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* Throughout the chapter [[https://stoneburners.wordpress.com/2015/04/06/loaded-cake/ Loaded - Cake]], when The Team end up a little bored by a lull in the action and decide to trow Olivia a birthday party.
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* Throughout the chapter [[https://stoneburners.wordpress.com/2015/04/06/loaded-cake/ Loaded - Cake]], when The Team end up a little bored by a lull in the action and decide to trow throw Olivia a birthday party.
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'''Rob:''' ''[laughing]'' Come here, you.
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'''Rob:''' ''[laughing]'' Come here, you.you.
* Throughout the chapter [[https://stoneburners.wordpress.com/2015/04/06/loaded-cake/ Loaded - Cake]], when The Team end up a little bored by a lull in the action and decide to trow Olivia a birthday party.
Miya grabbed the jaguar from her own curtained off portion of the lair and slipped into Olivia’s. A moment later, she scampered back out, minus the plushy, and joined the rest of them.
“What’d you do?” asked Chris.
“I tapped her head a bunch, then put it on her back. She was moving when I got out,” she whispered.
They heard a sharp intake of breath from Olivia’s direction. She walked out from behind the curtain with the jaguar and a smile. “Happy birthday!”
Olivia froze with a tiny squeaking sound. She ducked her head and hugged the plushy tighter to her chest, until only her eyes poked out over the jaguar’s head.
* Throughout the chapter [[https://stoneburners.wordpress.com/2015/04/06/loaded-cake/ Loaded - Cake]], when The Team end up a little bored by a lull in the action and decide to trow Olivia a birthday party.
Miya grabbed the jaguar from her own curtained off portion of the lair and slipped into Olivia’s. A moment later, she scampered back out, minus the plushy, and joined the rest of them.
“What’d you do?” asked Chris.
“I tapped her head a bunch, then put it on her back. She was moving when I got out,” she whispered.
They heard a sharp intake of breath from Olivia’s direction. She walked out from behind the curtain with the jaguar and a smile. “Happy birthday!”
Olivia froze with a tiny squeaking sound. She ducked her head and hugged the plushy tighter to her chest, until only her eyes poked out over the jaguar’s head.
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'''Olivia:''' ''[apologetically]'' I'm OK.
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'''Olivia:''' ''[apologetically]'' I'm OK.\\
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* At the end of [[http://stoneburners.wordpress.com/2014/06/02/animal-control-kittens/ Animal Control - Kittens]], when Olivia confesses to being disturbed by her encounter with [[spoiler:an out-of-control feral]]:
-->'''Rob:''' Olivia?\\
'''Olivia:''' Yeah?\\
'''Rob:''' Do you need a hug?\\
'''Olivia:''' ''[apologetically]'' I'm OK.
'''Rob:''' Olivia.\\
'''Olivia:''' Yeah?\\
'''Rob:''' Do you want a hug?\\
''[beat]''
'''Rob:''' ''[laughing]'' Come here, you.
-->'''Rob:''' Olivia?\\
'''Olivia:''' Yeah?\\
'''Rob:''' Do you need a hug?\\
'''Olivia:''' ''[apologetically]'' I'm OK.
'''Rob:''' Olivia.\\
'''Olivia:''' Yeah?\\
'''Rob:''' Do you want a hug?\\
''[beat]''
'''Rob:''' ''[laughing]'' Come here, you.
