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** Immediately after the above, while Marina continues to nuzzle Pearl, the latter appears to have a mini tantrum as she struggles to get out from under Marina.
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** How do Off The Hook enter the fray? A transport helicopter carrying a large platform that appears to function as a portable stage, accompanied by a ''fleet'' of smaller helis carrying stadium speakers, all of which are blaring ''Nasty Majesty'' loud enough to be heard from over a mile away.
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** How do Off The Hook enter the fray? reach Eight's location? A transport helicopter carrying a large platform that appears to function as a portable stage, accompanied by a ''fleet'' of smaller helis carrying stadium speakers, all of which are blaring ''Nasty Majesty'' loud enough to be heard from over a mile away.
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-->''Agent 8 looks at him with a squinty-eyed, "Are you for real?" face.''
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-->''Agent 8 looks at him with a squinty-eyed, "Are you for real?" serious?" face.''
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** How do Off The Hook enter the fray? A transport helicopter carrying a large platform that appears to function as a portable stage, accompanied by a ''fleet'' of smaller helis carrying stadium speakers, all of which are blaring ''Nasty Majesty'' loud enough to be heard from over a mile away.
** When Marina states that they can breathe easy, you can briefly see the gears turning in Pearl's head, at which point she shoves Marina aside to resume her rap-off with Cap'n Cuttlefish, while Marina gives a surprised[=/=]cautious look that suggests "breathing easily" isn't an option anymore. And while Agent 8 doesn't visibly express themselves, the subtle DoubleTake they make when Cuttlefish starts rapping suggests they weren't expecting it either.
** When Marina states that they can breathe easy, you can briefly see the gears turning in Pearl's head, at which point she shoves Marina aside to resume her rap-off with Cap'n Cuttlefish, while Marina gives a surprised[=/=]cautious look that suggests "breathing easily" isn't an option anymore. And while Agent 8 doesn't visibly express themselves, the subtle DoubleTake they make when Cuttlefish starts rapping suggests they weren't expecting it either.
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-->''Agent 8 looks at him with a squinty-eyed, "What the hell?" face.''
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-->''Agent 8 looks at him with a squinty-eyed, "What the hell?" "Are you for real?" face.''''
** Cuttlefish's reactions to Pearl's "contribution" are hilarious:
*** When she leaps from the transport helicopter and lands next to Agent 8 on the platform it's carrying, Cuttlefish briefly Double-Takes at the suddenness of her arrival.
*** When Pearl brings out the Princess Cannon (a Killer Wail that she, erm, "personalized"), Cuttlefish reels backward, standing on one leg with his cane behind him for stability.
*** After recovering, Cuttlefish waves his hands in the air and hops from one leg to the other, apparently attempting to dance.
*** When she fires the Cannon, he tries to reel again, but falls backwards and lands on his rear.
** Cuttlefish's reactions to Pearl's "contribution" are hilarious:
*** When she leaps from the transport helicopter and lands next to Agent 8 on the platform it's carrying, Cuttlefish briefly Double-Takes at the suddenness of her arrival.
*** When Pearl brings out the Princess Cannon (a Killer Wail that she, erm, "personalized"), Cuttlefish reels backward, standing on one leg with his cane behind him for stability.
*** After recovering, Cuttlefish waves his hands in the air and hops from one leg to the other, apparently attempting to dance.
*** When she fires the Cannon, he tries to reel again, but falls backwards and lands on his rear.
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-->'''Marie''': You've never heard of me? For [[JustForPun eel]]?
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-->'''Marie''': You've never heard of me? For [[JustForPun [[{{Pun}} eel]]?
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* The fact that the ultimate reward for defeating the BonusBoss and the single most difficult challenge in the game, is a ''[[AndYourRewardIsClothes golden toothpick]]'' is mildly amusing. The fact that said toothpick is shaped like [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Takoyaki a Takoyaki]] (a fried ball of minced octopus meat) is substantially funnier, due to the double whammy of Agent 8 having nearly been minced during the story and the fact that they probably [[ThatOneBoss feel like a fried octopus ball after the]] {{Superboss}} is done with them.
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* The fact that the ultimate reward for defeating the BonusBoss {{Superboss}} and the single most difficult challenge in the game, is a ''[[AndYourRewardIsClothes golden toothpick]]'' is mildly amusing. The fact that said toothpick is shaped like [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Takoyaki a Takoyaki]] (a fried ball of minced octopus meat) is substantially funnier, due to the double whammy of Agent 8 having nearly been minced during the story and the fact that they probably [[ThatOneBoss feel like a fried octopus ball after the]] {{Superboss}} is done with them.
