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How'd Nails know how Frank died? Nails was imprisoned inside a fountain pen at the time.
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* Nails got drawn into Jack's fountain pen shortly before Holli and Jack teleported into the Noid World. Nails only escaped the pen ''after'' Frank had been killed. So, when Lonette asks how Frank died, how'd Nails know that Holli pushed him off a building? Nails was still trapped inside the pen at the time. Really, upon seeing Frank lying dead on the pavement, Nails is genuinely flummoxed at this discovery.
* Nails got drawn into Jack's fountain pen shortly before Holli and Jack teleported into the Noid World. Nails only escaped the pen ''after'' Frank had been killed. So, when Lonette asks how Frank died, how'd Nails know that Holli pushed him off a building? Nails was still trapped inside the pen at the time. Really, upon seeing Frank lying dead on the pavement, Nails is genuinely flummoxed at this discovery.
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** Since Jack wouldn't have been able to make any money off the publication of Cool World, we can rule that out. In prison, one can't run buisness that generates income. Jack probably had to pay restitution to the victims's family as well as possible alimony. He probably lost most of what he owned (to his presumably ex-wife) due to this crime. It's possible he inherited the house owned by his parents (who probably passed away while he was incarcerated). It, along with the car, might be the only asset he has left. Jack had to politely turn down the fangirl (who invited him to hang out that night with her and her friends) who worked the comic book store explaining that he had to "get his feet back on the ground". She was dissapointed but sympathetic; immediately understanding what he meant.
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** Since Jack wouldn't have been able to make any money off the publication of Cool World, we can rule that out. In prison, one can't run buisness business that generates income. Jack probably had to pay restitution to the victims's family as well as possible alimony. He probably lost most of what he owned (to his presumably ex-wife) due to this crime. It's possible he inherited the house owned by his parents (who probably passed away while he was incarcerated). It, along with the car, might be the only asset he has left. Jack had to politely turn down the fangirl (who invited him to hang out that night with her and her friends) who worked the comic book store explaining that he had to "get his feet back on the ground". She was dissapointed disappointed but sympathetic; immediately understanding what he meant.
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** In the comic book adaptation of the movie, Sparks visited Jack and Holli right after they did the deed.
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