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'''Pumbaa''': Oh.\\
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'''Pumbaa''': Oh.\\
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'''Pumba''': Okay. ''[holds his tail]''\\
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"'Pumbaa"': Oh.\\
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'''Timon''': I think you're missing the basic point here.
"'Pumbaa"': Oh.
"'Pumbaa"': Oh.
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'''Timon''': I think you're missing the basic point here.
here.\\
"'Pumbaa"': Oh.\\
"'Pumbaa"': Oh.\\
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The quote repeats what's being said in the example. It's redundant.
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--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
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* Timon demands a flock of spotted thick-knees to stop eating all the worms, only for one of the birds to bite him on the nose. Meanwhile, Pumbaa unsuccessfully tries to scare the spotted thick-knees away, and ends up having a whole flock perch on his back.
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* During Kiara's hunting lessons, Kovu rolls his eyes and sighs as he can hear Kiara sneaking up behind him, counting down from three as he casually ducks from her attempting to pounce on him.
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* During Kiara's hunting lessons, Kovu rolls his eyes and sighs as he can hear Kiara [[WithCatlikeTread sneaking up behind him, him]], counting down from three as he casually ducks from her attempting to pounce on him.
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* When Kiara leaps onto the crocodile's head forcing its jaws to clamp shut just before it could eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a look in its eyes that says "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Really?]]".
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* When Kiara leaps onto the crocodile's head forcing snout clamping its jaws to clamp shut just before it could eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a look in its eyes that says "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Really?]]".
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* During Kiara's hunting lessons, Kovu rolls his eyes and sighs as he can hear Kiara sneaking up behind him, counting down from three as he casually ducks from her attempting to pounce on him.
-->'''Kiara''': You could hear me. Oh\\
'''Kovu''': Only ''a lot''.
-->'''Kiara''': You could hear me. Oh\\
'''Kovu''': Only ''a lot''.
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* When Kiara leaps onto the crocodile's head forcing its jaws to clamp shut just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a look in its eyes that says "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Really?]]".
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* When Kiara leaps onto the crocodile's head forcing its jaws to clamp shut just when it's about to before it could eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a look in its eyes that says "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Really?]]".
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* When Kiara leaps onto the crocodile's head just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a look in its eyes that says "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Really?]]".
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* When Kiara leaps onto the crocodile's head forcing its jaws to clamp shut just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a look in its eyes that says "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Really?]]".
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* When Kiara lands on the crocodile's head just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Oh, come on!]]" look in its eyes.
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* When Kiara lands on leaps onto the crocodile's head just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a look in its eyes that says "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Oh, come on!]]" look in its eyes.Really?]]".
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* When Kiara lands on the crocodile's head just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a "[[YouveGotToBeKiddingMe Oh, come on!]]" look in its eyes.
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* When Kiara lands on the crocodile's head just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a "[[YouveGotToBeKiddingMe "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Oh, come on!]]" look in its eyes.
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* When Kiara lands on the crocodile's head just when it's about to eat Kovu, you can briefly see that it has a "[[YouveGotToBeKiddingMe Oh, come on!]]" look in its eyes.
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* After Kiara goes off to play, Nala starts to playfully tease Simba that Kiara is just like him when he was young. Simba doesn't deny this and pointed out the trouble they get themselves into by using the word "we". Nala playfully pins Simba and tells him that he means the trouble ''he'' put them in. Knowing that Nala is right, Simba chuckles at these words.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
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* "HEY, YOU! HOW DARE YOU SAVE THE KING'S DAUGHTER?!" - Rafiki may be acting a little weird and crazy, but when you realise that he's ''successfully pulling off Mufasa's plan and no-one suspects '''anything''' because he's normally that weird and crazy'', it becomes ''hilarious!''
* After Kiara goes off to play, Nala starts to playfully tease Simba that Kiara is just like him when he was young. Simba doesn't deny this and pointed out the trouble they get themselves into by using the word "we". Nala playfully pins Simba and tells him that he means the trouble ''he'' put them in. Knowing that Nala is right, Simba chuckles at these words.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
* After Kiara goes off to play, Nala starts to playfully tease Simba that Kiara is just like him when he was young. Simba doesn't deny this and pointed out the trouble they get themselves into by using the word "we". Nala playfully pins Simba and tells him that he means the trouble ''he'' put them in. Knowing that Nala is right, Simba chuckles at these words.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
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* "HEY, YOU! HOW DARE YOU SAVE THE KING'S DAUGHTER?!" - Rafiki may be acting a little weird and crazy, but when you realise that he's ''successfully pulling off Mufasa's plan and no-one suspects '''anything''' because he's normally that weird and crazy'', it becomes ''hilarious!''
* After Kiara goes off to play, Nala starts to playfully tease Simba that Kiara is just like him when he was young. Simba doesn't deny this and pointed out the trouble they get themselves into by using the word "we". Nala playfully pins Simba and tells him that he means the trouble ''he'' put them in. Knowing that Nala is right, Simba chuckles at these words.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.''hilarious!''
* After Kiara goes off to play, Nala starts to playfully tease Simba that Kiara is just like him when he was young. Simba doesn't deny this and pointed out the trouble they get themselves into by using the word "we". Nala playfully pins Simba and tells him that he means the trouble ''he'' put them in. Knowing that Nala is right, Simba chuckles at these words.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
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* The mere fact that Simba was a troublemaking, mischievous cub in his younger days and ended up becoming a major PapaWolf mixed with OverprotectiveDad when he himself has a kid.
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* The mere fact that Simba was a troublemaking, mischievous cub in his younger days and ended up becoming a major PapaWolf mixed with OverprotectiveDad when he himself has a kid.
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* During the final battle, Timon and Pumbaa find themselves being chased by four Outsiders. When they get cornered, Timon ''cocks Pumbaa's tail like a shotgun and points it at the lionesses.''
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* During the final battle, Timon and Pumbaa find themselves being chased by four Outsiders. When they get cornered, Timon ''cocks Pumbaa's tail like a shotgun and points it at the lionesses.'''' The kicker? ''[[NotSoAboveItAll It actually works!]]''
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-->'''Rafiki:''' It is a girl.\\
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'''Rafiki:''' Hehe. It is a girl.\\
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[''Title Card'']
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[''Title Card'']Card and dramatic note'']
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* Timon and Pumbaa's reaction when told the new cub is a girl--they screech and ''[[{{Fainting}} faint]]''.
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* Timon and Pumbaa's reaction when told the new cub is a girl--they screech and ''[[{{Fainting}} faint]]''. The fact that it caps off the title sequence is icing on the cake.
-->'''Rafiki:''' It is a girl.\\
'''Timon:''' Right, a gir-\\
'''Timon & Pumpa:''' GIRL?! Oi... [''faints'']\\
[''Title Card'']
-->'''Rafiki:''' It is a girl.\\
'''Timon:''' Right, a gir-\\
'''Timon & Pumpa:''' GIRL?! Oi... [''faints'']\\
[''Title Card'']
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* Timon and Pumbaa's reaction when told the new cub is a girl--they screech and ''faint''.
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* Timon and Pumbaa's reaction when told the new cub is a girl--they screech and ''faint''.''[[{{Fainting}} faint]]''.
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* When Simba prepares to scold Kiara for deliberately disobeying him, Nala pauses and gives him a knowing smile -- clearly remembering the time Mufasa scolded him for the hyena incident in the first movie, and rubbing in her earlier comment that Kiara is just as mischievous, disobedient, and headstrong as he was when he was a cub.
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-->'''Rafiki:''' What? Kovu...Kiara...together? ''This'' is the plan? [[SuddenlyShouting ARE YOU CRAZY?!]] This will never work! Oh, Mufasa, you been up there too long. [[{{Pun}} Your head is in the clouds!]] ''[wind blows hard at Rafiki]'' Okay, okay, okay! ''Alright! OKAY!'' I don't think this is gonna work, but I trust you. I just hope you know what you are doing!
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-->'''Rafiki:''' What? Kovu...Kiara... Kiara... together? ''This'' is the plan? [[SuddenlyShouting ARE YOU CRAZY?!]] This will never work! Oh, Mufasa, you been up there too long. [[{{Pun}} Your head is in the clouds!]] ''[wind blows hard at Rafiki]'' Okay, okay, okay! ''Alright! OKAY!'' I don't think this is gonna work, but I trust you. I just hope you know what you are doing!
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* Rafiki upon finding out Kovu's rescuing Kiara:
-->'''Rafiki:''' Hey, you! [[SarcasmMode How dare you]] ''[[SarcasmMode save the king's daughter?]]''
-->'''Rafiki:''' Hey, you! [[SarcasmMode How dare you]] ''[[SarcasmMode save the king's daughter?]]''
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* "HEY, YOU! HOW DARE YOU SAVE THE KING'S DAUGHTER!" - Rafiki may be acting a little weird and crazy, but when you realise that he's ''successfully pulling off Mufasa's plan and no-one suspects '''anything''' because he's normally that weird and crazy'', it becomes ''hilarious!''
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* "HEY, YOU! HOW DARE YOU SAVE THE KING'S DAUGHTER!" DAUGHTER?!" - Rafiki may be acting a little weird and crazy, but when you realise that he's ''successfully pulling off Mufasa's plan and no-one suspects '''anything''' because he's normally that weird and crazy'', it becomes ''hilarious!''
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* "HEY, YOU! HOW DARE YOU SAVE THE KING'S DAUGHTER!" - Rafiki may be acting a little weird and crazy, but when you realise that he's ''successfully pulling off Mufasa's plan and no-one suspects '''anything''' because he's normally that weird and crazy'', it becomes ''hilarious!''
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* "HEY, YOU! HOW DARE YOU SAVE THE KING'S DAUGHTER!" - Rafiki may be acting a little weird and crazy, but when you realise that he's ''successfully pulling off Mufasa's plan and no-one suspects '''anything''' because he's normally that weird and crazy'', it becomes ''hilarious!''''hilarious!''
* After Kiara goes off to play, Nala starts to playfully tease Simba that Kiara is just like him when he was young. Simba doesn't deny this and pointed out the trouble they get themselves into by using the word "we". Nala playfully pins Simba and tells him that he means the trouble ''he'' put them in. Knowing that Nala is right, Simba chuckles at these words.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.
* After Kiara goes off to play, Nala starts to playfully tease Simba that Kiara is just like him when he was young. Simba doesn't deny this and pointed out the trouble they get themselves into by using the word "we". Nala playfully pins Simba and tells him that he means the trouble ''he'' put them in. Knowing that Nala is right, Simba chuckles at these words.
--> '''Nala:''' (''chuckles'') Simba, who does she remind you of, hmm?
--> '''Simba:''' (''clueless'') Huh? What? Who?
--> '''Nala:''' She's just like you were when you were young.
--> '''Simba:''' Exactly. Do you realize the dangers we put ourselves in?
--> ''(Nala playfully pins Simba and puts him on his back)''
--> '''Nala:''' You mean the dangers ''you'' put us in.
--> ''(Simba chuckles at these words as Nala warmly embraces him)''
--> '''Nala:''' Hmph. She'll be fine.