- From what this troper remembers, Hamuko didn't really speak in...slang in the first couple chapters. Or at least not a whole lot. This troper has always wonder why she shifts from not speaking (a lot) in slang to a copious amount. Just....where were all the "y'knows" in the beginning?
- Then again it could be because she's gaining more of an identity/"self" as the fic goes on. I suppose you could just chalk it up to that, as the slang increases gradually as the fic goes on?
- The whole dream sequences with Shi is a little confusing. Shi is Death/Pharos/Ryoji...right? But who's the one that "looks after/takes care of" and needs to find a home for Shi? Is it Hamuko talking? Or is that Minato talking? Just something this troper has been wondering for while.
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