Bickle, but the weirdest one by far is when Travis has a dream where he has a heartfelt discussion about his relationship to Arthur... [[spoiler: with Laika the Russian space dog, who is able to talk in the dream.]] It was set up earlier in the story, but it's still so strange that it can easily turn what is supposed to be an emotional scene into {{Narm}}.

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* The crossover slash-fic ''FanFic/PeopleLikeUs'' ''Fanfic/PeopleLikeUs'' between ''Film/Joker2019'' and ''Film/TaxiDriver'' has several scenes dedicated to exploring the damaged psyches of Arthur Fleck and Travis Bickle, but the weirdest one by far is when Travis has a dream where he has a heartfelt discussion about his relationship to Arthur... [[spoiler: with Laika the Russian space dog, who is able to talk in the dream.]] It was set up earlier in the story, but it's still so strange that it can easily turn what is supposed to be an emotional scene into {{Narm}}.
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* The crossover slash-fic ''FanFic/PeopleLikeUs'' between ''Film/Joker2019'' and ''Film/TaxiDriver'' has several scenes dedicated to exploring the damaged psyches of Arthur Fleck and Travis Bickle, but the weirdest one by far is when Travis has a dream where he has a heartfelt discussion about his relationship to Arthur... [[spoiler: with Laika the Russian space dog, who is able to talk in the dream.]] It was set up earlier in the story, but it's still so strange that it can easily turn what is supposed to be an emotional scene into {{Narm}}.
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* ''Fanfic/ChaosIsVeryGood''. And it's an understatement.

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%% * ''Fanfic/ChaosIsVeryGood''. And it's an understatement.



* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4420007/1/A_very_perverted_picnic This]], [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1275875/1/Caillou_With_hair this]], and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5240751/1/Caillous_Typical_Day this]].
* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4660367/1/Percy_Jackson_and_the_KungFu_Minotaur This]] has got to be one of the strangest ''Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians'' fanfictions ever.
* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4654067/1/The_Screwed_Up_Life_of_Percy_Jackson This one's]] even odder.

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%% * [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4420007/1/A_very_perverted_picnic This]], [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1275875/1/Caillou_With_hair this]], and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5240751/1/Caillous_Typical_Day this]].
%% * [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4660367/1/Percy_Jackson_and_the_KungFu_Minotaur This]] has got to be one of the strangest ''Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians'' fanfictions ever.
%% * [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4654067/1/The_Screwed_Up_Life_of_Percy_Jackson This one's]] even odder.



* The [[spoiler:fake]] ending of Fanfic/LatiasJourney, lots and lots of symbolism and surrealistic imagery.
* ''Fanfic/ThirtyHs'': A mind screw soaked in {{Squick}} and [[RefugeInAudacity audaciousness]]. It's also [[SoBadItsGood completely epic]].
* The short ''WesternAnimation/KingOfTheHill'' vid simply titled [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DR0hNGXfZN8 hank hill]] (AKA hank hill.avi) [caps are correct]. Just... ''what''? It's not even a minute long but still manages to be screwy. '''WARNING:''' Hank's comment at the begining is a little disturbing.
** Everything else by Chris "Chriddof" Lyons, including the non-Fan Fic ones.

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%% * The [[spoiler:fake]] ending of Fanfic/LatiasJourney, lots and lots of symbolism and surrealistic imagery.
%% * ''Fanfic/ThirtyHs'': A mind screw soaked in {{Squick}} and [[RefugeInAudacity audaciousness]]. It's also [[SoBadItsGood completely epic]].
%% * The short ''WesternAnimation/KingOfTheHill'' vid simply titled [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DR0hNGXfZN8 hank hill]] (AKA hank hill.avi) [caps are correct]. Just... ''what''? It's not even a minute long but still manages to be screwy. '''WARNING:''' Hank's comment at the begining is a little disturbing.
%% ** Everything else by Chris "Chriddof" Lyons, including the non-Fan Fic ones.



* Everything on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/553503/GETALIFEALREADY this person]]'s page. (WARNING; several of those stories are {{NSFW}} and may require BrainBleach.)
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5r80FOVcHMY This]] WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy....um....parody-thing.
* The mess That Other Girl created in the FanFic/HookerVerse. A mix of multiple personality disorder, YourMindMakesItReal and EvilTwin. (And lots and lots of emotional torture.)

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%% * Everything on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/553503/GETALIFEALREADY this person]]'s page. (WARNING; several of those stories are {{NSFW}} and may require BrainBleach.)
%% * [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5r80FOVcHMY This]] WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy....um....parody-thing.
%% * The mess That Other Girl created in the FanFic/HookerVerse. A mix of multiple personality disorder, YourMindMakesItReal and EvilTwin. (And lots and lots of emotional torture.)



* The author of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6293387/1/Skin Skin]] is absolutely ''in love'' with this trope. Reality itself is perfectly fine, [[spoiler: but when Jonouchi starts having prophetic dreams...]]
** Because hey, bad enough knowing there's an EldritchAbomination in that ArtifactOfDoom, but being able to ''see'' it?

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%% * The author of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6293387/1/Skin Skin]] is absolutely ''in love'' with this trope. Reality itself is perfectly fine, [[spoiler: but when Jonouchi starts having prophetic dreams...]]
%% ** Because hey, bad enough knowing there's an EldritchAbomination in that ArtifactOfDoom, but being able to ''see'' it?



* The bizarre ''VideoGame/{{Pikmin}}'' video... parody... thing called ''8min''. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=82nkZ7W9Mgw You are not ready]].
* [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3582765/1/Pokemon# This]] Anime/{{Pokemon}} fic, it is random, and [[SoBadItsGood HILA]][[SurrealHumor RIOUS!]]
--> '''Misty''': NOOO! FAT NUMBERS AND FIVE PUDDINGS!

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%% * The bizarre ''VideoGame/{{Pikmin}}'' video... parody... thing called ''8min''. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=82nkZ7W9Mgw You are not ready]].
%% * [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3582765/1/Pokemon# This]] Anime/{{Pokemon}} fic, it is random, and [[SoBadItsGood HILA]][[SurrealHumor RIOUS!]]
%% --> '''Misty''': NOOO! FAT NUMBERS AND FIVE PUDDINGS!



* ''FanFic/BonBonBonBonBonBon'', a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic DarkFic which starts with Lyra and Bon Bon making music on a hill by a tree. And then Bon Bon wakes up and things get weird.
* This fanfiction here: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6930639/1/Fukakai-no-Unmei-%E3%81%B5%E3%81%8B%E3%81%8B%E3%81%84%E3%81%AE%E3%81%86%E3%82%93%E3%82%81%E3%81%84 Fukakai-no-Unmei-]], a DarkerAndEdgier version of ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeonExplorers of Time''. Where to even begin with this story? We start out with the human-turned pokemon main character and his partner who join a Guild [[spoiler:that is actually a brainwashing, mind-raping cult that controls everyone whom they interact with]], the cute little pokemon, [[CuteBruiser Azuri]] [[spoiler:who is actually a LabRat used for experiments.]] It gets even WORSE half-way through [[spoiler:when the main character dies]]. Please don't read the spoilers, people. Just enjoy the mind-screws.
* ''FanFic/EdAbuse'': The story turned out to be AllJustADream... not by Ed, not by Sarah, but [[spoiler:by Eddy.]]

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%% * ''FanFic/BonBonBonBonBonBon'', a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic DarkFic which starts with Lyra and Bon Bon making music on a hill by a tree. And then Bon Bon wakes up and things get weird.
* This fanfiction here: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6930639/1/Fukakai-no-Unmei-%E3%81%B5%E3%81%8B%E3%81%8B%E3%81%84%E3%81%AE%E3%81%86%E3%82%93%E3%82%81%E3%81%84 Fukakai-no-Unmei-]], a DarkerAndEdgier version of ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeonExplorers of Time''. Where to even begin with this story? We start out with the human-turned pokemon Pokémon main character and his partner who join a Guild [[spoiler:that is actually a brainwashing, mind-raping cult that controls everyone whom they interact with]], the cute little pokemon, [[CuteBruiser Azuri]] [[spoiler:who is actually a LabRat used for experiments.]] It gets even WORSE half-way through [[spoiler:when the main character dies]]. Please don't read the spoilers, people. Just enjoy the mind-screws.
%% * ''FanFic/EdAbuse'': The story turned out to be AllJustADream... not by Ed, not by Sarah, but [[spoiler:by Eddy.]]
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* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/UninvitedGuests Uninvited Guests]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3505858/37/Uninvited_Guests chapters 37 and 38.]] This [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Bleachfic]] been [[CrowningMomentOfFunny bad enough from chapter one given the premise]], [[spoiler: supposedly hit its peak when [[ItMakesSenseInContext Aizen got run over by an airborne BawaBawa]]]], but as soon as [[spoiler: Aizen figured out how to become TheHero, it found deeper depths of weirdness.]] Especially his fight with Yamamoto in Chapter 38.

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* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/UninvitedGuests Uninvited Guests]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3505858/37/Uninvited_Guests chapters 37 and 38.]] This [[Manga/{{Bleach}} Bleachfic]] been [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments bad enough from chapter one given the premise]], [[spoiler: supposedly hit its peak when [[ItMakesSenseInContext Aizen got run over by an airborne BawaBawa]]]], but as soon as [[spoiler: Aizen figured out how to become TheHero, it found deeper depths of weirdness.]] Especially his fight with Yamamoto in Chapter 38.
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* The [[spoiler:fake]] ending of FanFic/LatiasJourney, lots and lots of symbolism and surrealistic imagery.
* ThirtyHs is a mind screw soaked in {{Squick}} and [[RefugeInAudacity audaciousness]]. It's also [[SoBadItsGood completely epic]].

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* The [[spoiler:fake]] ending of FanFic/LatiasJourney, Fanfic/LatiasJourney, lots and lots of symbolism and surrealistic imagery.
* ThirtyHs is a ''Fanfic/ThirtyHs'': A mind screw soaked in {{Squick}} and [[RefugeInAudacity audaciousness]]. It's also [[SoBadItsGood completely epic]].
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* [[HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences He didnt want nothing to happen to Henry Freeman because Henry Freeman was John Freeman saw Combines start to run like monsters to humens and Henry Freeman and saw Henry Freeman and humens run like brave to Combines.]]

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* [[HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences [[Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences He didnt want nothing to happen to Henry Freeman because Henry Freeman was John Freeman saw Combines start to run like monsters to humens and Henry Freeman and saw Henry Freeman and humens run like brave to Combines.]]
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* [[DoomRepercussionsOfEvil "No! I must kill the demons" he shouted. The radio said "No, John. You are the demons."]] [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And then John was a zombie.]]

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* [[DoomRepercussionsOfEvil [[Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil "No! I must kill the demons" he shouted. The radio said "No, John. You are the demons."]] [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie And then John was a zombie.]]
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* ''FanFic/BartTheGeneral'', specificaly episode three. For example, one of the subplots involves Series/{{House}} -- Yes, ''[[Series/{{House}} that]]'' House -- in a well, calling out Milhouse (who was never in this fan series before) when a guy -- He's possibly keeping House in the well in the first place -- jumps down to have a conversation with him that's nearly incomprecencible, then lets him out. House then walks down a path to a desert while sad music plays, then finds a water tower with the letters "DB" writen in what seems to be yellow beans with eyes. While inside, a small floating thing smokes a cigar, and flys away while talking in a high pitch tone. It doesn't help that next to nobody talks clearly. Oh, and some of the names are changed for no reason and Bart-er... Berton looks like a creepy goth.

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* ''FanFic/BartTheGeneral'', ''WebAnimation/BartTheGeneral'', specificaly episode three. For example, one of the subplots involves Series/{{House}} -- Yes, ''[[Series/{{House}} that]]'' House -- in a well, calling out Milhouse (who was never in this fan series before) when a guy -- He's possibly keeping House in the well in the first place -- jumps down to have a conversation with him that's nearly incomprecencible, then lets him out. House then walks down a path to a desert while sad music plays, then finds a water tower with the letters "DB" writen in what seems to be yellow beans with eyes. While inside, a small floating thing smokes a cigar, and flys away while talking in a high pitch tone. It doesn't help that next to nobody talks clearly. Oh, and some of the names are changed for no reason and Bart-er... Berton looks like a creepy goth.

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