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This one fits The Inspector Is Coming better.
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* HouseInspection: À-propos of the "Best of Equestria" awards, Applejack works her butt off trying to get her Sweet Apple Acres looking perfect by the inspection's date. Sadly, her friends and family are of little help and the judge, Blue Ribbon, appears unimpressed by the results. However, Blue Ribbon has been secretly stopping by the orchard all week, watching her work. He is so inspired by this that he can't help but award her the prize. Applejack is understandably shocked.
* TheInspectorIsComing: Blue Ribbon, who runs the Best of Equestria Awards, comes in order to inspect Sweet Apple Acres as it has been entered as a finalist in the Best Orchard in Equestria contest. Naturally, the Apple Family has to make sure they have a good harvest and the farm is in top shape by the time he arrives.
* TheInspectorIsComing: Blue Ribbon, who runs the Best of Equestria Awards, comes in order to inspect Sweet Apple Acres as it has been entered as a finalist in the Best Orchard in Equestria contest. Naturally, the Apple Family has to make sure they have a good harvest and the farm is in top shape by the time he arrives.
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* HouseInspection: TheInspectorIsComing: À-propos of the "Best of Equestria" awards, Applejack works her butt off trying to get her Sweet Apple Acres looking perfect by the inspection's date.date -- i.e., having a good harvest and putting the farm in top shape. Sadly, her friends and family are of little help and the judge, Blue Ribbon, appears unimpressed by the results. However, Blue Ribbon has been secretly stopping by the orchard all week, watching her work. He is so inspired by this that he can't help but award her the prize. Applejack is understandably shocked.
* TheInspectorIsComing: Blue Ribbon, who runs the Best of Equestria Awards, comes in order to inspect Sweet Apple Acres as it has been entered as a finalist in the Best Orchard in Equestria contest. Naturally, the Apple Family has to make sure they have a good harvest and the farm is in top shape by the time he arrives.shocked.
* TheInspectorIsComing: Blue Ribbon, who runs the Best of Equestria Awards, comes in order to inspect Sweet Apple Acres as it has been entered as a finalist in the Best Orchard in Equestria contest. Naturally, the Apple Family has to make sure they have a good harvest and the farm is in top shape by the time he arrives.
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* HouseInspection: À-propos of the "Best of Equestria" awards, Applejack works her butt off trying to get her Sweet Apple Acres looking perfect by the inspection's date. Sadly, her friends and family are of little help and the judge, Blue Ribbon, appears unimpressed by the results. However, Blue Ribbon has been secretly stopping by the orchard all week, watching her work. He is so inspired by this that he can't help but award her the prize. Applejack is understandably shocked.
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* {{Diary}}: Applejack is inspired to keep a personal journal after being shown one that belonged to her mother [[note]]And yes, this is the very first actual mention of one of Applejack's parents[[/note]].
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* EasilyForgiven: While mortified, Applejack's friends hold no grudge against her after reading her personal journal and the demeaning things she said about them.
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* BalloonBelly: Pinkie Pie is described as looking visibly stuffed after gorging herself at the pie-eating contest. [[BigEater in true Pinkie fashion though, she's still hungry.]]
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* GrowlingGut: This happens to Applejack in the third chapter.
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* GrowlingGut: This happens to Applejack Applejack's belly rumbles hungrily in the third chapter.chapter, where she's waiting until the rest of her family sits at the table to eat the delicious meal Granny Smith made for them.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: In some ways, to the {{a|nAesop}}esop of ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E4ApplebuckSeason Applebuck Season]]'', which was about learning that it's okay to ask for help. When Applejack asks her friends for their help this time, they turn out to not be very helpful. Applejack even says that she's beginning to realize why she preferred working on her own during Applebuck season after seeing how unhelpful her friends are.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: In some ways, to Of the {{a|nAesop}}esop of ''[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E4ApplebuckSeason Applebuck Season]]'', which was about learning that it's okay to ask for help. When Applejack asks her friends for their help this time, they turn out to not be very helpful. Applejack even says that she's beginning to realize why she preferred working on her own during Applebuck season after seeing how unhelpful her friends are.
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* {{Bowdlerise}}: For some odd reason, in the UK, the part where Fluttershy mentions the Vampire fruit bats is cut out. Also, all mentions of cider were changed to juice.
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* {{Bowdlerise}}: For some odd reason, in the UK, the part where Fluttershy mentions the Vampire fruit bats is cut out. Also, all mentions of cider were changed to juice.juice (cider only refers to alcoholic drinks in UK parlance).
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* Bowdlerise: For some odd reason, in the UK, the part where Fluttershy mentions the Vampire fruit bats is cut out. Also, all mentions of cider where changed to juice.
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* Bowdlerise: {{Bowdlerise}}: For some odd reason, in the UK, the part where Fluttershy mentions the Vampire fruit bats is cut out. Also, all mentions of cider where were changed to juice.
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* Bowdlerise: For some odd reason, in the UK, the part where Fluttershy mentions the Vampire fruit bats is cut out. Also, all mentions of cider where changed to juice.
