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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has [[IncurableCoughOfDeath terminal hiccups]] and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the unabridged page [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.-]
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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has [[IncurableCoughOfDeath terminal hiccups]] and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the an unabridged page for her [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.HERE]].-]
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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has [[Main/IncurableCoughOfDeath [[IncurableCoughOfDeath terminal hiccups]] and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the unabridged page [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.-]
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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has [[Main/IncurableCoughofDeath [[Main/IncurableCoughOfDeath terminal hiccups]] and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the unabridged page [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.-]
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Inspiring, emotional, and [[UnfortunateImplications conniving]] [[BreadEggsMilkSquick stories]].
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Inspiring, emotional, and [[UnfortunateImplications conniving]] [[BreadEggsMilkSquick conniving stories]].
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Hiccups are technically coughs, and coughs in fiction are signs of a terminal illness.
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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has [[Main/IncurableCoughofDeath terminal hiccups hiccups]] and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the unabridged page [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.-]
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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has [[Main/TerminalCough terminal hiccups]] hiccups and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the unabridged page [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.-]
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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has [[Main/TerminalCough terminal hiccups hiccups]] and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the unabridged page [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.-]
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Inspiring, emotional, and [[BreadMilkEggsSquick conniving]] stories.
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Inspiring, emotional, and [[BreadMilkEggsSquick [[UnfortunateImplications conniving]] stories.[[BreadEggsMilkSquick stories]].
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A story or message that is intended to be heartwarming or inspiring, but instead comes off as cloying, manipulative, and [[FridgeHorror a bit]] [[UnfortunateImplications wrong]].
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A story or message that is intended to be heartwarming or inspiring, but instead comes off as cloying, manipulative, and [[FridgeHorror a bit]] [[UnfortunateImplications wrong]].
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-->[-Fast Eddie heard about a little girl whose biggest dream was to be a troper someday, but she has terminal hiccups and her family can't afford the treatment that may save her life. So Eddie made the main unabridged page [[{{Glurge}} HERE]] for her.-]
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A story or message that is intended to be heartwarming or inspiring, but instead comes off as cloying, heavy-handed, manipulative, and [[FridgeHorror a bit]] [[UnfortunateImplications wrong]].
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A story or message that is intended to be heartwarming or inspiring, but instead comes off as cloying and heavy-handed.
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A story or message that is intended to be heartwarming or inspiring, but instead comes off as cloying cloying, heavy-handed, and heavy-handed.[[FridgeHorror a bit]] [[UnfortunateImplications wrong]].
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An unintentionally [=GLoomy=] story to URGE people to do good.
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An unintentional GLoomy story to URGE people to do good.
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An unintentional GLoomy unintentionally [=GLoomy=] story to URGE people to do good.
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TastesLikeDiabetes meets FridgeHorror.
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TastesLikeDiabetes meets FridgeHorror.FridgeHorror and/or UnfortunateImplications.
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TastesLikeDiabetes meets UnfortunateImplications.
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TastesLikeDiabetes meets UnfortunateImplications.FridgeHorror.
