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*** Of course, this only solves half the problem - Adrien turns up as himself soon after, and Juleka has to distract him and Plagg so she can head off Ladybug and explain that she needed Marinette.
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*** Of course, this only solves half the problem - problem, because Juleka doesn't have a mobile number for Ladybug. So when Adrien turns up as himself soon after, and Juleka has to distract him and Plagg so she can head off Ladybug at her window and explain that she only needed Marinette.
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* When Juleka arrives the bakery for Christmas Eve, visibly exhausted:
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* When Juleka arrives at the bakery for Christmas Eve, visibly exhausted:
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* In chapter 11, Juleka pulls Chat Noir into her hiding place during and Akuma attack right when he's about to change back. As he realises what's happening, he says "[[OhCrap Oh]] [[CurseCutShort sh]]-", only to finish as "[[GoshDangItToHeck Shoot]]". causing Juleka to burst out laughing.
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* In chapter 11, Juleka pulls Chat Noir into her hiding place during and an Akuma attack right when he's about to change back. As he realises what's happening, he says "[[OhCrap Oh]] [[CurseCutShort sh]]-", only to finish as "[[GoshDangItToHeck Shoot]]". Shoot]]", causing Juleka to burst out laughing.
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* Adrien and Marinette's complete lack of subtlety about how their relationship has changed post-reveal: not only is Marinette talking to him normally enough to arouse Alya, Nino and Rose's attention, but Adrien keeps making Chat Noir-style puns and even calls Marinette "My lady" out of habit at one point.
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* Adrien and Marinette's complete lack of subtlety about how their relationship has changed post-reveal: not only is Marinette talking to him normally enough to arouse Alya, Nino and Rose's attention, suspicions, but Adrien keeps making Chat Noir-style puns and even calls Marinette "My lady" out of habit at one point.
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* Nino {{playing sick}} to get Adrien and Marinette out of a classroom after being alerted to an akuma attack downtown - in particular, his hammy insistence that ''only'' Adrien and Marinette can take him to the nurse, and Adrien almost botching the ruse by picking up Nino without Marinette's help and having to fake dropping him at one end. If the glamour weren't in place, it's likely this would arouse a lot more suspicion than the constant bathroom excuses earlier in the story.
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* Nino {{playing sick}} to get Adrien and Marinette out of a classroom after being alerted to an akuma attack downtown - in particular, his hammy insistence that ''only'' Adrien and Marinette can take him to the nurse, and Adrien almost botching the ruse by picking up Nino without Marinette's help and having to fake dropping deliberately drop him at one end. If the glamour weren't in place, it's likely this would arouse a lot more suspicion than the constant bathroom excuses earlier in the story.
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** The fact that Nino's lunch consists of nothing but [[MemeticMutation potatoes]] - it's mentioned in the narration seven times before Tikki comments on it.
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** The fact that Nino's lunch consists of nothing but [[MemeticMutation potatoes]] - it's mentioned in the narration seven times before Tikki comments on it.it.
* Nino {{playing sick}} to get Adrien and Marinette out of a classroom after being alerted to an akuma attack downtown - in particular, his hammy insistence that ''only'' Adrien and Marinette can take him to the nurse, and Adrien almost botching the ruse by picking up Nino without Marinette's help and having to fake dropping him at one end. If the glamour weren't in place, it's likely this would arouse a lot more suspicion than the constant bathroom excuses earlier in the story.
* Nino {{playing sick}} to get Adrien and Marinette out of a classroom after being alerted to an akuma attack downtown - in particular, his hammy insistence that ''only'' Adrien and Marinette can take him to the nurse, and Adrien almost botching the ruse by picking up Nino without Marinette's help and having to fake dropping him at one end. If the glamour weren't in place, it's likely this would arouse a lot more suspicion than the constant bathroom excuses earlier in the story.
