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''If you're looking for the Twilight book by the same name, see the main Literature/{{Twilight}} article.''
''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3171776/ Eclipse]]'' is an original story authored by Serocco and published on Website/FictionPress. Set in a vaguely UrbanFantasy scenario where AllMythsAreTrue, the world as we know it is run by beings who have learned to weaponize their BattleAura in various fantastical ways, while competing with one another for supremacy over their world. Beyond the borders of Earth, numerous mythical species - ala vampires, werewolves, demons, dragons, et cetera - confront (or in some cases, perpetuate) the borderline CosmicHorrorStory lurking around the corner.
''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3171776/ Eclipse]]'' is an original story authored by Serocco and published on Website/FictionPress. Set in a vaguely UrbanFantasy scenario where AllMythsAreTrue, the world as we know it is run by beings who have learned to weaponize their BattleAura in various fantastical ways, while competing with one another for supremacy over their world. Beyond the borders of Earth, numerous mythical species - ala vampires, werewolves, demons, dragons, et cetera - confront (or in some cases, perpetuate) the borderline CosmicHorrorStory lurking around the corner.
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''If you're looking for the Twilight [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Twilight]] book by the same name, see the main Literature/{{Twilight}} article.Literature/Eclipse2007.''
''[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3171776/ Eclipse]]'' is an original story authored by Serocco and published on Website/FictionPress. Set in a vaguely UrbanFantasy scenario where AllMythsAreTrue, the world as we know it is run by beings who have learned to weaponize their BattleAura in various fantastical ways, while competing with one another for supremacy over their world. Beyond the borders of Earth, numerous mythical species- -- ala vampires, werewolves, demons, dragons, et cetera - -- confront (or in some cases, perpetuate) the borderline CosmicHorrorStory lurking around the corner.
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** Cessair, an island-country city-state, is run by a oligarchy of wealthy families who've put everyone under their direct authority rather than that of the central government (itself run by a crooked, self-centered governor who rats out anyone he considered a thorn to his authority). Your worth as a citizen largely depends on the care of your employer, and the House of Dreyvor is the only known family who actually tried to make things comfortable for the people under their command, and they're forced to flee once [[KillEmAll the entirety of the country was annihilated by Skuurnur]].
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* CrapsackWorld: The more we look into the world of ''Eclipse'', the less appealing it becomes.
* DimensionLord: Auerbach over Apocesis. He runs it like a bizarre amalgamation between a concentration camp, a prison ward, and a a rehabilitation center.
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* CrapsackWorld: The more we look into the world of ''Eclipse'', the less appealing it becomes. Many of the human-run nations are starkly divided along class, and the realms beyond the Earth are oftentimes ''much worse''.
** The People's Republic of Amestris is ostensibly a democracy, but it's largely controlled by an unelected class of bureaucrats
** The Commonwealth of Ream is a federation of city-states run by a group of warlords called Exarchs, who've set up a central government that ultimately answers to them. People were subjugated by the Exarchs, who continue to steal from the people to enrich their already-bloated wages and cities. Administrator Hasidic made things more tolerable, but the divide is still stark.
* DimensionLord: Auerbach over Apocesis. He runs it ** Cessair, an island-country city-state, is run by a oligarchy of wealthy families who've put everyone under their direct authority rather than that of the central government (itself run by a crooked, self-centered governor who rats out anyone he considered a thorn to his authority). Your worth as a citizen largely depends on the care of your employer, and the House of Dreyvor is the only known family who actually tried to make things comfortable for the people under their command, and they're forced to flee once [[KillEmAll the entirety of the country was annihilated by Skuurnur]].
** Nether is an utterly ''horrid'' hellhole. It's surrounded by a horde of ravenous {{Hellhound}}s who spew a toxic, blinding fog that masks their presence. Its main city in Morrikou is filled with a bunch of hollow, empty inhabitants who've been forcibly reprogrammed by a madman. Apocesis, an underground realm, is an enormous magma-filled crater resembling a volcano, with a central "city" that's run like abizarre deranged amalgamation between of a prison ward, a concentration camp, a prison ward, reeducation center, and a torture chamber, where beings are "domesticated" and reprogrammed by a rehabilitation center.narcissistic megalomaniac.
** The People's Republic of Amestris is ostensibly a democracy, but it's largely controlled by an unelected class of bureaucrats
** The Commonwealth of Ream is a federation of city-states run by a group of warlords called Exarchs, who've set up a central government that ultimately answers to them. People were subjugated by the Exarchs, who continue to steal from the people to enrich their already-bloated wages and cities. Administrator Hasidic made things more tolerable, but the divide is still stark.
** Nether is an utterly ''horrid'' hellhole. It's surrounded by a horde of ravenous {{Hellhound}}s who spew a toxic, blinding fog that masks their presence. Its main city in Morrikou is filled with a bunch of hollow, empty inhabitants who've been forcibly reprogrammed by a madman. Apocesis, an underground realm, is an enormous magma-filled crater resembling a volcano, with a central "city" that's run like a
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''Eclipse'' chronicles the story of Alice Sitchri, a [[ShroudedInMyth mysterious]] Succubus who [[HumanoidAbomination is not what she seems]], as she tries to reconnect with her past in a universe where she remains the most loathed and feared creature in existence.
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''Eclipse'' chronicles the story of Alice Sitchri, a [[ShroudedInMyth mysterious]] Succubus who [[HumanoidAbomination is not what she seems]], clearly isn't a normal Succubus]], as she tries to reconnect with her past in a universe where she remains the most loathed and feared creature in existence.
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''Eclipse'' is an original story authored by Serocco and published on FictionPress. Set in a vaguely UrbanFantasy scenario, the world as we know it is run by practitioners of Augury, a form of {{Magitek}} that utilizes the power of the elements, the innovation of technology, and the mystique of magic all in one package.
The majority of mankind appears to be Aura Users, in that they channel their innate energy (ala Aura) into Augury-based tech or manifest their auras in spectacular ways. ''Eclipse'' chronicles the story of Alice Sitchri, a Succubus who seems to be either loathed or feared by the majority of the population of the world and beyond.
The majority of mankind appears to be Aura Users, in that they channel their innate energy (ala Aura) into Augury-based tech or manifest their auras in spectacular ways. ''Eclipse'' chronicles the story of Alice Sitchri, a Succubus who seems to be either loathed or feared by the majority of the population of the world and beyond.
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''Eclipse'' is an original story authored by Serocco and published on FictionPress. Set in a vaguely UrbanFantasy scenario, scenario where AllMythsAreTrue, the world as we know it is run by practitioners of Augury, a form of {{Magitek}} that utilizes beings who have learned to weaponize their BattleAura in various fantastical ways, while competing with one another for supremacy over their world. Beyond the power borders of Earth, numerous mythical species - ala vampires, werewolves, demons, dragons, et cetera - confront (or in some cases, perpetuate) the elements, borderline CosmicHorrorStory lurking around the innovation of technology, and the mystique of magic all in one package.corner.
The majority of mankind appears to be Aura Users, in that they channel their innate energy (ala Aura) into Augury-based tech or manifest their auras in spectacular ways. ''Eclipse'' chronicles the story of Alice Sitchri, a [[ShroudedInMyth mysterious]] Succubus who seems [[HumanoidAbomination is not what she seems]], as she tries to be either reconnect with her past in a universe where she remains the most loathed or and feared by the majority of the population of the world and beyond.
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* CreatureHunterOrganization: The original purpose of Sanctum, chaired by Commissioner Wrigley Denecour.
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* DimensionLord: Auerbach over Apocesis.
* TheDreaded: Alice Sitchri to many people, who either loathe or fear her (often both). Very few are indifferent to her in-universe, and even then, those are mostly just one-off background characters who seem interested only in going about their own business.
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Apocesis. He runs it like a bizarre amalgamation between a concentration camp, a prison ward, and a a rehabilitation center.
* TheDreaded: AliceSitchri Sitchri, our heroine, to many people, who either loathe or fear her (often both). Very few are indifferent to her in-universe, and even then, those are mostly just one-off background characters who seem interested only in going about their own business.
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* TheEmperor: Auerbach, who's Essachan Sherruk, whose official title is Imperator of Caerleon (described as a society where soldier and civilian are one in the DimensionLord over Apocesis. He runs it like a bizarre amalgamation between a concentration camp, a prison ward, and a a rehabilitation center.same).
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** A rare case that merges with NoTrueScotsman is found in Morrikou. The more human-looking demons are "upperclassmen," while Ghouls are persecuted by Auerbach because they are insufficiently human-looking, and thus, insufficiently demonic.
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** A rare case that merges with NoTrueScotsman is found in Morrikou.Nether with the Demons. The more human-looking demons are "upperclassmen," while Ghouls are persecuted by Auerbach because they are insufficiently human-looking, and thus, insufficiently demonic. Note that the upperclassmen are just sullen, blank, and silent creatures who do nothing other than cannibalize humans - it's not a good life to have and they're largely just... empty, but Auerbach maintains that they are the "perfect" demons.
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* NGOSuperpower: Skuurnur possesses a staggering amount of paramilitary might and resources for a group without a nation. They have an intelligence department (Beyniph Osciteck), a security force (Ayew Brogguhn), a science and research division (Eraldo Supryor), a navy and marine corps (Eighinn Stossuhl), and an artillery/armory/weapon manufacturing agency (yes, all of their toys were made by Oroesius Caulhyr).
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* NGOSuperpower: Skuurnur possesses a staggering amount of paramilitary might and resources for a group without a nation. They have an intelligence department (Beyniph Osciteck), a security force (Ayew Brogguhn), (led [[TheStrategist Beyniph Osciteck]]), an army (led [[{Afrofatic}} Ayew Brogguhn]]), a science and research division (Eraldo Supryor), (led by [[MadDoctor Eraldo]] [[MadScientist Supryor]]), a navy and marine corps (Eighinn Stossuhl), (led by [[InsaneAdmiral Eighinn Stossuhl]]), and an artillery/armory/weapon manufacturing agency (yes, all of their toys were (all made by [[GunNut Oroesius Caulhyr).Caulhyr]]).
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* DeadlyEuphemism: Auerbach's apparent torture of Ghouls? He calls it ''domestication''.
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* FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire: Jameis Winstrum is a fairly pleasant fellow. The only time when he's been remotely violent was when someone attacked his girlfriend.
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* BalanceOfPower: According to Wrigley Denecour, [[AntiMagic Skuurnur]]'s very existence has prompted the establishment of a very delicate social order; every other major world power exists to counter Skuurnur's might, which is so vast that a war with them is considered suicide by the leader of one of those major powers.
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* BalanceOfPower: According to Wrigley Denecour, [[AntiMagic Skuurnur]]'s very existence has prompted the establishment of a very delicate social order; every other major world power exists to counter Skuurnur's might, which is so vast that a war with them is considered suicide by the leader of one of those major powers.
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* HeroKiller: Eighinn Stossuhl personally took out [[spoiler:Canton, Kyrie, Ramona, ''and'' Jameis]] at once.
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* WhamLine: At the very end of chapter seven, when the major conflict of the day is resolved, we get two ''very'' surprising words uttered by what was basically a side character up to this point.
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** In a setting where humans (and others) weaponize their BattleAura, we are introduced to a commander of Skuurnur, a fairly unpopular paramilitary organization that is known for being Anti-Aura. For much of chapterseven, when the major conflict of the day five, Skuurnur is resolved, portrayed as a militant paramilitary corps rooted in racism... then we get two ''very'' surprising words uttered by what was basically a side character up confirmation as to this point.
''why'' they are called Anti-Aura. Once Freesia hears it, she backs away from using her EmpathicWeapon.
-->'''Eighinn Stossuhl''':[[spoiler:Open Well, more to the point, why do you think Skuurnur is called ''[[AntiMagic Anti-Aura]]''?
** At the very end of chapter seven, when everything calms down after Petraeus backs down, we get a very alarming final two words.
-->'''Eighinn Stossuhl''': Open fire.]]
** In a setting where humans (and others) weaponize their BattleAura, we are introduced to a commander of Skuurnur, a fairly unpopular paramilitary organization that is known for being Anti-Aura. For much of chapter
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** There's really no other way to describe Skuurnur. Despite ''looking'' like knights, they're all fairly freaky looking. Eighinn Stossuhl has three eyes, all stacked vertically, which rotate from side to side. The short and stout Ayew Brogguhn has meat mallets for hands. The impossibly skinny Oroesius Caulhyr has forearms modeled after crossbows. Yuehni Siggueir has spiked pauldrons that turn into tentacles and a gaping maw encompassing his stomach. Eraldo Supryor has tentacle-like fingers and legs that are split open. Beyniph Osciteck also has split legs with silver wings at the sides and three black rods trailing down to his feet.
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** There's really no other way to describe Skuurnur. Despite ''looking'' like knights, they're all the Freiherrs are fairly freaky looking. Eighinn Stossuhl has three eyes, all stacked vertically, which rotate from side to side.looking. The short and stout Ayew Brogguhn has meat mallets for hands. The impossibly skinny Oroesius Caulhyr has forearms modeled after crossbows. Yuehni Siggueir has spiked pauldrons that turn into tentacles and a gaping maw encompassing his stomach. Eraldo Supryor has tentacle-like fingers and legs that are split open. Beyniph Osciteck also has split legs with silver wings at the sides and three black rods trailing down to his feet.
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* HumanoidAbomination: Erm... Alice is not your typical Succubus, let's just say. She has long, independent-thinking tendrils protruding from her arms, deathly pale skin, smoke-like darkness manifesting from her shadow-like clothes, razor-sharp fangs beneath her mask, a tornado-like whirlwind of smoke and shadows that engulf an entire city, and the ability to [[MoreThanMindControl indoctrinate]] people by being near them. And that's just in her human form.
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* HornyDevil: Alice is a Succubus, and a well-known one at that, with the [[LovableSexManiac attitude]] to boot.
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* BareYourMidriff: Kyrie wears an orange crop top that exposes her stomach.
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** Beatrice nu Kahranna initially comes across as a cold military leader with NoSympathy over the refugees in Cessair (because it is her job as a Valkyrie to collect the souls of the dead) and a hardline stance against Alice Sitchri. When pressed about it, Kahranna admits that she thinks Alice is responsible for the Valkyries' inability to take the souls of the dead in places where she shows up. The reason she wanted war with Skuurnur was so she could determine if these isolated incidents weren't emblematic of a ''species-wide extinction event'' (implying that a Valkyrie who can't collect souls defeats the purpose of being a Valkyrie). Eventually, she's forced to back down, authorizes her colleagues to stand at the ready in the event of a spillover, and conducts her own investigation over the soul-stealing.
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** Beatrice nu Kahranna initially comes across as a cold military leader with NoSympathy over the refugees in Cessair (because it is her job as a Valkyrie to collect the souls of the dead) and a hardline stance against Alice Sitchri. When pressed about it, Kahranna admits reveals that she thinks Alice is responsible for the Valkyries' inability to take the souls of the dead in places where she shows up. The reason she wanted war with Skuurnur was so she could determine if these isolated incidents weren't emblematic of a ''species-wide extinction event'' (implying that a Valkyrie who can't collect souls defeats the purpose of being a Valkyrie). Eventually, she's forced to back down, authorizes her colleagues to stand at the ready in the event of a spillover, and conducts her own investigation over the soul-stealing.
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* MonstrousHumanoid: Nyurei Arihiku is a tall, lean creature with jet-black skin, red outline around his skin, an EyelessFace, an elongated head, and skin-less mouth. Justified in that he is a demon, but it's still fairly jarring.
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* MonstrousHumanoid: Nyurei Arihiku is a tall, very lean creature with jet-black skin, red outline around his skin, an EyelessFace, an elongated head, and skin-less mouth. Justified in that he is a demon, but it's still fairly jarring.
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