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* Grady feeling sorry for the Graboid when it is on the verge of metamorphosis
--> '''Grady:''' Poor thing, I mean don't you just feel a little sorry for him?
'''Earl:''' [[BluntNo No]]
--> '''Grady:''' Poor thing, I mean don't you just feel a little sorry for him?
'''Earl:''' [[BluntNo No]]
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--> '''Burt:''' You know, as I lie here I cannot help but comment: the reason I am out of 9mm rounds is because I was NOT properly briefed. And the reason for that is because this mission was NOT properly researched. If certain people had bothered to gather intelligence on the creatures before BUMBLING into the situation--\\
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'''Burt:''' ''(thoroughly fed up)'' You know, as I lie here I cannot help but comment: the reason I am out of 9mm rounds is because I was NOT properly briefed. And the reason for that is because this mission was NOT properly researched. If certain people had bothered to gather intelligence on the creatures before BUMBLING into the situation--\\
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** Then Kate excitedly starts explaining how their reproduction functions on an exponential rate.
-->'''Kate''': Two makes four, four makes eight, eight makes sixteen. . . don't you get it?\\
'''Grady''': We ''get'' it. . . we just don't ''want'' it.
-->'''Kate''': Two makes four, four makes eight, eight makes sixteen. . . don't you get it?\\
'''Grady''': We ''get'' it. . . we just don't ''want'' it.
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--->'''Grady:''' Is it gonna be TODAY?!
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'''Grady:''' Is it gonna be TODAY?!
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** Sure enough, when the explosion finally goes off, that little shack they hid behind first is ''obliterated'' by the blast wave.
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** This scene has plenty of comedy:
--> '''Grady:''' (after giving the Shrieker an MRE) Now that's not warm. How does he know to eat THAT!?
--> '''Earl:''' Uhhh, he tastes it with his tongue? See how he's dragging it across the floor? Touches anything he likes...(a second of dawning horror)...he eats it...
--> '''Burt:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint How much can it eat? Those MRE's aren't cheap, you know...]]
** And then right after:
--> '''Earl:''' (while the Shrieker is gagging) Looks like he's had enough...
--> '''Burt:''' You fed him too much, you made him sick!
--> '''Grady:''' Oh give me a break, Burt. It's your nasty food that made him sick...
--> '''Grady:''' (after giving the Shrieker an MRE) Now that's not warm. How does he know to eat THAT!?
--> '''Earl:''' Uhhh, he tastes it with his tongue? See how he's dragging it across the floor? Touches anything he likes...(a second of dawning horror)...he eats it...
--> '''Burt:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint How much can it eat? Those MRE's aren't cheap, you know...]]
** And then right after:
--> '''Earl:''' (while the Shrieker is gagging) Looks like he's had enough...
--> '''Burt:''' You fed him too much, you made him sick!
--> '''Grady:''' Oh give me a break, Burt. It's your nasty food that made him sick...
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** It's Burt's annoyed, "You dumbass!" tone of voice in his response that makes that one hilarious.
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'''Burt:''' [[BigShutUp SHUT UP]]!!
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'''Burt:''' [[BigShutUp SHUT UP]]!!UP]]!!
* Just before everything goes to hell, this little nugget comes up when Burt starts bragging about killing four Graboids during the night:
--> '''Burt''': Who's competing? I'm just saying the score's tied, that's all.
--> '''Grady''': Well, ''SON'', no it isn't cause we just caught ourselves a live one, how about that?
--> '''Burt''': A LIVE one!? How in the hell-!?
--> '''Grady''': Well that's our little trade secret. Happy hunting, Burt!
--> '''Earl''': (laughing) I'll bet that burned the skinny ass!
* Just before everything goes to hell, this little nugget comes up when Burt starts bragging about killing four Graboids during the night:
--> '''Burt''': Who's competing? I'm just saying the score's tied, that's all.
--> '''Grady''': Well, ''SON'', no it isn't cause we just caught ourselves a live one, how about that?
--> '''Burt''': A LIVE one!? How in the hell-!?
--> '''Grady''': Well that's our little trade secret. Happy hunting, Burt!
--> '''Earl''': (laughing) I'll bet that burned the skinny ass!
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--> Earl: “No! Rock rips through paper!\\
Grady: [[FlatWhat “Huh?”]]\\
Earl: “I go.”
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Earl: “I go.”
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'''Earl:''' I go
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--> Grady: "Wait a minute... paper wraps rock, doesn't it?\\
Burt: Paper ''always'' wraps rock.\\
Grady: ''Damn!''
Burt: Paper ''always'' wraps rock.\\
Grady: ''Damn!''
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-->'''Grady''': Burt, you skunk! That one was ours!
-->'''Burt''': Oh yeah, son!? I didn't see your name on it!
-->'''Burt''': Oh yeah, son!? I didn't see your name on it!
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-->'''Burt:''' No! No, no! Keep going! It's going to be big! Big!\\
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Earl: “I go.”\\
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Earl: “I go.”\\
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** Minutes later, there's Grady's realization that he's been had.
--> Grady: "Wait a minute... paper wraps rock, doesn't it?\\
Burt: Paper ''always'' wraps rock.\\
Grady: ''Damn!''
** Minutes later, there's Grady's realization that he's been had.
--> Grady: "Wait a minute... paper wraps rock, doesn't it?\\
Burt: Paper ''always'' wraps rock.\\
Grady: ''Damn!''
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--> '''Grady:''' ''(broad daylight)'' You think he's taking a leak?\\
''Scene fades into a '''star-lit''' shot of Earl and Grady still waiting for Pedro.''\\
''Scene fades into a '''star-lit''' shot of Earl and Grady still waiting for Pedro.''\\
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--> '''Grady:''' ''(broad daylight)'' ''(it's a '''star-lit''' night, both are standing up)'' You think he's taking a leak?\\
''Scene fades into a'''star-lit''' shot of Earl and Grady now sitting and still waiting for Pedro.''\\
''Scene fades into a
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* Burt tries out a very powerful rifle on one of the Shriekers, and it basically explodes, and he's all proud of himself... until they find out the bullet punched through the bastard, [[ArmorPiercingBullet a stone wall, a metal shed]], [[OneHitPolykill several barrels]], and [[GoneHorriblyRight straight into the engine of their would-be escape vehicle]]:
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* Burt tries out a very powerful rifle on one of the Shriekers, and it basically explodes, and he's all proud of himself... until they find out the bullet punched through the bastard, [[ArmorPiercingBullet [[ArmorPiercingAttack a stone wall, a metal shed]], [[OneHitPolykill several barrels]], and [[GoneHorriblyRight straight into the engine of their would-be escape vehicle]]:
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* Burt tries out a very powerful rifle on one of the Shriekers, and it basically explodes, and he's all proud of himself... until they find out the bullet punched through the bastard, a stone wall, a metal shed, several barrels, and straight into the engine of their would-be escape vehicle:
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* Burt tries out a very powerful rifle on one of the Shriekers, and it basically explodes, and he's all proud of himself... until they find out the bullet punched through the bastard, [[ArmorPiercingBullet a stone wall, a metal shed, shed]], [[OneHitPolykill several barrels, barrels]], and [[GoneHorriblyRight straight into the engine of their would-be escape vehicle:vehicle]]:
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“Huh?”]]\\
Earl: “Iwin.go.”\\
Earl: “I
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'''Burt:''' Hey it was ''my'' food!
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'''Burt:''' Hey wait a minute, it was ''my'' food!
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** Earlier in that same scene, Earl and Grady get into an argument on who should be the one to get Burt’s explosives from his truck, in which they play rock, paper, scissors on it. Grady finally wins with paper covered rock. Earl’s response?
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** Earlier in that same scene, Earl and Grady get into an argument on who should be the one to get Burt’s explosives from his truck, in which they play rock, paper, scissors on it. Grady finally wins with paper covered covers rock. Earl’s response?
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** Earlier in that same scene, Earl and Grady get into an argument in who should be the one to get Burt’s explosives from his truck, they play rock, paper, scissors on it. Grady finally wins with paper cover rock. Earl’s response?
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** Earlier in that same scene, Earl and Grady get into an argument in on who should be the one to get Burt’s explosives from his truck, in which they play rock, paper, scissors on it. Grady finally wins with paper cover covered rock. Earl’s response?
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--> Earl: “No! Rock rips through paper!*\\
Grady: [[FlatWhat “What?”]]*\\
Earl: I win.*\\
Grady: [[FlatWhat “What?”]]*\\
Earl: I win.*\\
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paper!\\
Grady: [[FlatWhat“What?”]]*\\
“What?”]]\\
Earl:I “I win.*\\
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Grady: [[FlatWhat
Earl:
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** Earlier in that same scene, Earl and Grady get into an argument in who should be the one to get Burt’s explosives from his truck, they play rock, paper, scissors on it. Grady finally wins with paper cover rock. Earl’s response?
--> Earl: “No! Rock rips through paper!*\\
Grady: [[FlatWhat “What?”]]*\\
Earl: I win.*\\
--> Earl: “No! Rock rips through paper!*\\
Grady: [[FlatWhat “What?”]]*\\
Earl: I win.*\\
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** Even better, when the rest of the group takes cover behind a nearby building, he ''runs right past them'' .
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** Even better, when the rest of the group takes cover behind a nearby building, he ''runs right past them'' .them''.
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** That same Graboid comes after them. How do we know it's the same one? [[TheCrocIsTicking you can hear the radio]].
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** That same Graboid comes after them. How do we know it's the same one? [[TheCrocIsTicking you You can hear the radio]].
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** In the same scene; Burt blaming his marital problems on [[WhyWeAreBummedCommunismFell the fall of the Soviet Union]].
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** In the same scene; scene, Burt blaming his marital problems on [[WhyWeAreBummedCommunismFell the fall of the Soviet Union]].
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* The group's reaction to Burt coming. Their seismic radar starts reacting to some huge tremors, making the heroes think a giant Graboid or some such is heading their way, and grab their guns for protection. Then they see that it's Burt's fully-stocked truck of ballistics.
-->'''Earl:''' It's no graboid. It's somethin' ''more'' dangerous!
-->'''Earl:''' It's no graboid. It's somethin' ''more'' dangerous!
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'''Burt:''' Hey it was ''my'' food!\\
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'''Burt:''' Hey it was ''my'' food!\\food!
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-->'''Burt:''' "I didn't ''know!'' How could I have ''known!?'' We were supposed to be hunting Graboids, I wanted maximum penetration!"
-->'''Earl:''' "Well, you ''got'' it."
-->'''Earl:''' "Well, you ''got'' it."
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-->'''Burt:''' "I I didn't ''know!'' How could I have ''known!?'' We were supposed to be hunting Graboids, I wanted maximum penetration!"
penetration!
-->'''Earl:'''"Well, Well, you ''got'' it."
-->'''Earl:'''
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-->'''Grady:''' "Is Is it gonna be TODAY?!"TODAY?!
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'''Shrieker:''' '''Makes a noise that sounds suspiciously like chortling.'''\\
'''Burt:''' SHUT UP!!
'''Burt:''' SHUT UP!!
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'''Shrieker:''' '''Makes ('''Makes a noise that sounds suspiciously like chortling.'''\\
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'''Burt:''' [[BigShutUp SHUTUP!!UP]]!!
'''Burt:''' [[BigShutUp SHUT
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--> Grady: Burt, you skunk! That one was ours!
--> Burt: Oh yeah, son!? I didn't see your name on it!
--> Burt: Oh yeah, son!? I didn't see your name on it!
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--> '''Grady:''' You mean they've been acting so smart because they're so stupid???
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--> '''Grady:''' You mean they've been acting so smart because they're so stupid???stupid?
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** Later, that same Graboid comes after them. How do we know it's the same one? [[TheCrocIsTicking you can hear the radio]].
** Later Burt kills it and Brady is angered that [[AnimalNemesis he stole their kill]].
** Later Burt kills it and Brady is angered that [[AnimalNemesis he stole their kill]].
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** Later, that That same Graboid comes after them. How do we know it's the same one? [[TheCrocIsTicking you can hear the radio]].
**Later Later, Burt kills detonates it and Brady Grady is angered that [[AnimalNemesis he stole their kill]].kill]].
--> Grady: Burt, you skunk! That one was ours!
--> Burt: Oh yeah, son!? I didn't see your name on it!
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--> Grady: Burt, you skunk! That one was ours!
--> Burt: Oh yeah, son!? I didn't see your name on it!
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** There's a hill behind the car. How far did the bullet make it through that?
