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** Also, Mai's drawings contain some [[Franchise/TheSlendermanMythos familiar]] [[WebOriginal/JeffTheKiller faces]].
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** Also, Mai's drawings contain some [[Franchise/TheSlendermanMythos familiar]] [[WebOriginal/JeffTheKiller [[Literature/JeffTheKiller faces]].
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* DangerTakesABackseat: [[spoiler:The ending.]]
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* DeathBySex: Becky and Luke have clearly had sex a lot, according to Jane. Then they die soon after this is revealed.
* DeathGlare: Jane and [[spoiler:especially Lucifer]] own this look to a T.
* DeathGlare: Jane and [[spoiler:especially Lucifer]] own this look to a T.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Mai. Sue, as believed by everyone in the story.
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* FinalGirl: Jane.
** Natalie in the opening as well.
** Natalie in the opening as well.
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* SexSignalsDeath: Becky and Luke have clearly had sex a lot, according to Jane. Then they die soon after this is revealed.
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** ShipperOnDeck: Peggy and Philip.
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* AnAxeToGrind: The possessed!mannequin has one.
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[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3188589/1/KAZe Kaze]], or as it's commonly spelled ''{{KAZe}}'' is an internet supernatural horror story that deals with the subjects of fear, paranoia, and helplessness. It was [[SleeperHit a surprise success]] and the author has announced a [[{{Prequel}} prequel]] and, possibly, a franchise.
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[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3188589/1/KAZe Kaze]], or as it's commonly spelled ''{{KAZe}}'' KAZe]] is an internet supernatural horror story that deals with the subjects of fear, paranoia, and helplessness. It was [[SleeperHit a surprise success]] and the author has announced a [[{{Prequel}} prequel]] and, possibly, a franchise.
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** More noticeably, the opening quote is from ''Film/FinalDestination'', and there are references to ''Film/TheExorcist'' and ''Film/{{Poltergeist}}''.
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** More noticeably, the opening quote is from ''Film/FinalDestination'', and there are references to ''Film/TheExorcist'' and ''Film/{{Poltergeist}}''.''Film/{{Poltergeist|1982}}''.
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* ForTheEvil: We aren't exactly given a reason as to why [[spoiler:Lucifer]] does what [[spoiler:he]] does. It's implied to be just for sick pleasure.
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* ForTheEvil: ForTheEvulz: We aren't exactly given a reason as to why [[spoiler:Lucifer]] does what [[spoiler:he]] does. It's implied to be just for sick pleasure.
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* AndIMustScream: Jane is often depicted as going through at lot of physical and mental pain throughout the story. [[spoiler: In fact, Lucifer seems to love doing this; psychologically torturing Mai into suicide,]] brutally torturing Kendra to near death before killing her, leaving Lily alive to bleed out from her injuries...
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* AndIMustScream: Jane is often depicted as going through at lot of physical and mental pain throughout the story. [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In fact, Lucifer seems to love doing this; psychologically torturing Mai into suicide,]] brutally torturing Kendra to near death before killing her, leaving Lily alive to bleed out from her injuries...
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* ArcWords: [[spoiler: At least [[IDieFree I can die free]]...]]
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* ArcWords: [[spoiler: At [[spoiler:At least [[IDieFree I can die free]]...]]
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--> [[spoiler: '''Lucifer'']]: ''Eternal''.
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--> [[spoiler: '''Lucifer'']]: [[spoiler:'''Lucifer'']]: ''Eternal''.
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* BigBad: It's believed to be Mai, [[spoiler: but it's really Lucifer, Mai's former entity that drove her to suicide in the first chapter]].
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* BigBad: It's believed to be Mai, [[spoiler: but [[spoiler:but it's really Lucifer, Mai's former entity that drove her to suicide in the first chapter]].
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: After finding out that there is nothing more Mai can do to help her, Jane completely breaks down into tears]].
* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler: Kendra.]]
* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler: Kendra.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After finding out that there is nothing more Mai can do to help her, Jane completely breaks down into tears]].
* BuryYourGays:[[spoiler: Kendra.[[spoiler:Kendra.]]
* BuryYourGays:
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Lily and [[spoiler: Kendra]] has their chests literally torn open. Becky is squashed flat by an out-of-control car. [[{{Squick}} That woman in the closet...]]
* DangerTakesABackseat: [[spoiler: The ending.]]
* DangerTakesABackseat: [[spoiler: The ending.]]
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Lily and [[spoiler: Kendra]] [[spoiler:Kendra]] has their chests literally torn open. Becky is squashed flat by an out-of-control car. [[{{Squick}} That woman in the closet...]]
* DangerTakesABackseat:[[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The ending.]]
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** [[spoiler: Mai]] as well, revealed in Chapter 11.
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** [[spoiler: Mai]] [[spoiler:Mai]] as well, revealed in Chapter 11.
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--> [[spoiler: '''Mai''']]: ''No genius, it's your mindscape''.
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--> [[spoiler: '''Mai''']]: [[spoiler:'''Mai''']]: ''No genius, it's your mindscape''.
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* DeathGlare: Jane and [[spoiler: especially Lucifer]] own this look to a T.
* DownerEnding: Although it's not as bad as you'd expect, it's still pretty bad: [[spoiler: Lucifer is revealed to be still inside Jane and possesses her as Xavier finds her on an abandoned road he was driving down. As they arrive in the driveway of Jane's house, Lucifer then places a knife on his throat and seemingly kills him as Jane remains helpless to stop him.]]
* DownerEnding: Although it's not as bad as you'd expect, it's still pretty bad: [[spoiler: Lucifer is revealed to be still inside Jane and possesses her as Xavier finds her on an abandoned road he was driving down. As they arrive in the driveway of Jane's house, Lucifer then places a knife on his throat and seemingly kills him as Jane remains helpless to stop him.]]
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* DeathGlare: Jane and [[spoiler: especially [[spoiler:especially Lucifer]] own this look to a T.
* DownerEnding: Although it's not as bad as you'd expect, it's still pretty bad:[[spoiler: Lucifer [[spoiler:Lucifer is revealed to be still inside Jane and possesses her as Xavier finds her on an abandoned road he was driving down. As they arrive in the driveway of Jane's house, Lucifer then places a knife on his throat and seemingly kills him as Jane remains helpless to stop him.]]
* DownerEnding: Although it's not as bad as you'd expect, it's still pretty bad:
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* {{Fingore}}: Mai, Jane, and [[spoiler: Kendra]] all have their fingernails ripped off, although Jane's seem to be just a hallucination.
* ForTheEvil: We aren't exactly given a reason as to why [[spoiler: Lucifer]] does what [[spoiler: he]] does. It's implied to be just for sick pleasure.
* ForTheEvil: We aren't exactly given a reason as to why [[spoiler: Lucifer]] does what [[spoiler: he]] does. It's implied to be just for sick pleasure.
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* {{Fingore}}: Mai, Jane, and [[spoiler: Kendra]] [[spoiler:Kendra]] all have their fingernails ripped off, although Jane's seem to be just a hallucination.
* ForTheEvil: We aren't exactly given a reason as to why[[spoiler: Lucifer]] [[spoiler:Lucifer]] does what [[spoiler: he]] [[spoiler:he]] does. It's implied to be just for sick pleasure.
* ForTheEvil: We aren't exactly given a reason as to why
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** Xavier fires two bullets at [[spoiler: Lucifer]] after he hits his BerserkButton, only for the entity to throw them right back at him with telekinesis.
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** Xavier fires two bullets at [[spoiler: Lucifer]] [[spoiler:Lucifer]] after he hits his BerserkButton, only for the entity to throw them right back at him with telekinesis.
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** At lot of what happens in that chapter qualifies; Jane sitting in front of a blan TV with no expression or dialogue, Xavier finding a trail of dry blood running from where they're standing to up the stairs, Mai's drawings, [[spoiler: and Jane overdosing on sleeping pills.]]
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** At lot of what happens in that chapter qualifies; Jane sitting in front of a blan TV with no expression or dialogue, Xavier finding a trail of dry blood running from where they're standing to up the stairs, Mai's drawings, [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and Jane overdosing on sleeping pills.]]
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* RedHerring: Mai is purposing being [[spoiler: exploited by Lucifer to trick and confuse Xavier enough to throw him off his goal.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: No, the real entity isn't Mai. It is really Lucifer, Mai's former entity that drove her insane and forced her to kill people until her eventual suicide at the beginning. Mai now serves as a "[[OurAngelsAreDifferent guardian angel]]" to Jane and is trying to prevent her from following in her footsteps.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler: No, the real entity isn't Mai. It is really Lucifer, Mai's former entity that drove her insane and forced her to kill people until her eventual suicide at the beginning. Mai now serves as a "[[OurAngelsAreDifferent guardian angel]]" to Jane and is trying to prevent her from following in her footsteps.]]
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* RedHerring: Mai is purposing being [[spoiler: exploited [[spoiler:exploited by Lucifer to trick and confuse Xavier enough to throw him off his goal.]]
* TheReveal:[[spoiler: No, [[spoiler:No, the real entity isn't Mai. It is really Lucifer, Mai's former entity that drove her insane and forced her to kill people until her eventual suicide at the beginning. Mai now serves as a "[[OurAngelsAreDifferent guardian angel]]" to Jane and is trying to prevent her from following in her footsteps.]]
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: [[spoiler: Lucifer.]]
* StringyHairedGhostGirl: Mai [[spoiler: although she isn't the evil, vengeful stereotype and actually wants to help Jane]].
** [[spoiler: Lucifer plays this straight in his disguise of Mai that you see throughout the story]].
* StringyHairedGhostGirl: Mai [[spoiler: although she isn't the evil, vengeful stereotype and actually wants to help Jane]].
** [[spoiler: Lucifer plays this straight in his disguise of Mai that you see throughout the story]].
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* StalkerWithoutACrush: [[spoiler: Lucifer.[[spoiler:Lucifer.]]
* StringyHairedGhostGirl: Mai[[spoiler: although [[spoiler:although she isn't the evil, vengeful stereotype and actually wants to help Jane]].
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Mai. Averted with Lucifer, who has no remorse for his actions]].
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Mai. Averted with Lucifer, who has no remorse for his actions]].
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--> [[spoiler: Lucifer: [[spoiler:Lucifer: (To Xavier) ''Silly detective, I am NOT Mai!'']]
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds:[[spoiler: Mai.[[spoiler:Mai. Averted with Lucifer, who has no remorse for his actions]].
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* ShoutOut: More noticeably, the opening quote is from Film/FinalDestination, and there are references to Film/TheExorcist and {{Film/Poltergeist}}. Also, Mai's drawings contain some [[TheSlendermanMythos familiar]] [[JeffTheKiller faces]].
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** More noticeably, the opening quote is fromFilm/FinalDestination, ''Film/FinalDestination'', and there are references to Film/TheExorcist ''Film/TheExorcist'' and {{Film/Poltergeist}}. ''Film/{{Poltergeist}}''.
** Also, Mai's drawings contain some[[TheSlendermanMythos [[Franchise/TheSlendermanMythos familiar]] [[JeffTheKiller [[WebOriginal/JeffTheKiller faces]].
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Mai. Averted with Lucifer, who has no remorse for his actions]].
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* ActionGirl: Jane gets a few good hits on the possessed!mannequin in Chapter 5 and easily beats Xavier in a brief sparring match in Chapter 9.
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* ActionGirl: Jane gets a few good hits on the possessed!mannequin in Chapter 5 and easily beats Xavier in a brief sparring match in Chapter 9.8.
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* ShoutOut: More noticeably, the opening quote is from Film/FinalDestination, and there are references to Film/TheExorcist and {{Film/Poltergeist}}. Also, Mai's drawings contain some [[TheSlendermanMythos familiar]] [[JeffTheKiller faces]].
** Peggy's [[Literature/SherlockHolmes nickname]] for Xavier.
** Peggy's [[Literature/SherlockHolmes nickname]] for Xavier.
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* DownerEnding: Although it's not as bad as you'd expect, it's still pretty bad: [[Spoiler: Lucifer is revealed to be still inside Jane and possesses her as Xavier finds her on an abandoned road he was driving down. As they arrive in the driveway of Jane's house, Lucifer then places a knife on his throat and seemingly kills him as Jane remains helpless to stop him.]]
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* DownerEnding: Although it's not as bad as you'd expect, it's still pretty bad: [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Lucifer is revealed to be still inside Jane and possesses her as Xavier finds her on an abandoned road he was driving down. As they arrive in the driveway of Jane's house, Lucifer then places a knife on his throat and seemingly kills him as Jane remains helpless to stop him.]]
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* AccidentalMurder: [[spoiler: Luke]] accidentally [[spoiler: runs over Becky with his out of control car in Chapter 8]].
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* AndIMustScream: Jane is often depicted as going through at lot of physical and mental pain throughout the story. [[spoiler: In fact, Lucifer seems to love doing this; psychologically torturing Mai into suicide, suicide,]] brutally torturing Kendra to near death before killing her, leaving Lily alive to bleed out from her injuries...]] injuries...
* BerserkButton: Don't speak ill of Mai in front of Xavier. Just ''don't''.
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Lily and Kendra has their chests literally torn open. Becky is squashed flat by an out-of-control car. [[{{Squick}} That woman in the closet...]]]]
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Lily and [[spoiler: Lily and Kendra Kendra]] has their chests literally torn open. Becky is squashed flat by an out-of-control car. [[{{Squick}} That woman in the closet...]]]]]]
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* DeathBySex: [[spoiler: Becky and Luke have clearly had sex a lot, according to Jane. Then they die soon after this is revealed.]]
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** [[spoiler: Bobby soon after killing Mai]].
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** Xavier could also be considered one for Jane.
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